My first fanfiction story!

[ChaoticMistress]

As you can see I am fairly new to fanfiction, so I would all want you to be honest. Also I would like you to critic the story while giving me pointers about on how to improve the story as well. I will not accept any flames, but I will want constructive criticism.

Another thing is that I will not be posting the story here, however I will give you guys the link. The story contains Sonic and the coupling called Shadouge(ShadowxRouge), even if you have never watched or played Sonic. I would still want your opinion on how to be a better writer.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6730919/1/Regret
I would also like it if you reviewed it on the actual website. Don't worry about not having an account. I accept anon reviews. But if you want post your comments here.