Revenge III

LBTFan13 · **on:** February 25, 2010, 01:43:28 AM

Well this is it. The final part of the Revenge trilogy! There has been a lot of feedback for the Revenge series, and I am really happy that it is as popular as it is. This starts the update thread for the story. Once the link is ready, I will post it up here and then we will go from there.

So consider this the hype post. This is hopefully going to be an amazing story, so get ready

EDIT: Here is the link to the story:

LBT Revenge III

Serris · **Reply #1 on:** February 25, 2010, 02:08:19 AM

I cannot wait. I wish you luck!

The Great Valley Guardian · **Reply #2 on:** February 25, 2010, 02:52:24 AM

This is just too epic for words! I'm going to keep my eyes open for this one!

LBTFan13 · **Reply #3 on:** February 25, 2010, 09:21:42 AM

The prologue is up! Check it out in the link below!

Prologue

Cancerian Tiger · **Reply #4 on:** February 25, 2010, 12:12:08 PM

Damn, you're fast

! I really can't wait, either. This is gonna kick eggstealer a**

!

LBTFan13 · **Reply #5 on:** February 25, 2010, 12:13:14 PM

I love your reaction

Well I had this prologue idea in my mind for a while now, and I figured I should write it out before I lose it. Glad you are as excited as I am.

Serris · **Reply #6 on:** February 25, 2010, 12:29:41 PM

Oh, it is getting off to a good start.

Why do I have the feeling that Strut is going to be an ally in this case?

LBTFan13 · **Reply #7 on:** February 26, 2010, 11:45:16 AM

I figured before I leave for spring break I would give you guys something.

Chapter 1 is up!

It is short I know, but it is still a fun chapter. You'll see what I mean. I know there is no "action", but I figured that the last two stories have had a frantic first chapter, or something terrible happens. This time, I wanted to change it up, make it a little more happy.

So follow the link below and tell me what you guys think!
Chapter 1

Cancerian Tiger · **Reply #8 on:** February 27, 2010, 01:24:34 AM

Hehe, I like it

!

A burnin' question you've left us in the author's notes at the end: What will it take for Cera to forgive her father? Why do I have a funny feeling somethin' bad is about to happen

?

The Great Valley Guardian · **Reply #9 on:** February 27, 2010, 02:42:16 AM

This chapter was rather sweet. Although I'm surprised that Cera didn't even turn around to shout at her father, talk about a cold shoulder.

LBTFan13 · **Reply #10 on:** March 15, 2010, 07:56:33 PM

Hey guys. Just as an unofficial update, I am still working on Revenge III. College has become very hectic lately so it has gotten a tad harder to actually sit down and write. Just so you know that I have not given up on this story

Cancerian Tiger · **Reply #11 on:** March 16, 2010, 10:14:35 AM

Oh, good! I was getting worried

.

LBTFan13 · **Reply #12 on:** March 23, 2010, 12:01:29 PM

OFFICIAL UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chapter 2 is now complete and up for your reading pleasure. Again, this chapter is more to set up for future events, so no real "action" per say. I hope you guys enjoy this chapter and let me know what you think!

Chapter 2

Serris · **Reply #13 on:** March 23, 2010, 01:20:01 PM

Wow looks like Strut gets to be a hero this time.

I wonder if the fast-biters will be heroes or villains.

DarkHououmon · **Reply #14 on:** March 23, 2010, 02:09:57 PM

The link isn't typed correctly. I had to manually change it in the address bar in order for me to get to the page.

LBTFan13 · **Reply #15 on:** March 23, 2010, 02:20:50 PM

Whoops! No idea how that happened. Thanks for letting me know. It's fixed now.

Cancerian Tiger · **Reply #16 on:** March 24, 2010, 10:28:55 AM

Nice pre-action chapter

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LBTFan13 · **Reply #17 on:** April 01, 2010, 03:36:08 PM

OFFICIAL UPDATE: Chapter 3 has been uploaded for Revenge III, and unfortunately it doesn't fare well for some of our heroes. I'm not going to spoil for whom, so you will just have to read and find out. This has much more action than the previous chapters, and I enjoyed writing it.

As always, let me know what you think here!

Chapter 3

Dima02 · **Reply #18 on:** April 01, 2010, 03:59:34 PM

Ooh, I can't wait to see what happens next.

My expression while reading the story:

Cancerian Tiger · **Reply #19 on:** April 01, 2010, 04:57:44 PM

*Tries to type with adrenaline-shaken hands*

Aw, poor Mr. Threehorn. Now I wanna see that Ozzie get ripped to shreds! MWAHAHAHAHA!

I know, I know. Several more chapters before he gets a whoopin'

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