The Tri-Foundation Tournament

Cyberlizard · **Reply #560 on:** October 05, 2006, 09:40:59 AM

"And I'm in charge of that." says the red headed teenager, trying to hide the rather guilty look on his face.

f-22 "raptor" ace · **Reply #561 on:** October 05, 2006, 09:51:41 AM

Well Lt. what is your name? I'm general frank viewalker.

Threehorn · **Reply #562 on:** October 05, 2006, 10:09:18 AM

"Indeed you are Lt. Tanner" Tuvok replied to Tanner.

Cyberlizard · **Reply #563 on:** October 05, 2006, 10:11:31 AM

"Well, yeah. Both Lt. and Dr. Tanner Colvin." says Tanner.

Nick22 · **Reply #564 on:** October 05, 2006, 11:07:19 AM

(one question. Isn't Viewalker at Stripetail's palace? You made no mention of Viewalker and his crw leasving..)

Threehorn · **Reply #565 on:** October 05, 2006, 11:42:52 AM

I guess they left without anyone noticing :S I am not sure)

Nick22 · **Reply #566 on:** October 05, 2006, 11:50:17 AM

Rule of thumb f-22 is you have to be clear when you are doing something , such as leaving a place You can't just pop up in a new area. Otherwise that throws the other rpers off..)

Cyberlizard · **Reply #567 on:** October 05, 2006, 12:40:37 PM

(ex/ Me. I am completley confused about how your character just happened to spontaneously teleport to the coffee shop. :huh: )

Threehorn · **Reply #568 on:** October 05, 2006, 12:41:42 PM

(I wasn't paying attention till now :S. we need to sort this out)

Nick22 · **Reply #569 on:** October 05, 2006, 01:31:13 PM

Are you refering to f-22's character or mine, or both? At any rate, we need toclear this up. F-22 character is still at the castle, and Clarissa is still at the arena... correct?)

Threehorn · **Reply #570 on:** October 05, 2006, 02:56:47 PM

(yes)

Nick22 · **Reply #571 on:** October 05, 2006, 03:02:46 PM

(alright, so let's go on from there. Any thoughts Cyber?)

Cyberlizard · **Reply #572 on:** October 05, 2006, 05:40:47 PM

(sadly no.)

Threehorn · **Reply #573 on:** October 05, 2006, 06:06:18 PM

(we could add in a piece saying that they left the castle and head to the moon so it would fill in the missing space)

Cyberlizard · **Reply #574 on:** October 05, 2006, 06:21:53 PM

(You know, this kind of reminds me of the dumb mistake F-14 made on one of my RPGs. :blink: )

f-22 "raptor" ace · **Reply #575 on:** October 05, 2006, 10:05:19 PM

(I have to agree with threehorns suggestion.)

Threehorn · **Reply #576 on:** October 06, 2006, 02:58:48 AM

(So let us create the piece to fill in the missing period

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f-22 "raptor" ace · **Reply #577 on:** October 06, 2006, 09:13:52 AM

(how about my character flew back to his starship and just decided to fly his fighter to see what was going on at the tournament then after he got there he needed something to eat so he went into the cafe)

Nick22 · **Reply #578 on:** October 06, 2006, 09:17:40 AM

Yoou have to post itf-22. Another thing is use longer sentences to describe your actions. Also you still aren't using quotation marks correctly.)

f-22 "raptor" ace · **Reply #579 on:** October 06, 2006, 09:20:25 AM

(sorry! I'll make my senteneces longer and have more detial and I will use quotations.)