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Heeeeeeeeeeeeeere's the next chapter!  :p


Chapter Fifteen: An Unexpected Return

The eerie mists floating over from a certain infamous land hung in the air above the group of seven as they walked closer to more heathland.

“So…” Ruby said, struggling to get everything sorted in her head. “You can’t remember a single thing before your accident?”

“Other than my name, no,” Opal replied, shaking her head. “Sorry…”

“Nah, it’s OK,” Ruby replied. “I’m just curious as to why the rainbow-faces didn’t tell you anything more…they obviously knew…”

“That’s true,” Opal admitted. “I’m curious as to why that is too…I presume they had a good reason.”

“I hope so,” Ruby said. “I’m really confused as to what’s going on, and the sooner we find out, the better…”

They continued walking in silence for a while. Littlefoot was exhausted. He had done practically nothing but walk the past couple of days, not the most relaxing of activities, and of course he had nearly been killed twice – once by a Sharptooth, and the second time by a deranged longneck. Certainly not the life a kid would want to lead. But as he swayed his head up to the horizon, he saw something that made him stop dead in his tracks, and fill him with more strength than he otherwise could have mustered.

“Dad!” he cried in delight. The other six turned to look, and yes – they could clearly see the figure of Bron in the distance, standing with a large group of longnecks including the Old One.
“We’ve found it!” Littlefoot crowed, jumping up and down in delight. “This is the right place! Come one guys!”

And without a second thought and seemingly forgetting his fatigue, he rushed towards the group.

Bron had seen them, but his reaction was not nearly as joyful. On the contrary, he suddenly had a horrified look on his face, and yelled desperately,

“Littlefoot! Stay where you are!”

Littlefoot skidded to a halt to process what his father had just said. Stay where he was? Why?

But then he looked around and saw it. And upon seeing it, his heart sank rapidly into his stomach, tensing the whole thing into an insecure knot of dread.

ëIt’ was a whole gang of sharpteeth, standing just beside him, which he hadn’t noticed before due to the placement of a boundary of rocks and shrubbery. But now the entire gang was gazing at him intently. Among the group were two fast biters he distinctly recognised.

One blue, one green.

Littlefoot hadn’t ever seen so many amassed sharpteeth in his life. It was insane! Since when did they even gather in such numbers? His mind was so focused on his apparent impending doom that he barely registered a voice and thunderous running.

“Hang on Littlefoot!” Bron was yelling, sprinting at full pelt towards the sharpteeth, Old One in his wake. Bron was mere seconds away from ramming straight into the medium-sized blue and silver Sharptooth standing at the front of the group when it opened its mouth and spoke.

“Wait.”

At the shock of being spoken to in clear leaf-eater by an adult Sharptooth, Bron skidded to a halt as best he good, Old One following suit. At this point, she was forcibly reminded of the time when she had chased a young Sharptooth living in the Valley to his near death, until he had pleaded with her not to be harmed. But this again was something else. Not only was the leaf-eater-speaker clearly an adult, none of the other sharpteeth made any move towards them or any of the other longnecks around the place. This speaker seemed to wield a hefty command over the rest of them, and it seemed that ëwait’ could have easily been directed to them as well.

Littlefoot’s mind was blown too. Nervously, he tried to speak.

“Y…you…can…?”

“Yes,” the Sharptooth replied. Then, seeing Littlefoot’s stricken face, he smiled.

“Don’t look so worried,” he said. “I just need to talk with the herd at large.”

“Why?” Bron asked suspiciously, finally unsticking his throat.

“It’s complicated,” the Sharptooth replied. “But please hear me out. If it provides you any comfort, you can stand in front of your young ones as I explain.”

Bron exchanged a look with the Old One, who simply nodded. Whatever this Sharptooth had to say was clearly worth hearing.

A moment later, when the Gang, along with Ali and Shorty were standing behind the protection of the adult longnecks and Opal, the Sharptooth spoke again.

“I would like to greet you all,” he said. “And I’m sure my companions would too, if they understood a word I was saying.”

He cast a bemused look over his shoulder, one which most sharpteeth did not return.

“My name is Zyro,” he continued. “And this is the majority of the Great Sharptooth Community, a community of sharpteeth that is determined to make life better for all. I am currently acting leader of the group due to the unfortunate current indisposition of the true leader and founder of the movement, Shark. Our thoughts are with him.”
Zyro bowed his head in a respectful silence briefly before continuing.

“Within the community, we provide care, protection from threats, food and a general well-being of a family community.”

“You mean like the Great Valley?” Littlefoot called out, interested. The other longnecks all gulped and muttered inaudible worries, as if it were taboo to speak to a Sharptooth. Zyro just smiled however.

“Yes!” he replied enthusiastically. “Exactly like that – only sharpteeth aren’t generally allowed within the Valley. With the exception of one of course.”

“How do you know about Chomper?” Ruby demanded.

“That’s really where it all begins,” Zyro explained. “With Chomper. I don’t know if you can see his parents here?”

With that, he gestured, and growled something in sharptooth. A pair of two-claw sharpteeth, noticeably bigger than him, sauntered uncertainly forward. One of them was dark-green, the other was a more olive colour.

“Oh yeah!” Petrie was astonished. “That them!”

“Oh yes, yes, yes!” Ducky agreed.

“Following Redclaw’s attack on their island,” Zyro continued. “They tried to find a new place to live – being moved around in such an unforgiving world can’t have been easy. But they had something to keep them going. Their son – the first ever Sharptooth to live peacefully within the Great Valley. It was absolutely novel, and it’s something they could boast proudly, a spark of hope in a land tormented by Redclaw…”

Ruby was brought back to the time Redclaw had forcibly separated her from her family, driving her away to just the one place she could find refuge, but having a horrible feeling of worry pressing on her mind – worry that she was being selfish. There she was in paradise – and where were her family?

She was almost welling up, but it was replaced by anger when she noticed the two fast-biters standing by Zyro’s side.
“What are they doing with them?” she hissed at Cera.

“I dunno,” Cera frowned. “I hope Zyro’ll explain that to us too…”

“Unfortunately,” Zyro continued. “Many relished in the idea of a Sharptooth living in the Valley for different reasons – the wrong reasons. Many thought that it wouldn’t be that much of a stretch from a young Sharptooth living in the Valley to a whole group of them taking over. As news of Chomper spread throughout what the Valleians called the Mysterious Beyond, some got the idea he could be used as a weapon.”

“What?” Shorty was speaking out for the first time. “That’s disgusting!”

“Quite,” Zyro nodded, his eyes angry. “One such Sharptooth was a bladeback named Xal. He was the eager follower of a great Sharptooth revolutionary named Eykion.”

“What’s a revolutionary?” Ali asked.

“Well, Eykion preceded us,” Zyro explained. “He too claimed to want to make life better for sharpteeth, but by more extreme measures. He wanted vast Sharptooth armies to conquer all leaf-eater herds to prevent oppression, leading to a utopia where the leaf-eaters were all slaves to the sharpteeth.”

The longnecks began to shift uncomfortably.

“Continue, please,” Old One said softly.

“Alright,” Zyro nodded. “Well, Xal was in Eykion’s army when, a few years before the Great Earthshake, they attacked the Valley. They failed to bring it under their control and Eykion died. But Xal, I guess, never forgot, and for a long time now, through whatever motives he can find, he has been building up his armies again, often via the use of the dreaded Piercer Platoon, fanatically loyal and ruthless Sharptooth soldiers.”

A shudder went around.

“Chomper was taken from the Valley recently,” Zyro said. “Which, I presume, is why you lot went after him.” Smiling slightly, he gestured to Littlefoot and the others. “Noble of you. He was placed in a pack led by Xal’s stepson, and is in amongst a few young Sharptooth misfits. I had Screech and Thud here, who are trying to redeem themselves following their alliance with Redclaw, to tail the group and see what the deal was. From what can be seen, they are trying to return him to Xal, so that Xal can try and use him to enter the Great Valley.”

Now the gasps went around. The leaf-eaters were a great audience, but Zyro wasn’t quite in the mood to be entertained.

“But what’s happening with Chomper now?” Ruby asked, suddenly afraid. “Is he…OK?”

Zyro gave a long look, before a smile slowly returned to his face. Ruby didn’t much like the sight of Sharptooth smiles, but Zyro’s seemed extraordinarily gentle – almost fatherly.

“From what we have last seen,” Zyro said. “Yes – he’s fine.”

Ruby and the rest of the gang heaved sighs of relief.
“Another sharptooth his age, who’s also a member of the community volunteered to be a sort of spy within the pack,” Zyro continued. “I’m sure he’ll look after him.”

“But surely we need to move fast?” Opal said, speaking for the first time. “To rescue both of them, and the Valley, from this Xal? It’s like all-out war…”

Strange too, she reflected. This concept of a Valley seemed so familiar to her. She guessed it was some of her memory returning – after all, everyone seemed to know what it was…

“Absolutley!” Bron agreed heartily. “We should all go and warn the Valley, whilst you try and rescue Chomper and your ally.”

“I’m afraid,” Zyro said quietly, saddening a little. “That the reality is far more complicated.”

“How?” Bron demanded.

“Xal’s greatest enemies are also ours,” Zyro explained. “There is a force, even worse than his, that has become a very grave threat also.”

“Who could be worse than him?” Bron cried.

“Right now,” Zyro explained. “The Great Valley is under the tyrannous regime of a psychopathic longneck named Ulciscor.”

Littlefoot’s eyes widened. That name sounded familiar. It was one that Kai had mentioned. Cera seemed to have caught onto this too, as did, for some reason, Opal. But the most dramatic reaction of all was from Bron.

There were heavy, thunderous footfalls as he staggered backwards, eyes and mouth wide open, staring at Zyro, horror-struck.

“Ahh…uuh…” Bron kept uttering noises that sounded like the beginnings of speech, but fell short of that. Everyone was staring at him as he thumped his tail frustrated on the ground. Finally, he calmed, and looked back at Zyro, his eyes shimmering.

“So…” he gulped. “Are you…sure that’s the name?”

“Yes,” Zyro replied. “I’m so sorry…”

“You know him dad?” Littlefoot asked curiously, looking up at him.

Bron looked down at his son, and gave another strangled gasp. Littlefoot…of course…he had no idea…

Bron shook his head. “Littlefoot – you don’t need to worry about that.” He looked back at Zyro.

“But he’s gone,” he whispered. “The attack of all those sharpteeth on the Valley. I remember now – that collapsed his regime.”

“I’m sorry,” Zyro repeated. “But he’s back. He managed to take over the Valley very quickly…”

“What did this Ulciscor want with the Valley?” Old One asked.
“He has a very warped view of life,” Zyro told her coldly. “He has it in his head that some species of dinosaur are inherently better than others. In his view, longnecks are at the top, and should be served by all other species.” He pulled a face. “Beneath them are other four-footed dinosaurs and flyers. Beneath them are two-footers, who Ulciscor claims should not mingle with four-footed dinosaurs, and should be forced away, because they’re inferior. And forceful really is the word…”

“But…” Petrie piped up. “Flyers two-footers…”

“I know,” Zyro said. “But Ulciscor has a few alliances with them due to their skill at messaging. That’s the only reason. As you can see, this view is complete nonsense.”

“It’s horrible…” Ruby murmured.

“I know!” Littlefoot growled angrily. “What does he do if anyone refuses to go with his laws?”

“He kills them…” there was no euphemism in Zyro’s words, and now the horror of the audience had returned.

“WHAT???” came the indignant cry of many. And now, Littlefoot remembered what Kai had said.

“Where does Ulciscor stand on sharpteeth?” he asked.

“Sharpteeth?” Zyro gave a harsh chuckle. “Sharpteeth are the worst of the worst, and apparently, should not even be allowed to live.”

The crowd broke out into mutterings. Despite what many of their feelings towards sharpteeth were, they all agreed this was definitely too far – especially if you operated a reign of terror with it too.

“Ulciscor wanted to wipe out Xal before he began his operations,” Zyro continued. “So he sent his most trusted follower, a spiked longneck by the name of Kai, to wipe him out at his dwelling, the Fanged Forest. The attack was not a success, and it was at this time that Xal sent out his stepson, Seizon, and some other kid who’s name I’m not sure of, to retrieve Chomper from the Valley. Kai followed them, and fortunately, missed them.”

“But he still wanted to kill him,” Littlefoot growled. “That’s why he offered to go with us when we tried to go and find him.”

“Exactly,” Zyro nodded. “Thankfully, you’ve managed to give him the slip. But Ulciscor succeeded in his goal, and now Kai is ruling with him. This is why we cannot go to the Valley. We will be killed.”

The longnecks murmured in agreement.

“So…what will we do now?” Old One demanded of them.

“We’ll wait,” Zyro replied. “I have various messengers around the place, and they will inform us of the movements of both Ulciscor and Kai. Once I’m sure their paths will not cross too dangerously, we can launch a rescue mission of Chomper and Al. Once we have them, we can then march on the Valley to take Ulciscor down.”

These worded were greeted with enthusiasm, even cheers, and Old One nodded before saying,

“So it’s decided. An alliance of leaf-eaters and sharpteeth to prevent these two evil forces from destroying everything we hold dear.”

Cheers rose up from the longnecks now, and after Zyro translated what had been said to the sharpteeth, they cheered also.

“For now, if it is OK with you,” Zyro continued, choosing his words carefully. “We would like to live alongside you.”

Now Old One frowned.

“I’m afraid it would make us uncomfortable,” she replied. “You will have to be careful.”

“Of course,” Zyro nodded. “We will stay in the Rocky Heathland but will not mingle with you unless you so request it. I hope that is sufficient?”

Old One nodded.

“And Bron?” she asked.

Bron, still pale and shocked, nodded slowly too.

“Thank you,” Zyro nodded and turned to Screech and Thud.

“I presume they are all the kids who frequently hang around with Chomper?” he asked.

“Yes,” Thud replied. “All six of them.”

Zyro looked relieved.

“It would have been disastrous if one of them had gone missing. I trust you can make sure they come to no harm?”

“Why would you trust us?” Screech demanded.

“I don’t know actually,” Zyro shrugged. “But Shark always believes in giving individuals second chances. If you pull this off…”

Littlefoot meanwhile, following his dad expressing the need to sit alone somewhere, was deep in conversation with Ali and Shorty about the merging of the herds, the rest of the Gang listening intently

“We discovered that as we both knew longnecks in the Valley,” Ali was saying, “Our mutual friendships would be a great advantage.”

“Yeah,” Shorty agreed. “As is having two leaders.” He smiled slightly. “I don’t think you can find a better double act than those two.”

Everyone laughed slightly at that.

“Ooh, also, guys,” Ali continued. “I’m going to be taking the Big Longneck Test tomorrow!”

The Gang ëoohed’ and ëaahed’ as if at a firework display, and Littlefoot beamed broadly.

“Ali – that’s fantastic!”

Shorty with a slight twinge of jealousy (directed at what he wasn’t even sure) spoke up.

“So am I!” he added.

“Awesome!” Littlefoot nodded.

Shorty didn’t understand where all these feelings were coming from. He thought it would have been amazing having his stepbrother and his friends live with him for a while, but now, having them all around, especially Littlefoot, talking, laughing and joking with Ali made him feel strangely uncomfortable, as if they were crossing a line he could never cross…

He shook his head. He shouldn’t think about that now. Tomorrow was the Big Longneck Test, and he would show everyone he could do it. Quite appropriate to be a herd leader with an upcoming war…

“There’s still one thing I don’t understand though,” Zyro continued to the two fast-biters. “Who’s that spiketail?”

“Her?” Thud asked mildly, gazing over to where Opal was introducing herself as best she could to Old One. “Don’t know actually – never seen her before.”

Zyro nodded.

“I’d better ask one of the kids at some point,” he said. “In this alliance, it’s best to know everything about everyone.”

*

The night slowly began to creep in, accompanied by chirping crickets, and then soft light of the Great Night Circle beaming at the pack of six young sharpteeth.

Just before they had all settled down, Seizon promised the group that they may end up at the Fanged Forest tomorrow, to which Al had secretly panicked. If Xal discovered his identity…but his trust in Zyro and the rest of the community eventually allowed him to settle down to sleep.

“Chomper…?”

Chomper himself had just been settling down, but not prepared for sleep, for his nights were now plagued with vile images of blood cascading in great torrents from Pyron’s chest – after being sliced by Chomper’s own teeth. He had woken up from them everyone night, shaking and sobbing uncontrollably, left to be consoled by the one who now spoke his name.

Chomper opened one eye to see the beautiful form of Saureen settle down next to him.

“You OK?” she asked.

“As OK as I’ll ever be…” Chomper murmured in reply.

Saureen gave a sad smile and cuddled up close to him.

“Please don’t worry,” she whispered, nuzzling him softly. “Your nightmares will pass. It’s perfectly natural to have them…”

So natural in fact, that Saureen decided not to mention to him that she too was having them – not of killing Pyron herself, but of watching Seizon allowing the entirety of the pack to crumble away before his eyes. In truth, she was worried for him. His devotion to Xal hadn’t wavered at all – it was almost fanatical, as fanatical as Xal himself. And Saureen was worried that that might be dangerous for everyone, including Seizon himself. But she didn’t tell Chomper this. No need to put more stress on his mind.

Instead, she gazed intently at the spot Seizon had chosen for sleep – a vast meadow of blossoming flowers adorning a wide and elegant spectrum of colours. There were not many flatteeth in this area, allowing the flowers to continue growing and growing.

“They’re so pretty…” Saureen whispered, intrigued. “Sometimes you can feel there cannot be anything wrong with places such as this.”

“Like sky-water?” Chomper asked.

Saureen chuckled at that, being reminded of Seizon’s love for it.

“Maybe,” she said. “After all – it’s with sky-water that makes such things grow.” Tenderly, she then leaned over and licked Chomper’s face the way a mother would.

“Goodnight, Chomper,” she said, closing her eyes.

Touched by her compassionate action, Chomper began to tear up as he too closed his eyes.

He may very well have gone to sleep after that, but soon, he was awake again, and when he did so, for some reason, he felt that something wasn’t right.

He sat up and looked around him. Saureen was still asleep next to him, breathing peacefully. Lini’s loud snores told him that she was still around, and, twisting his head behind him, he could see Seizon and Al both asleep too.

Chomper was on his feet the second he realised who it was who was missing. He crept carefully around Saureen so as not to wake her, and then, if you like, tiptoed through the tulips until he saw the silhouette of the one he was looking for.

Nycha was a few feet ahead of him, already making her own way away from the rest of them. Chomper didn’t know why she felt the need to wander off from the group right now, but he certainly wasn’t going to let her do it. Pyron’s dying wish had been that Chomper look after her, and he certainly wasn’t going to let that slip.

“Nycha!” he called as quietly as he could.

Nycha stopped in her tracks and turned around. Chomper suddenly flinched, realising that she would clearly be in half the mood to attack him considering the way she had previously reacted. However, her eyes seemed uninterested. Bored, empty…

“Oh,” she said. “It’s you.”

“What are you doing?” Chomper demanded.

“I’m leaving,” Nycha replied simply. “I’ve had enough. Without Pyron, this pack no longer has anything for me.”

“What about Seizon?” Chomper asked.

Nycha gave a harsh laugh.

“What about him? He’s really lost his appeal – no. I’m sorry Chomper, but this is the only way. I mean, you may have been forced into this pack, and I understand that was hard for you, but they’ve all taken to you. Not like me – I’m just tolerated, but deep down, they don’t have that care for me that they do for you. Ever since what happened to my family, I’ve been this social oddball, lashing out at anyone who comes near me. It’s no wonder they don’t like me. I’ve got to leave.”

Chomper found this statement hard to grapple. For all intents and purposes, it may very well have been true. Sure, Lini had been attempting to talk to Nycha several times since Pyron’s death, but she may have only done that to be kind. Nycha truly did seem lost.

But she had changed, hadn’t she? Or at least she had tried to – Chomper couldn’t forget the fact that she had just used his name for the first time. There was something there, he knew it. He had to keep talking to her.

“Where will you go?” he asked. “It really isn’t safe out there.”

“My old pack,” Nycha replied. “With the tetrarchy.”

Chomper didn’t know what he had expected to hear, but it was certainly not this. His eyes immediately stretched wide in horror.

“No!” he found himself almost shouting. “Nycha – you can’t go back to them! They’ll kill you! This is what you and Pyron came here to escape! He told me what happened to you…how you had changed-”

“SHUT UP!!” Nycha suddenly hissed. “You know nothing about me! What I went through!” She was looking suddenly terrifying, so Chomper quickly shut up.

Nycha rolled her eyes up at the sky before placing them firmly back on Chomper.

“They may not kill me,” she replied. “If I can present myself as a strong, independent individual, they may let me back in.”

“Is it worth the risk though?” Chomper continued timidly. “Stay with us and I will make the others listen – I promise you Nycha, we can help you…what do you even hope to gain?”

Nycha now had a scowl fixed on her features as she gazed at Chomper.

“I thought you of all people would understand,” she growled. “Because…you were there with him when…it happened.” She sucked in a deep breath.

“I know Pyron would have wanted me to improve my independence, and so that’s what I’m doing. And I will not let anyone stand in my way.”

“But that’s not what he said!” Chomper gasped, desperate she would understand. “He said-”

“Maybe I don’t want to hear what he said!” Nycha snarled at him, shutting him up again. “Because sometimes I still fear even he didn’t love me…” she swallowed hard. “So, this is what I’m doing – becoming an independent member of the most formidable fast-biter pack the world has ever seen. And you can’t stop me!”

Before Chomper could reply, Nycha had performed something between a sprint and a skid, and ended up right behind up so she was practically breathing down his neck. Chomper was at a loss for what to do.

“Chomper…” Nycha breathed. “Thank you for everything…”

And with that, her hand came crashing down on the back of his head, sending him clattering to the ground, stars winking at him in every direction.

The blow had been intended to knock him out so he wouldn’t follow her, but with little success as Chomper, despite his dazed state, was still conscious. He waited until he could be sure she was quite a distance ahead of him before staggering to his feet.

He had made a promise to Pyron, and he would keep it.

In the distance, he could still make out Nycha’s silhouette. If he were to follow her now, it was unlikely she would see him, but smell was a different matter. Fortunately, he was surrounded by useful things disguise his smell.

He plucked the head off one of the nearby flowers and prepared to rub the scented petals into his body – OK, so this easier said than done, but after a while of doing this, he hoped his scales will give off the scent of the flowers making it harder for Nycha to smell him.

And so, he then set off in her wake. He didn’t care that Seizon still needed him in the pack, or that he needed to head to the Fanged Forest. Right now, the most important thing was preventing Pyron’s sister going the same way he did.

*

One rock fell, disintegrating into gravel. A second rock disintegrated before it even hit the ground.

Gigas watched intently as all of the large boulders around fell victim to Redclaw’s tail.

“Impressive,” he commented. “You seem to be getting your strength back.”

“Quite right,” Redclaw growled, tearing down a tree with his foot-claws to demonstrate this further. “I’m ready and eager for battle!”

Gigas smiled.

“Good,” he said. “Xal will be most pleased. You know…” his smile took a more wicked stance.

“It only seems fitting that you regain your strength by destroying rocks,” he said. “After all, ëhe’ was killed by a rock too…”

Redclaw merely nodded, trying to hide his emotional response to what Gigas had just made reference too.

Gigas continued,

“I never quite understood your feelings on that matter,” he said.

“Why should you want to know?” Redclaw snapped. “He’s dead – there’s nothing you or I can do about that – we should just take our positions to take his place.”

“Alongside Xal’s revolutionary army…” Gigas agreed. “Yes – it certainly seems that’s what we have to do, but I’m curious as to how you fell into that coma in the first place?”

*

Xal growled softly once Gigas had finished telling him what Redclaw had said.

“It seems we have more enemies in this equation than I previously realised…” he murmured. “These Shark and Zyro people…how much of a threat do they represent?”

“They’re pacifists,” Gigas replied. “I am inclined to believe they will not attack us unless we attack first. But they may be forming alliances with the leaf-eaters living in the Great Valley.”

“That may be more complicated than we anticipated,” Xal told him. “I have just received word from Ichy that the entire Valley has been taken over by Ulciscor once again.”

Gigas’ eyes widened.

“Well…I guess that means alliances in the Valley are off for them then,” he said.

“True,” Xal agreed. “But I have two major worries – what if Ferox finds the group? He’ll have inside knowledge that he may share with them…not to mention, I suspect they’ll be after the Ambassador – one that will be more difficult to make use of if the Valley is under the oppression of a Sharptooth-hater.”

“What orders, Xal?” Gigas asked.

Xal considered for a minute.

“Continue training Redclaw,” he replied. “I hope he will continue to prove useful for us. When he is ready, we may need to send out an expeditionary force to deal with Ferox.”

“Certainly sir,” Gigas bowed his head and retreated, leaving Xal staring at the sky, deep in thought…

*

The icy winds twirled and pierced the skin and feathers of the lone fast-biter trudging through the snow.
Nycha shivered. Her nose and directions from various sharpteeth she had met along the way had led her to White Mountain, but she couldn’t see why the tetrarchy would dwell here of all places. Still, now she was here, it couldn’t hurt to take a look.

She slowly paced around, the white ground sparkles crunching beneath her cold feet, her breath visible every time she exhaled. It was lucky she had these feathers really – she needed all the insulation she could get.

She closed her eyes and saw the bright orange form of her brother before her.

“Oh, Pyron…” she thought. “Have I made the right decision? What would you say if you saw me doing this?”

She was suddenly distracted by her quiet consideration when a certain aroma entered her nostrils, and for the first time, she realised she was incredibly hungry.

She opened her eyes and looked around for the source of this enticing smell. She noticed, some distance away and at the bottom of a small, snowy slope, there was an ice runner (Trinisaura), a small leaf-eater well adapted to cold environments. Nycha guessed it was her good fortune that it was alone.

She pounced. Unfortunately, the snow had caused her to lose her footing, and she slipped as she attempted to grab the runner, causing it to notice her, give a frightened bleat, and escape.
Undeterred, she attempted to give chase, but it was more of a challenge than she had anticipated, due to the cold, her exhaustion, and running in the snow. The runner was clearly better suited to such environments, and Nycha eventually gave up.

But just before the runner had sprinted out of sight, another Sharptooth pounced on it, attacking it unexpectedly from the side. It was a quick flick of the jaws and snap of the neck before the animal was dead and the Sharptooth looked up at Nycha. Her jaw dropped open.

It was Chomper.

“I know what you’re going to say,” he said, grinning sheepishly. “You never thought I would kill a flattooth. Well…”
He gazed down at the runner carcass. He had to admit, this was rather a milestone for him. But he shook his head.
“I just figured…our needs were greater than his. Besides, his death was quick and painless, so…”

He trailed off as Nycha approached him.

“What the hell are you doing here?” she snapped.

“Keeping an eye on you,” he replied shortly. “You see – you didn’t knock me out as well as you thought you would. So I followed you.”

Nycha scowled.

“Chomper – there was a very specific reason I tried to knock you out! If the tetrarchy finds you here, you are going to die!”

Chomper shrugged.
“A risk I’m willing to take,” he replied. “And it’s nice to hear you’re now protective of me. Come on – eat. You need your strength if you’re going to try and present yourself to these sharpteeth.”

Nycha paused as she watched Chomper hesitantly prepare to tear chunks of flesh from the carcass, but she eventually followed suit.

“I’ve got to ask though Chomper,” Nycha commented after a few moments of them silently eating together. “Why did you come after me?”

“Right before he died,” Chomper said, trying to keep his voice steady. “Pyron asked me to look after you. So that’s what I’m doing.”

Nycha bowed her head.

“Is that so?” she murmured. “So, basically you’re saying that you couldn’t care less about me. It’s just something Pyron said you should do? I knew it – I told you, nobody cares about me.”

Chomper, suddenly realising how what he had said sounded, attempted to correct himself.

“No – Nycha, it isn’t like that…”

“Oh yeah?” she growled, looking up at him, a fierce look in her eyes despite the fact that they were swimming with tears. “Tell me – what’s it like then?”

Before Chomper could answer, another voice did.

“I’ll tell you what it’s like,” the voice said. “It’s like there are two bratty little biters in our territory. I’m curious as to why you’d come here again Nycha, but I hope it’s an entertaining story. I’m in a foul mood at the moment…”

With dread chilling them worse than the snow, Chomper and Nycha looked to see four adult fast-biters glaring at them and waiting…

~0~

Oh no!  :o  :lol

Well, I hope you enjoyed. Writing the scenes between Chomper and Nycha was fairly interesting I have to say. I hope you enjoyed that along with everything else - the alliances, what's going on with Shorty...all cool stuff! Please review.


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Wow, I actually really like Zyro. It's good to see some sharptooth-leaf-eater alliances going on! :DD

Is it bad that I actually chuckled when I read Bron's reaction to Ulcisor taking over the Valley again? Anyway, it was good to see him reunite with Littlefoot again. At least the kids seem safe for now!

So... everything with Xal and Chomper is explained. :o Wow. Al, any plans to get Chomper to escape? Oh, well he's already disappeared with Nycha, so that's cool.

Also, I really like the dialogue between those two. Poor Nycha. I'm fairly sure it is a bad idea to go back to the tetrarchy, though. I hope those two are able to get out of that predicament they have found themselves in.  :!

So, Red Claw's now training with Xal... I know this can't be good...

Again, outstanding chapter! I can't wait to see how things progress! :DD Keep it up!


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Whoa! Another fast-paced read! I'm really envious just how much information you write in. It keeps the story flowing very smoothly, and it leaves us guessing!
I love the sequences with Nycha and Chomper, I think they will really connect. And ohnu! Bad tetrarchy alert!
Zyro sounds like a good guy, I'm looking forward... to everything really^^
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Finally I have some time to review this, sorry for the delay :angel

Zyro has indeed something interesting to say and I'm glad they allied with each other. Do I sense a love triangle between Littlefoot, Shorty and Ali? :lol: And Opal seems to regain some memories... it'll sure be interesting when she finally does :yes

Awww... Saureen and Chomper kis... eh I mean cuddling :lol It's really sad he leaves without a message to her but on the other hand he's just doing what he has to do and he certainly wants to look after Nycha :) She seems to be pretty desperate and empty indeed. The talk between them was very well done :yes Oh, and Chomper kills a leafeater :wow But... uh oh... :(

Do I need  be afraid of the fact that Redclaw regains his strength? Or that Ferox might be executed?  :unsure:

All in all a truly enjoyable read :DD And I have a feeling it won't be long until the next one comes :smile
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:o Finally, at long last, here is the next chapter! And its a long one ladies and gents! Please enjoy, and bear in mind italics signify either a flashback or somebody's thoughts. Oh, and please excuse the infrequent mild language.

Chapter Sixteen: The Power of Four

Nycha reacted almost at once.

She immediately stepped forward as quickly as she could, putting herself between Chomper and the tetrarchy, and looked up at the speaker, an almost pure-white female with defiance.

“I wouldn’t call it entertaining,” she said, her voice level. Chomper was astonished at how calm she suddenly was – he had only ever seen her on-edge. He was so surprised in fact, that he almost completely forgot that he should be the one looking out for her, and she was in the immediate danger of being torn apart by a gang of dinocidal maniacs.

And yet, with no reaction from said maniacs, Nycha continued.

“What about your story, eh?” she said, looking up at the white fast-biter. “I don’t remember you from my old days…”

The fast-biter let out a harsh bark of laughter.

“Times have changed, hatchling. Remember old Troa? She was killed in a hunting accident a while back, and so I was nominated to replace her within the tetrarchy. You can call me Pagetona.”

“Pagetona…” Nycha frowned. “Hang on…I know you. You used to be a friend of my parents!”

“Yeah?” Pagetona chuckled slightly. “Before they needed to be filtered out…”

Hatred boiled up in Nycha as memories from that awful night came back to her, echoing with Pagetona’s taunts. So it was true – the tetrarchy had been responsible for her parents’ deaths…and now they were here, admitting it!

Chomper quickly came forward and laid a hand on her shoulder.

“Don’t let them get to you…” he murmured. Nycha scowled and shrugged his hand off impatiently.

“Well, Nycha?” a male turquoise member of the tetrarchy, known as Fang, said. “What about your side of the story? What are you doing here, and who is this twigarm you brought with you?”

“I didn’t bring him with me,” Nycha replied, casting Chomper a look of disdain. “He followed me here. He’s not important, don’t worry about him.”

“Alright,” spoke up a third fastbiter, this one a mahogany red female. “So let’s just kill him.”

“No!” Nycha yelled out, earning a savage grin from the tetrarchy, and more surprise from Chomper.

Nycha closed her eyes briefly before opening them again.

“I’ve come to rejoin your pack,” she said. “And…” she turned to Chomper.

“Him as well.”

WHAT? Chomper almost gagged in incredulity. This was not what he bargained for, he was about to protest when the fourth member of the tetrarchy spoke.

“Not possible,” he said, in a voice so low it seemed to come from his knees, which was a surprise to Chomper, considering he was a bright bubble-gum pink.

“Only fastbiters are allowed in our pack.”

“Exactly,” Pagetona finished. “So – let’s kill him.”

“NO!” Nycha yelled again. “He’ll…he’ll leave, alright?”

“No…I’m staying!” Chomper said, a lot more bravely than he felt. He didn’t want to be part of the pack, but somehow he had to stay.

None of the tetrarchy members said anything for a while. But eventually Pagetona spoke up again.
“Nycha,” she said seriously. “For what reason have you even considered re-joining us? We have openly admitted to our part in the death of your parents and we chased you and your brother away.”

“Yeah,” Nycha agreed. “That you did. But what good is staying out of your pack going to do me? It’s certainly not going to bring my parents back. Or Pyron…”

The mahogany-red female’s eye widened.

“Pyron’s dead?” she murmured.

Nycha nodded, but was unable to say anything more. Fang chose that moment to speak.

“You do realise we can’t just let anyone in,” he said. “There is a procedure. You never went through this ordeal of endurance because you were born into the pack. But your parents did. Now, we’ve never actually had a kid applying to join our pack, so we don’t know the full extent of what this ordeal, which is the same for everyone, will do to you, but it will definitely take a considerable toll on your body.”

Chomper gulped, but Nycha, after exhaling heavily through her nostrils to calm herself, looking up at the turquoise fastbiter without quaking.

“What sort of toll?” she asked.

“Worst case scenario,” Fang replied, his voice emotionless. “It would kill you.”

Nycha flinched slightly, but Chomper let out a strangled gasp.

“That settles it then,” he muttered, grabbing Nycha by the arm. “We’re both leaving.”

“Well, if you chose to do that,” Pagetona piped up. “We would have to kill you anyway.”

Nycha sighed.

“Just give me the verdict!” she snapped, seemingly not in the least bit fazed, unlike Chomper, who was wide-eyed in horror right behind her.

“We’ll have to discuss it,” Pagetona replied, as she and the rest of the tetrarchy turned away. “You are both to wait here until we have reached our verdict. Or else.”

And so, the motion was set in place. The four fastbiters that made up the tetrarchy went to a point some distance away from the two young sharpteeth, sat down, and began to discuss the situation in hushed voices.

Nycha turned to Chomper.

“What is it with you?” she hissed. “You came all this way after me, and you’re just going to get killed!”

“We don’t know that,” Chomper replied, trying to convince himself more than her really. The whole situation was just beginning to catch up with him, and the thought of the tetrarchy chilled him to the bone. These fastbiters, no matter how they disguised it, were ruthless elitists, believing anyone not measuring up to their lofty standards should get removed from the entire race of life.
But at the same time, wasn’t that exactly why he was here?

Chomper hadn’t known Pyron for all that long before he had died, but through their numerous conversations and interactions with each other, he had felt like he knew him like a brother. Most notable of these interactions, was, of course, back in the Cave Network, when Pyron had told him his entire life story, including the mention of the tetrarchy. But at that moment, Chomper felt like it wasn’t just Pyron he knew inside out, by Nycha as well.

Being born into a pack where the expectation was to conform to everything your peers were doing could never have been easy. The way Chomper saw it, ever since she was a hatchling, all Nycha wanted to do was be revered by those she called family. Not just Pyron and her parents, but the pack in general, and of course, the four leaders.

And of course, for Nycha, feeling the guilt of not conforming must have been the worst feeling in the world, so much so that that became the only thing she could think about, and nobody else’s feelings on the subject became obsolete.

Chomper took a deep breath.

“I made a promise to Pyron,” he said, very firmly. “And I mean to uphold. But Nycha – that is not the only reason. Everything Pyron told me about the tetrarchy and what happened to you both adds up with what I see before me now.”

Nycha’s nostrils flared, but the curiosity and invitation to continue in her eyes was unmistakable.

“What I see,” Chomper explained. “Is an amazing individual who is perfect for what she is meant to do, but she fails to see it because she’s far too worried about what a bunch of fastbiters think and how they see the world. You shouldn’t have to let their presence linger on you for years to come – break free! There is so much more to everything you see and realise. You should just learn to be yourself. Because those who matter, don’t mind it. And those who mind it…”
His eyes flickered over to the fastbiters.

“…don’t matter…”

Nycha looked down at the ground, the whole weight of what had just been said tumbling around in her head. It was such an honest and passionate speech, from someone who she had previously alienated, that she had no response at all.

But she didn’t need one. At that moment, the tetrarchy all slowly sauntered over.

“We have reached a decision,” the pink fastbiter informed them, his deep voice monotonous.

Nycha and Chomper were instantly tense.

“We have decided to allow you, Nycha, to go through the ordeal of endurance, and see if you are legitimate to re-join this pack,” Fang explained.

Nycha nodded slowly.

“Right…thank you…” Chomper almost wanted to speak out at this point. How could Nycha talk so politely to her parents’ murderers? But then the subject changed.

“What about him?” Nycha asked, gesturing to Chomper with her head.

“We have decided that he shall be your witness,” Pagetona replied. “He is allowed to live – but he is under the custody of the pack, and shall remain with us as he watches your endurance test.”

Nycha swallowed. Chomper was, on the other hand, quite relieved.

“What sort of endurance is Nycha put under?” he asked, unable to stop himself.

A cruel smile played around Pagetona’s lips.

“You’ll see soon enough,” she replied, amidst sinister grins from her fellows…

*

“I can’t believe you didn’t notice him leave! You were sleeping right next to him, you twig-armed rockhead!!” Seizon bellowed, his fangs bared.

“Don’t blame me for your short-comings as leader!” Saureen practically screamed back, tears leaking out of her jade eyes. “And as much as I care for Chomper, if you weren’t so psyched up about him, you would realise Nycha was missing too!!”

“I’m aware of that!” Seizon snapped back. “But Nycha is a resilient nomad – Chomper is not, and Chomper is needed for Xal’s revolution scheme-”

“Is that all you care about???” Saureen shrieked, her voice becoming higher-pitched by the minute. “Xal and his revolutionary crap?? These are fellow dinosaurs we’re talking about, members of our pack – flesh and blood!!! You can’t just cast their values aside…”

“You don’t know what you’re talking about!!!” Seizon yelled back, his voice escalating as well in terms of volume. “You don’t understand the revolution and how it works!!! You think I don’t care for Chomper and Nycha?? You’re just a pathetic little girl who can’t even-”

“Is that what I am???” Saureen challenged. “Just a pathetic little girl?? I may be young, and perhaps I’m not as strong as you Seizon, or as good at fighting hostile packs, but at least I have values. I was raised with moral standards, something that you wouldn’t understand because your real parents are dead-”

At that moment, Seizon let out a rage-filled roar and flew at Saureen but stopped short of actually doing anything by Lini’s high-pitched terrified squeal of,
“SEIZON!!!”

Lini and Al had been watching this argument as it had escalated, with growing expressions of anxiety on their faces, until Lini had decided to verbally intervene. Fortunately, it was enough.

Seizon took a step back from Saureen, closing his eyes and exhaling forcefully.

“Sorry Saureen…” he eventually murmured.

“No…” Saureen muttered, wiping her eyes forcefully. “I’m sorry…”

“I think,” Al said slowly. “We all need to calm down. And of course, think carefully about what may have happened to these two.”

He caught Lini’s eye as he said this, and it was apparent she was thinking the same thing. This could work to an advantage, if, in the best case scenario, they would have run into Zyro.

“As angry and upset as she is,” Lini pondered. “I don’t think Nycha would have abducted Chomper and dragged him somewhere. She’s not like that…”

Saureen twitched slightly at the word ëabducted,’ suddenly remembering that was how Chomper had come to join the group in the first place. She glanced up at Seizon, who seemed unperturbed. She shuddered slightly. Where there any morals he even went by?

Al’s voice cut across her thinking.

“So you’re suggesting that Nycha went off somewhere and Chomper decided to follow her?”

“Why would he do that though?” Seizon asked, sounding irritated.

“Chomper was the only one present when Pyron died,” Al replied smoothly. “We don’t know what exchange went between them, but I’m guessing he asked of Chomper to look after his remaining flesh and blood – Nycha. If Nycha were to run away, which I wouldn’t put past her, it seems fitting that Chomper would follow her, yes?”

The other three sharpteeth exchanged looks and gave their agreement.

“But that still doesn’t leave us any the wiser as to where they are!” Saureen pointed out.

“True,” Al agreed. “But we are blessed with superb tracking skills as sharpteeth – following both of their scents, even after all this time, shouldn’t be too difficult.”

So the four of them set to work, following the scent of their companions with their noses, Seizon wondering vaguely why he was taking orders from Al. Still, he would have suggested exactly the same if he had more time to think about it…right?

*

It had been about a year or so ago, in the Fanged Forest one night, when the desperate whines of a young bladeback could be heard very audibly.

“But Xal!” Seizon complained, clambering across a tree root to get closer to his stepfather. “Why can’t you tell me more?”

“Sorry, Seizon,” Xal replied levelly. “But I’ve got things I need to do. Besides, its time you went to bed.” He gestured to the young twoclaw fast asleep somewhere behind his stepson.

“Look – Saureen’s already fast asleep!”

“Well, never mind her!” Seizon shouted, casting his friend a look of disdain. “I’m still wide awake! C’mon Xal! I want to learn more about the revolution!”

Xal paused as he considered these words, the light of the Night Circle twinkling in his amber eyes.

“I’m proud that I can call you my son,” he murmured. “You have the same sort of gutsy determination that was so valued in me when I joined the revolutionary army, all that time ago…you’ve got a good head on your shoulders Seizon, and a heart to match. I see you will become a very successful Sharptooth. You have great talent, and also the makings of a pack leader.”

Seizon’s eyes widened in delight, moonlight also dancing in their amber irises. Before he could say anything though, he heard movement behind him.

Ferox had slowly approached them both, and after giving Xal a brief nod, he carried his daughter off to bed, leaving the two bladebacks alone.

“Did you really mean what you said Xal?” Seizon breathed, gazing up at the mighty carnivore with near idolatry in his eyes. “I can be a pack leader?”

“Oh yes,” Xal nodded seriously. “In fact – perhaps when I’m past my best, you could even take over the revolution…”

“The revolution????” Seizon squawked in reply, his expression akin to someone receiving a kiss from the love of their life. However, he then scowled.

“How am I supposed to lead a revolution if you won’t tell me anything more about it?” he demanded.

Xal chuckled.

“What’s there to tell? Other than the brief, less-than-glamorous history behind it. You seem to have got all the characteristics that are required in such leadership anyway.”

“You think?”

Xal lowered his head until it was nearly level with Seizon’s.

“Oh yeah,” he said, the shadow of a grin flickering over his complexion. “Even with such a role, though, it’s important not to let it go to your head. Even if you’ve risen above the ranks and have the right features and characteristics to be a good leader, you can’t be everything. You will still make mistakes, and therefore, there always comes a time when you must listen to your followers.”

Seizon nodded.

“Is that extremely important?” he asked as an afterthought.

“Yes,” Xal replied very firmly. “It is of the paramount importance. You cannot be successful without taking advice from your followers and underlings. There would be little use for them otherwise. They are there to carry out your goals – but must be kept in the same mind-frame as you, to offer out incredible solutions you may not have thought of.”

Seizon smiled and nodded as he pondered this. He guessed it made sense.

“They must keep in the mind-frame of the revolution, right?” he asked his stepfather with insatiable excitement.

“Exactly,” Xal replied, a true smile now forming. “You and me Seizon, will have this world wrapped around our little claws one day. Right now, we’ve got to make the best of each other and also the best of those who are willing to serve us.”
 

*

It was still true, Seizon observed. He should still listen to his followers – and possibly now more than ever following Pyron’s death. Yes…but his calling should not waver. He still had someone higher he must serve.

“Xal,” he thought desperately. “I won’t let you down.”

Saureen eventually found Chomper’s scent, but to her distress, it only led up to a point amongst the flowers, and after that, couldn’t be followed anymore.

“How did he just vanish?” she exclaimed, wringing her hands anxiously.

“By a cunning little trick,” Al observed, pointing to a broken flower stem. “My only guess is that he smeared the petals over himself to disguise his scent – possibly from us, or from Nycha. But either way, we can still follow the impression his body made through these flower stems.”

“What happens once we get to the end of the flowers?” Lini asked.

“By that time we may have caught up with Nycha’s scent,” Seizon replied, nodding at Al, who smiled slightly back.

Seizon, bracing himself, gazed at the remnants of his pack.

“I accept I have made mistakes,” he said. “But I promise you I will not let two more of my companions die…trust me.”

This little announcement left them all feeling slightly non-plussed, but Seizon didn’t wait to see it. He instantly sprinted off through the plants, with Saureen soon following. Al was about to go too when Lini grabbed hold of his arm.

“Will you tell Saureen about Zyro?” she muttered.

Al paused.

“Not just yet,” he said. “She…well…she knows Xal. I don’t know if that could put her and us at risk. I will tell all of them eventually.” He tapped her playfully on the shoulder.

“Bear in mind I only told you because I needed a weight of my chest.” He smiled, and it was a smile that created an indeterminable and yet pleasurable feeling in Lini’s stomach.

They both quickly went to follow their companions.

*

Mists, trees, plentiful vegetation and beautiful cosmic displays…

Opal gave a great sigh. The Rocky Heathland was such a beautiful place, and yet according to claims from all the longnecks she had spoken too so far, the Great Valley was so awe-inspiringly lovely it made this place look like a pile of rubble.

If it was so popular though, she guessed it made sense that such a Valley held such a close association with the blurry memories that she felt coming back to her. But was that all? And what did this Ulciscor have to do with it? Opal couldn’t help feeling that she may have known him…

To distract herself from such unsettling thoughts, she wondered over to where Old One was squatting, merely thinking on the current situation, and her alliance with Zyro.

“Hello,” Opal greeted her uncertainly.

“Hello,” Old One replied politely. “Everything alright?”

“I think so,” Opal nodded. “I just never knew that regaining memories would be such a headache.” She grinned sheepishly.

“Well, I’d say just rest on it, my dear,” Old One told her. “It may make it a less painful experience then…besides, if we are ready to go to war soon, you’ll need all the rest you can get.”

“Hmm…” Opal murmured, gazing over the heathland to where the Sharptooth community was situated, having heeded their word about not interacting unless invited to.

“Do you trust them?” she asked.

“I don’t know…” Old One replied honestly. “So far they seem to be. I mean, when you’ve lived as long as I have, you will see many strange things, and such things will make you believe anything is possible.” She gave a small smile. “The kids seem to trust them, as they trusted a Sharptooth friend of theirs. So far, their judgement has been some of the most trustworthy I’ve ever seen.”

Opal nodded.

“Oh yes,” she agreed. “They’re a fantastic bunch aren’t they? I haven’t known them for long and I can already see that. But the spiketail kid…he doesn’t say a lot.”

“That’s true,” Old One affirmed. “I don’t know if he’s ever actually spoken at all.”

“Really?” Opal was aghast. “Hm…”

Old One looked down at her.

“Everything alright?”

“I think so…” she murmured. “It’s just…not speaking…its brought back a memory of someone I knew…”

“Who?”

Opal paused.
“Omendric,” she said finally. “His name was Omendric. He was always quiet, never speaking out…until that is, he moved on, become a successful leader…” she shook her head. “I’m not entirely sure…but speaking of leaders, what’s the deal with this longneck test?”

*

“Spectators may be banned from longneck tests,” Cera said with a wild grin. “But from up here we get an excellent vantage point!”

The Gang (minus Chomper, naturally) had situated themselves upon a hill overlooking the heathland, and could distinctly make out the figures of Shorty and Ali, in separate areas, being led through the features and details of the test by Bron and Ali’s mother respectively.

“Shame we can’t hear what they saying…” Petrie remarked.

“Oh, don’t worry,” Littlefoot replied. “I know what it goes along the lines of.”

“The test will be split into three separate tasks,” Bron explained, pacing around an impatient Shorty, whose tongue was hanging out in concentration, his mind set…

“Each task is supposed to test different longneck qualities,” Ali’s mother explained to her daughter. “And each task is completed by finding a red treestar.”
Ali nervously gazed around. She wasn’t entirely sure if she understood how this would work, but she supposed it was one of those things that you catch onto once you start.

“The third test is the hardest,” Littlefoot told his friends. “At least – depending on how you look at it. I just hope they both don’t make mistakes with it.”

“The test is normally given to a young longneck by their mother or father,” Bron said to Shorty. Shorty briefly snapped out of his single-minded focus to look up at Bron inquisitively.

“But…”

“Yeah…” Bron smiled slightly. The concept of Ulciscor being back in the Great Valley was quite harrowing to him, and it was still weighing on his mind. But he tried his best to forget about it for the time being. “I know you don’t have a mother or father, but I think I can fill that position very well.”

These words almost made Shorty’s heart melt. Bron had never quite been so direct with him before about his being like a son. It was one of those things that was known between them, but never voiced. And now it was, it felt like a whole new chapter was beginning. He would pass the test today. He knew it.

“They’re off!” Petrie suddenly yelled. And it was true. The tiny figures of Shorty and Ali had now sprinted off in their separate ways, beginning the test of strength, agility and endurance…

*

“Well,” Hyp said. “I’m glad to see you’re all here.”

Tria wasn’t so sure. It was bad enough that four-footers and two-footers were mingling, if not also for the fact that this secret meeting was to discuss problems with Ulciscor’s regime and rebellion. They might as well just join Kosh now…

It was at that moment that the image of Kosh came back. The clubtail who had been so courageous, and had been literally stamped out…this brought Tria back to her senses. They were to resist. Ulciscor would one day become a victim of his own madness, she was sure of it. But until then, she must do everything in her power to prevent more ordinary Valleians from becoming martyrs.

Hyp, Mutt and Nod had invited them to meet at a secret location in a swampy area that not many went to – ëthey’ were Tria, Ducky’s mother, Petrie’s mother and Mrs Maia. Four concerned mothers, desperately desiring a safer habit for their children.

“We understand of course,” Hyp said, his voice taking on a mature side none of the mothers had heard before. “That we shouldn’t keep you hear long. Not only may the Bludgeoners discover us, but you still have children you need to return to…I presume you have left them in capable hands?”

“Yes,” Ducky’s mother replied. “But please say we can come to a conclusion soon?”

“I hope so,” Mrs Maia agreed. “What do you even propose?”

“It’s just a small scheme,” Hyp replied. “But Mutt and I are willing, when you feel it is needed, to take any two-footer children (Nod can do any four-footed ones) to this sanctuary to escape the worst part of Ulciscor, Kai, or the Bludgeoner’s tempers.”

“You’d do that?” Petrie’s mother asked, her eyes shimmering with grateful tears.

“Yes,” Hyp replied, the smile on his face unmistakable. This was clearly no longer the rowdy bully who liked to terrorize hatchlings. He had grown into a mature young adult – and, given Ulciscor and the Bludgeoners not a moment too soon.

“But if we could please take a moment to consider the longnecks,” Ducky’s mother piped up. “They are being held almost in the personal custody of Ulciscor, just because he’s their son. Surely we should work to do something about them?”

“I’m sure we will eventually,” Tria affirmed. “But if there’s one person I’m worried about, it’s Doc.”

“Doc?” the rest of the group seemed puzzled.

“Why him?” Nod questioned. Tria shrugged.

“Well, the legend of the lone dinosaur states that he’s supposed to be watching over us,” she said. “Protecting us…you know? So, for someone as skilled and loyal as he’s supposed to be, why hasn’t he been here when our entire Valley has been conquered by a murderous deranged impostor?”

Her words were greeted with a short silence.

“That’s a good point…” Hyp observed. “I wonder where he is?”

But if the true Lone Dinosaur was not coming, then it seemed the only hope for them was the little kids he used to bully.

“Littlefoot and gang…” he thought admirably. “How far you’ve come. We hope you can liberate us soon.”

*

The code of the fastbiter – to maintain focus in dire situations. To use superior agility and intelligence to take down sheer brawn and any other face of adversity, and too win via your endurance. This is what the tetrarchy claimed, but as Chomper watched in wide-eyed horror, tightly restrained by two burly fastbiters, all he could see was the individual he vowed to look after getting beaten to a bloody pulp.

The tetrarchy had taken them both into a high hollow cave, where, to their utter surprise, what seemed to be the entire pack was waiting. While Chomper was restrained at the side-lines, Nycha was forced to defend herself against a relentless battering from all of the fastbiters, led by the tetrarchy.

“Keep your guard up hatchling!” Pagetona snapped at her, taking a violent swipe at Nycha’s head. Chomper couldn’t tear his eyes away as the claws make contact, sending Nycha careering backwards again onto the stone floor, flecks of her blood splattering onto the ground, ugly red claw marks now visible down her face, still bleeding…

Chomper tried to call out to Nycha as she staggered to her feet, but it seemed his voice had been snatched from him as easily as his freedom. And anyway, what could he have said? Despite the fact that not all the fastbiters were attacking her at once (many holding back and waiting their turn whilst a few others pummelled) it was clear this was far from a fair fight. He got the impression that if this went on any longer, she would be killed.

The voracious dinosaurs paused in their assault as Nycha, panting and with blood running down her face, scrutinized them all carefully with her bright green eyes. Chomper only just realised how much of her brother there was in them. He only hoped the light wouldn’t fade from them in the same way…

Romov (the pink deep-voiced member of the tetrarchy) made the first move, bolting forward without a word, maw opened wide…

Nycha responded the only way she could think of. She promptly leapt backwards as far as she could, covering an impressive five metres before hitting the ground, crouching as her claw’s scraped across the stone floor. She was out of Romov’s reach, but this gave her very little play, as at that moment a jet-black fastbiter pounced upon her, sinking his teeth into her back. Nycha’s screams of pain echoed around the high cave walls, piercing through Chomper’s skull and freezing his spine. His powerlessness plunged deep within him as the blood trickled out of Nycha’s wounds, staining her lilac feathers scarlet.

But then something astonishing happened. Nycha lashed out.

Her fore claws took a hefty swipe at the fastbiter’s head, catching its snout and causing a light sting - enough for him to let go. Nycha took full advantage of this release by promptly leaping high into the air, and performing a skilled rotation of her body that eventually brought her sinister toe-claws hard on top of the raptor’s skull.

The vicious wound that the fastbiter now displayed was unmistakable, as it collapsed to the ground from the force of the kick. Nycha, landing expertly next to him, jumped to the side as Mei, the mahogany female tetrarchy member charged her, getting wrong-footed as the lilac fastbiter rolled SAS-style over the ground, righting herself again and spitting blood out of her mouth ready for more.

And it was clear that another small pause was taking place in the attacking – the fastbiters were clearly impressed. When pushed to the edge, it seemed that Nycha really came into herself. With adrenalin coursing through her veins, avoiding attack, and even retaliating against it, became all too easy.

“Has she ever shown this amount of endurance before?” Pagetona muttered to Fang.

Fang shook his head.

“Though admittedly, she’s never been in the situation where she’s had to defend herself alone,” he said. “It’s possible that she herself is only just discovering this.”

Nycha continued to breathe heavily, feeling her heart hammering against her chest. Sweat was dripping to the floor as it mingled with the endless blood, but somehow she wasn’t focusing too much on it anymore. The only thing she felt like doing was attacking – attacking these monsters that had killed her parents with no regret so long ago. Reaping revenge felt glorious, and she was prepared to fulfil it. The blood was not just dripping from her body, it was also pounding through her head.

As Chomper stared at Nycha now, the familiarity he saw in her eyes was no longer Pyron’s. The hatred, the anger and the desire for revenge – it was him he saw now, and how he had reacted following Pyron’s death. He swallowed as he remembered what he had done following that. She had to calm down before she completely forgot herself. Besides, he had the feeling Pagetona would up the offence now that Nycha was more capable of resisting.

He was right. Suddenly came an almighty charge from almost twenty fastbiters, all intent on finishing Nycha of for good by the sounds of things…and it was amidst all the snarls and screeches of this bloodthirsty mob that Chomper finally found his voice.

“NYCHA!!!” he screamed. “THINK ABOUT WHAT YOU’RE-”

But he was cut short by a severe blow to the back of the head by one of his fastbiter guards. Unlike Nycha’s previous attempt, this blow was something genuine, and Chomper’s vision blurred very quickly until he was out cold.

Nycha had heard his scream, and as she saw him being knocked out, the murder inside her dimmed a little and a few of her senses rushed back…

“You shouldn’t have to let their presence linger on you for years to come – break free! There is so much more to everything you see and realise. You should just learn to be yourself. Because those who matter, don’t mind it. And those who mind it don’t matter.”

She had hardly paid attention to these words when Chomper first spoke it, but now she reflected on what had been said. Here she was, ruthlessly lashing out at the pack, but by doing so, playing right into their hands into becoming a murderous killing machine like them – or by dying, either of which would have served them extremely well. And yet there was a voice, one that had to be silenced because of its desperation, which actually considered her important enough to be maintained the way she was. Something she had been fighting against for years…

When Pagetona pounced down, Nycha made her decision. She leapt once again, skidding back along the ground and making, not for her oppressors, but for the stone wall. Quickly, she began to shin her way up it, hoping to reach a sanctuary to give herself thinking time. But about halfway up, and with Fang and many more fastbiters in pursuit, a whole section of the wall crumbled away…

It was an impressive sight to behold, as this great mass of rock and dinosaur tumbled down to the ground, individuals flying in all directions and Nycha, at the centre of it all, still attempting to stagger to her feet, coughing up blood as she did so, determined not to take death lying down.

But now no fastbiters were moving. All were looking at her with curiosity, even admiration. Eventually, Pagetona stepped forward.

“Well Nycha,” she said, fixing her with a steely glare which Nycha unwaveringly returned.

“It seems we underestimated your skills. What you have shown is an incredible amount of resilience and intuition. A sign of a good hunter. Overnight, we shall consider your position carefully, and for today, we shall leave this endurance test.”

“Right…” Nycha mumbled, nodding uncertainly. “So what happens to me now?”

“You shall spend the night upon an icy outcrop on the east of the mountain,” Pagetona replied. “And…” she gazed disdainfully in the direction of the unconscious Chomper. “The twigarm shall join you…”

*

The Bright Circle winked its merry light over the Rocky Heathland as it descended in the sky. Opal was busy eating at the shrubs that were around, ravenously bolting them down with a euphoric smile on her face. And she had found an eating companion.

Spike too was tucking into the green food as he was all too happily taking his place with Opal. As usual, he hadn’t said a word to her, but Opal was perfectly happen to have a silent companion. She guessed that that way, they could eat more.

Spike’s friends were watching the two of them intently.

“How can they eat so much?” Ruby asked in an almost awed voice.

“It’s a spiketail thing,” Cera replied in a half-amused tone. “Don’t try and understand it…”

Littlefoot heard the words, but wasn’t really listening. He was lying on the ground, his head flat against it, thinking rather deeply about something he probably should been more concerned about to begin with.

A ruthless, sinister longneck called Ulciscor had taken over the entire Great Valley – and Ulciscor thought along the same lines as Kai. It made Littlefoot shudder to imagine Kai imposing his values upon the Valley residents on pain of death, so how much worse would the originator of these ideas be? For the first time, Littlefoot found himself worrying feverishly about his grandparents and everyone else in the Valley. What were they going through right now? And then there was his dad. Did he know this Ulciscor? And if so, how?

In an attempt to put his mind at rest, Littlefoot now examined Opal and Spike dining happily together.

“It’s strange…” he murmured. “They seem so alike…”

“That’s because they’re both ravenous spiketails!” Cera responded, with the air of someone explaining that one plus one is two to an obtuse toddler.

Littlefoot shook his head.

“There’s more to it than that. Somehow they seem…”

“Littlefoot! Cera! Guys!” The call came from over a small hill, causing the gang, plus Opal to look up expectantly at Ali, who now came sprinting towards them all, delight etched firmly in her face

“I passed!” she crowed, practically on the verge of ecstatic tears. “I passed!!”

“That’s amazing!” Littlefoot replied, all thoughts of Ulciscor temporarily forgotten. Him and Ali embraced in the awkward longneck way that involves the collision of bodies, as the other members of gang gathered around to offer their congratulations.

“Thanks guys!” Ali replied, wiping her eyes with her tail. “Means a lot!”

“What about Shorty?” Littlefoot asked, noticing his step-brother slowly sauntering towards them in the distance.

“Ah,” Ali’s smile slipped a little. “Umm…well…he only just failed. He…he didn’t do the third test correctly and well…”

“Mmm…” Littlefoot replied sympathetically, nodding his head understandingly.

“He did great on the other two though,” Ali assured. “Finished them both far quicker than I could have done.” She sighed. “Bron told him it’s not a big deal – he can retake it another time and he’s sure to pass.”

By this time Shorty was in earshot. His expression was fairly devoid of emotion, causing an unbelievable stir of sympathy from everyone watching.

“I’m sorry Shorty,” Littlefoot said earnestly.

“Yeah,” Cera affirmed. “Good luck for next time.”

“We sure you can do it next time, yep, yep, yep!” Ducky added.

Shorty gave them a slightly puzzled look before turning to Ali in what was unmistakable anger.

“I could have told them myself you know!” he snapped.

Ali took a step back.

“Sorry,” she replied. “I just thought that-”

“Well, you thought wrong then, didn’t you?” Shorty growled, kicking a nearby pebble in his frustration. “But I suppose, if you’re a herd leader, by opinion doesn’t really matter…”

“Shorty…” Ali crooned, gingerly stepping closer to him. “I’m so sorry – I should have known better, I know. I was just excited and…”

“It’s OK…” Shorty muttered, not looking at her. “I guess you, at least, have something to be excited about…congratulations.”

Ali stepped towards him and nuzzled him gently.

“We’re all behind you on this one,” she whispered to him, although the statement seemed to fall on deaf ears.

“How do such tests even work?” Screech asked of his brother, scrutinizing the exchange between the kids in the distance.

“Don’t ask me,” Thud replied, tucking into a fish he had just caught. “I ain’t a longneck…”

As Zyro had said, they had to be very careful not to do anything that would entice a reaction from the leaf-eaters, and therefore, hoarding large amounts of dinosaur prey right under their judgemental gaze was strictly forbidden. For the smaller sharpteeth, this was not too much of a problem, as lizards, fish and insects were in abundance around this heathland, but for larger sharpteeth, these were two small to satisfy appetites even on a temporary basis. Therefore, Zyro had permitted large sharpteeth to temporarily leave the heathland in order to go hunting for large leaf-eater prey elsewhere, provided they kept the carcasses out there.

Right now, two such large sharpteeth were preparing to hunt.
Their names were Ross and Rhea – not overly familiar names, but to the rest of us, they are simply Chomper’s parents.

“Ross…” Rhea murmured to her mate. “For everything Zyro’s done…are you sure he can return our son to us, alive and well?”

“I have every faith in him, dear,” Ross replied, a trifle impatiently. “Please do not worry anymore.”

“I’m a mother,” Rhea snapped back. “I think I have every right to be worried. You can never be sure which sharpteeth to put your faith in…a fact of which I’m sure you’re aware?”

Ross merely grunted, but after a few minutes, he began to pick up a strange scent.

“Hang on,” he said. “What’s that?”

“Are you changing the subject again?” Rhea asked wearily.

“Seriously,” he said. “I think there’s another twoclaw in the vicinity…”

“Redclaw?” Rhea questioned, every sense suddenly alert.

“No…” Ross replied, sniffing intently. “Come on – let’s pursue him…I have reason to believe he is not moving – possibly hurt. Come on.”

The two of them continued to sniff around until they came to the source of the smell. It was indeed a twoclaw, one with an elegant pattern of tiger stripes, and he was lying on his stomach, breathing heavily. Ross may have been right, and this individual was hurt. He was certainly exhausted. When he saw the two other twoclaws approaching him, he groaned.

“Please…” he whispered. “I mean you no trouble…”

“We don’t doubt it,” Rhea replied, obvious motherly warmth being emitted as she spoke. “Listen, I think we may be able to help you. What’s your name?”

The twoclaw was immediately alert.

“Ferox,” he said. “And please – I desperately need your help. I am on the run from a deranged bladeback.”

“Who?”

“His name is Xal.”

Ross and Rhea exchanged startled looks.

“I think you’d better come with us,” Ross said.

*

As the night closed in, an icy wind whirled up the snowy debris around the two young Sharptooth as they sat, shivering upon the rocky outcrop near the top of White Mountain. It didn’t matter to them that their true pack was on their way to retrieve them – they weren’t aware of this, and there was little they could do against the bitter cold.

For something to do, Nycha distracted herself by licking her wounds that she had sustained during her gruelling endurance test. Chomper watched her, wanting desperately to say something, but unsure of what…

“You did a good show back there,” he commented.

Nycha paused in her licking and looked up at him, bewilderment clearly visible in her eyes.

“How do you mean a good show?” she asked. “You were unconscious for the best bit!”

“True,” Chomper replied, grinning sheepishly, rubbing the back of his head. It was still painful, and he could only hope it would lessen. “So…do you know what’s going to happen now?”

Nycha sighed and shook her head.

“My only guess is,” she said slowly. “Is that it won’t be overly good for either of us. I’ve been such an idiot. I can’t believe I thought this was a viable alternative for Seizon’s pack. What must you think of me?”

It was an honest question, and clearly one that wasn’t meant to be rhetorical. Nycha was looking intently as Chomper sat and pondered this.

“I think,” he said eventually. “That everyone makes mistakes. And some do have viable excuses for them. It must be terrible feeling how you feel. Inadequate in comparison to everyone, feeling like everyone’s to blame – and then having your brother snatched away from you like that…no wonder you went to pieces.” He smiled sadly at her.

“I’m sorry Nycha,” he said eventually. “I should have seen it coming a long time before, how you felt about everything. I should have been more open with you.”

“You’re sorry?” Nycha gave a slight sniff of laughter. “It’s me who should be sorry. I’ve been unbelievable foul to you, and for what reason? Well, because I was trying to find a scapegoat for my shortcomings. Leaf-eaters and everyone associated with them. I’ve failed to see how open you can be with others, and my failure to do so was the reason you couldn’t be open with me. I’m sorry.”

Pondering this, Chomper got to his feet and paced around slightly, before turning back to her, a small smile on his face.

“It looks like we’ve both got something to be sorry for,” he said. “We’re both used to being outcasts as well – looks like we’ve got more in common than we think.”

“Mmm…” Nycha seemed uninterested as she turned away. “Yeah – except even as an outcasted Sharptooth in a whole community of leaf-eaters, you’ve still got people who care for you, are ready to comfort you when you need it…”

“And yet you don’t think I don’t ever doubt their commitment almost every day?” Chomper asked, staring at her incredulously. Nycha looked back and was amazed to see Chomper was smiling.

“Perhaps the reason I can be more friendly and open with them,” Chomper said to her, moving closer, “is because I’ve only ever been treated with love in various different upbringings, and so, that’s all I can express to others. But you – having your parents killed before you and being chased out of your home. That’s got to put a severe knock on your personality, right?”

Nycha nodded slowly.

“I guess so…”

“And that’s also, I guess, why you fail to see how much of a part you are of us!” Chomper continued, brilliantly. Nycha’s eyes were fixed on him, staring at him like she had never seen him before. Chomper still pressed on.

“People’s perceptions can be flawed,” he said. “One gesture of love may be seen as hate by another. It’s not the fault of those people, but how they were brought up. I’m sure you will agree with me Nycha, that everything that has come to pass you is by no means your fault, and has put an unfair warp into your personality, but I think, somewhere inside you…” He placed a hand on her chest.

“There is still that wonderful, fun-filled Nycha that Pyron told me about. And I will admit, I didn’t see it before, but I can see it now. What you’ve become Nycha, is no fault of yours. And you can fight back against it. Because Pyron was my brother, you are now my sister, and that’s how it will remain. I’m not here to replace him – nobody can do that, but I promise I will try my best to take up the work he’s done, and bring you back to where you should be. The head-strong, independent amazing Nycha that’s all he and I ever wanted you to be. And the Nycha that is a key part to our pack and family, and will always be, for the rest of time.”

As Chomper continued with this wonderful speech, Nycha grew more and more emotional, her green eyes shimmering with tears. Once Chomper had finally finished, a warm smile etched into his mouth and eyes, the tears finally began to flow, and with a strangled joyful sob, she flung her arms around him in a crushing embrace.

“Whoa…” Chomper muttered, quite taken aback.

“Thank you…thank you Chomper…” Nycha muttered in his ear, wiping her eyes. “Oh…why was I ever so cruel to you? I’m so sorry…”

“Don’t be,” Chomper assured her, his smile returning as he patted her on the back.

Nycha eventually released him, still wiping her eyes. Now, a smile of her own was growing on her face.

“A brother to me, eh?” she grinned. “I like it. You know, it was you crying out to me during the endurance test that forced me to come to myself. And I take it we’re still committed to doing everything in Pyron’s memory?”

“Definitely,” Chomper grinned back.

“Excellent,” Nycha replied, winking. “Chomper – I’m so glad I met you. Pyron was lucky to as well…before he died. You’ve shown us both there are so many ways of living, and you’ve got to pick the right for yourself. Honestly, despite what I’ve said before, you’re the best friend I ever could have. Calling you a brother…” she sighed happily. “Is no problem for me.”

“Well, to sleep I think?” Chomper said, so glad he had  finally reached out to her. “And then we can decide what we should do next tomorrow?”

“Yep,” Nycha replied. “I hope the others are here for us then…”

The two of them settled down to sleep, cuddling close together for warmth. Just before they drifted off, Nycha muttered,

“Chomper, do you think snoring is catching?”

“No…” Chomper murmured back. “Why?”

“You’ve been sleeping near Lini,” she chuckled back. “So for me, it’s quite a worry!”

Chomper beamed, and closed his eyes.

Elsewhere however, four fastbiters were debating what should be done next.

“I have no trouble in keeping Nycha in the pack,” Mei said evenly. “Her performance today was extraordinary. I think she has the makings of a pack member.”

“You’ve got to consider her background though,” Fang countered. “Without any family to guide her, she may turn rogue…”

“If she does, we can dispose of her easily,” Romov said calmly. “But if you ask me, the real problem is the twoclaw.”

“Agreed…” Pagetona replied, the only member of the tetrarchy standing. “I don’t know what attraction he has towards her, be we cannot let it be a burden any longer.” She sighed.

“I think we’re all agreed,” she said. “That in the early hours of the morning, we’re taking to this stalker away and killing him.”

~0~

Oh, and it was all going so well.  :lol

Well, I hope you enjoyed the chapter. As you can see, Nycha's undergone a BIG transformation, but my only concern is that this chapter was rushed. I don't know if Chomper or Nycha should have said more to each other.  :oops If you have any ideas, please let me know.  :p

Oh, and Hyp, there's another transformation! Things between Seizon and Saureen are heating up...speaking of Seizon, I'm worried if you fail to see the similarity between him and Shorty (think step-fathers). Alas, poor Shorty. Oh, and hi Ferox!

Anyway, give me your thoughts, and thanks for reading!!!


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I thought Chomper and Nycha said enough to each other in that chapter, but then again, I don't like overly soapy moments much.  :lol

Nycha trying to join her old pack reminds me of some kind of cult initiation ceremony or something.  :blink: They're just trying to see what kind of horrible things they can do to her. It's scary that she's pretty much been... brainwashed to desperately want their admiration.

I really wanna see some more interaction between flatteeth and sharpteeth, but you already knew that. :p

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The way these characters keep having these terrifying transformations is making me want to hide in the battered old shed and never come out! Seriously, can't blame Nycha for the way she acted.

I adore Chomper's speech there. It's great to see these two finally getting on. I love some good ol' character development!

I'm with Saureen here... Seizon's kinda getting on my nerves with his worshipping of Xal and the revolution. Maybe I should knock some sense into him... :smile

Aw, poor Shorty with the longneck test. It was nice to see the way Bron is with him, though. I think with the way Shorty is, his reaction was quite understandable. You seem to have captured his character well. :yes

Omg Hyp changed. He's... mature... :o Oh... so he's plotting with some of the mothers. Do I blame him? This Great Valley isn't so great anymore... I wonder if Grandma and Grandpa are okay, though. :cry

Well, hello there, Ferox! Fancy being rescued by Chomper's parents. :o

Uh oh, I hope Chomper will be able to escape the Tetrarchy. :goodluck

Well, I think you know what I'm going to say to this. Great work again, Toby. Can't wait for the next chapter. :exactly


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What  really admire is how easily you change between the character scenarios - it's like you're flipping a switch :yes effortlessly done, and makes for smoother storyline!

Oh wow, too many things to say about this chapter. I guess I'll start with Nycha and Chomper - nervous about what may happen, but so very, very glad that they had that chance to make up and really connect. As for the tetrarchy, they deserve to be stampeded, I'm sorry, I don't like characters to die, but you've opened my eyes up to how cruel characters CAN be, so yeah, they can die and I won't feel a whit of sympathy :p

Happy about the progress of the rebel Valleians, sounds like they've got a chance :)

And at this point I'm just hopping up and down and going "OPAL!!! WILL YOU GET A MOMENT OF REVELATION ALREADY?!?!" XDD
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And here be the next chapter! You'd better to enjoy it!  :o  ;) I think its important to stress how important and pivotal this chapter is - included within it is the long-awaited flashback concerning Ulciscor...and there will be more to come. With the exception of Ulciscor's flashback (that is told more as a narrator's story) thoughts and flashbacks will be indicated in italics.
Umm...enjoy!!! (Mild language.)

Chapter Seventeen: A Sibling Connection

It was on the same moonless night which saw a large bellydragger lying silently within a forest, deep in thought. Her nostrils quivered in the chilled air as she detected a vaguely familiar scent approach her from above.

“What do you want Ichy?” she growled.

“Want?” Ichy sounded rather amused as he perched on her snout. “Not a lot actually – Xal doesn’t seem to have much use for me now. He told me there’s no point in going in pursuit of Seizon any more if they’re on their way back. And he said going after Ferox was, after this time, a pointless activity, as our enemies have no way of discovering any new motives anyway, cause, well…there are none.”

“He’s right,” Dil grunted. “So what’s your point?”

“My point is - I’m bored!!” Ichy whined. “Even that damn Redclaw gets extensive training and energetic activity, as a member of the Piercer Platoon. Perhaps even soon a commander! I want to get on with this glorious revolution! I want to fight and…what???”

For Dil was now laughing humourlessly at him, shaking her head and causing him to tremble.

“You, in a fight?” she cackled. “You wouldn’t last two seconds against any of those hefty Bludgeoners! Or the Piercer’s for that matter…”

“You can’t see to land blows on anyone!” Ichy snapped back. “You’ll someone giving you directions like some sort of tour guide. And anyway, why would we need to fight Piercers? They’re on our side.”

“Maybe…” Dil sighed. “But I get the feeling that, to Xal, and certainly more so to this nutter Gigas, we’ll be nothing but a burden upon this army once the time is right, and we’ll have to fight our way out of this forest against the Piercers once he sets them on us. I swear they’re giving me contemptuous glares already…”

Ichy shook his head dismissively.

“Nah,” he said. “Must have been a squint. And yes, that was a direct reference to your appalling eyesight. Look, Xal knows better than to get rid of us. He can’t do this without us – we are the core fighters and cornerstones of any such army as this! To get rid of us would be…well…”

“Hang about…” Dil murmured, her ears pricking up. “What’s that?”

Ichy quickly shut up and tuned his ears into what was being said as well. And, with his superior eyesight, he could make out who it was who was talking.

Between a gap in the branches of the trees ahead of them, Xal and Redclaw’s silhouettes were visible against the cloudy night sky. Their conversation was not hushed, which seemed as though Xal had no shame at all with being associated with the one he had previously despised. This was rather unsettling to the curious pair, as they strained their ears to listen in.

“I’m impressed,” Xal was saying. And he sounded it too – he was never one to show emotions too obviously. “You’re progressing well with the Piercer Platoon.”

“Thank you, Xal,” Redclaw replied. “I take it that means I’m liable for a commanding position?”

Xal hesitated.

“Perhaps,” he replied eventually. “But be careful where you stand Redclaw! The memories of your tyranny have not gone away…”

“Of course…” Although it was difficult to see in the darkness, Ichy got the impression from the way Redclaw said those last two words that an immortal grin was spreading across his face.

“We’ll see how well you comply with our plan,” Xal replied levelly. “That Ambassador of ours is required for our revolution to work. He shall tell us exactly what we need to know to annex the entire Valley. And despite your past with them, you will allow him to do that.”

“Certainly,” Redclaw replied. “However…”

At that moment, the clouds in the sky behind swept aside, allowing the Night Circle to beam down upon them, illuminating Redclaw’s face. Ichy and Dil were barely able to hide their gasps as they saw this contorted, leering mask of evil shining in the darkness before them.

“If he needs persuading…” Redclaw hissed. “If he is reluctant to help us…may I give him that little ëboost’ he needs?”

Xal closed his eyes. Even with the moonlight, his expression was still unreadable.

“Yes,” he said. “Whatever works…”

*

As dawn began to break, four exhausted travellers found themselves in a chilling wasteland.

“White Mountain?” Lini looked around, puzzled. “Are you sure this is right?”

“This is where their scent leads,” Al replied, shrugging.

“What would they come here for though?” Saureen pondered, gazing up at the mighty pearly mountain.

“There could be a whole host of reasons,” Seizon shot back, flexing his arms. “Let’s just get on with getting them back!”

Alas, what Seizon was unaware of was the fact that another group was closing in upon the sleeping pair. It was a shame they didn’t stick by and watch them for longer – Chomper and Nycha cuddled up together like siblings to sleep was a phenomenon that had never occurred before. But what did they care? Nycha was the only one viable to join their pack. To them, Chomper was simply a waste of space.

Romov and Mei had been given the task of nabbing him without waking Nycha. It was not the easiest of tasks, but using their precision and skill, they carefully plucked him from the spot and clamped their claws over his snout.

Chomper was immediately awake, but all he could do was eye the situation horror-struck as his muffled cries failed to wake up his sleeping companion.

“Sorry love…” Mei hissed, her tongue snaking out over her teeth. “But you’re no longer of use to us. You cannot remain in our pack, and so we are going to dispose of you. But fear not – it shall be done honourably and traditionally. You will have your throat cut by a member of the tetrarchy’s sickle-claw. Such a swift and merciless death don’t you think?” She cackled softly and Romov rolled his eyes.

“Cease talking Mei, we have a job to do. Let’s just get him back to the cave.”

“Of course,” Mei replied, still grinning. “Sorry twoclaw – but you’re a pointless waste of space! We need to do something…”

Still carrying Chomper and restraining him tightly, she and Romov headed away. As luck would have it, just a few moments later, Nycha awoke blearily, stretching, yawning, and reminiscing in what was the best night’s sleep she had had in ages, with someone who was now a brother…

And speaking of which, where was that brother?

She looked around the small outcrop she and Chomper and slept on. He may have gone off to hunt for breakfast, but surely the footprints would tell such a story?

She gazed down at the footprints still visible in the snow. There were no sign of Chomper’s, just two sets of adult fastbiters’…

The penny dropped and the terrifying truth sunk deep into Nycha’s heart. She had witnessed it before, the tetrarchy’s so-called ënecessary killing,’ where sharpteeth thought to be intruding on the pack’s sovereignty in whatever area they were in, were killed in front of everyone before the body was immediately cannibalized…

With a sickening wrench of her gut, Nycha suddenly had a vision of Pagetona smiling sadly at her and saying, ëSorry, but it looks as though your twig-armed friend just run away and left you. Looks like he wasn’t such a good companion after all.’
Nycha’s blood began to boil. It would be just like them, wouldn’t it? Covering up their horrendous crimes by twisting the tales and characters of their victims. Well, Nycha had now grown to be wiser to that. The tetrarchy may not think much of Chomper, but to Nycha, he was one of the most important people in the world – a wonderful and selfless Sharptooth who had helped Pyron release her from the prison inside her head. And now the tetrarchy, who had been the cause of the prison in the first place, was trying to take him away. Well, no more. Nycha no longer cared for consequences. Today was the judgement day, where everything in her life would finally come to a head, and she would do everything in her power to save the ones she cared about.

Because they cared for her first.

*
Kai, flanked by two Bludgeoners, slowly approached Ulciscor.

“Nothing sir,” he said. Ulciscor nodded slowly.

“Right…no sign of any work being neglected? Not even a little bit?”

“Well, it’s difficult to assess,” Kai replied. “But nothing that we can see.”

Ulciscor frowned. Yesterday he had received a strange report from a Bludgeoner, telling him that the usual population of the Valley seemed to have shrunk somewhat – at least sometimes, with many Valleians missing for hours at a time. Judging by the security outside the Great Wall, there was no chance of them having left the Valley itself. Not to mention the normal labour was being completed to a sufficient standard.

“If this is another rebellious ploy,” Ulciscor snapped at them. “Then it needs to be stamped out at once. Kai, I need you to search the Valley for me, this time as thorough as you can make it, searching for any location that these dinosaurs may hide in during their absentee period. And if you can, what they need such a location for.”

“On it,” Kai nodded, moving off quickly.

“And Shock,” Ulciscor said, addressing a Bludgeoner commander. “I need you and the other Bludgeoners to interrogate as many other Valley members as you can, seeing if they know anything about the whereabouts of the usual suspects.” He smiled briefly. “And if they seem to be with-holding information, beat it out of them.”

Shock nodded and also moved off.

Ulciscor closed his eyes as if praying for patience. Noticing this, a certain someone in a nearby tree laughed.

“If you want a secret location found, Ulciscor,” Rinkus cackled. “Then look no further!”

Ulciscor fixed him with a contemptuous glare.

“I wasn’t asking you,” he spat. “I needed you only for keeping in contact with my allies.”

“Surely you can think of better usage?” Rinkus asked, looking mildly disgruntled.

“I have no need for a cackling klutz anymore,” Ulciscor yawned. “Rinkus – consider this an honourable discharge.”

“What?!”

“You heard me.” Ulciscor was walking away now. It was clear he was bored with the conversation already. “Now I suggest you leave…unless…” He twisted back to look at the flyer.

“Unless you want to be discharged with something a little bit more dramatic? Do I even need to remind you of that damn clubtail?”

Rinkus’ face was twisted into an ugly expression. Actually, it was ugly before he had started, but now it was even worse.

“I can’t believe you,” he muttered. “I joined you willingly out of the sheer hatred I have for these stupid people and you just-”

“It’s not about revenge,” Ulciscor interrupted. “It’s about putting the world right.”

Scowling, Rinkus spread his wings and took flight.

“You’ll regret this Ulciscor!” he growled as he flew away over the mountains and out of sight.

“Of that,” Ulciscor murmured to himself. “I have no intention.”

*
Pagetona’s eyes shimmered with a sadistic delight as she surveyed Chomper, kneeling before her, his arms spread out as they were held to tightly by Romov and Fang, their respective feet pinning down his shoulders, securing him tightly.

“Looks like you got the short straw,” she hissed. “I shall be the one to end your insignificant life. Any last words?”

“Oh yeah,” Chomper growled in reply, lifting his head up to face her, venom in his eyes. “When the time finally comes for you to die, take the time you have left to consider what a pointless thing your life has been. Consider how you, unlike me, have nothing to die for.”

It was clear such a statement had got right under Pagetona’s pure white skin. She bristled angrily, a soft snarl emitting between her gritted teeth.

“To die for?” she snapped. “What a sentimentally worthless phrase, befitting with your worthless life. And worthless words can’t save you now!”

“That’s funny,” Chomper replied, still as coolly as ever. “That’s all I’ve heard from you.”

By now, Pagetona’s eye had developed a twitch. Wisely refraining from saying anything more, she took a few steps back and slowly raised her leg.

In a sudden flurry of movement she spun her way forward, lashing her leg out…

Chomper swallowed and closed his eyes. So this was it…

But the blow never came, and all Chomper heard was a crunch and a shriek of pain from Pagetona herself. Opening his eyes, he saw what had happened, and felt an intense rush of warmth filling his heart and hope and flowing through the rest of his body.
In a single act that avoided personal injury, a small individual had got between Chomper and Pagetona, chomping down fiercely on the latter’s foot, preventing her from sinking her claws into Chomper and herself. And Chomper recognised the lilac feathers and determined little green eyes immediately.

“Nycha!” he cried in delight. Nycha winked at him and promptly twisted her neck, sending Pagetona, who was already off-balance, sliding straight into Fang, forcing him to let go of Chomper’s arm. Better prepared, Chomper then immediately wriggled free from Romov’s grip also and ran towards Nycha. The two greeted each other with a one-armed hug as they ran for cover – the rest of the fastbiters weren’t too happy with what had just taken place.

“There’s got to be an easier way out!” Chomper panted.

They had just reached the mouth of the cave, the rest of the fastbiters almost catching up with them, when they were both suddenly grabbed…

“What…?” Nycha gasped.

Four familiar young sharpteeth had grabbed the two of them, and had pulled them to the side, where the six of them all began to roll haphazardly down the slope, gathering snow as they went, the fastbiters reluctant to follow them.

They eventually reached the bottom of the slope, collapsing in a heap, slightly worse for wear, blinking bemusedly.

Then they all burst out laughing.

The six of them were just sitting there, almost in hysterics, laughing about what had just happened. All burden at that point seemed to vanish, Chomper felt. Nycha’s self-loathing and anger had gone, they had escaped from the hands of the tetrarchy, and the pack had come to rescue them. Everything seemed fine…right?

Saureen immediately seized Chomper and pulled him into a tight hug, with Lini doing the same, before moving on and giving Nycha the same treatment – as did Saureen.

“Good to see you,” Seizon grinned, jovially greeting Chomper with a fierce handshake. “How’re things?” It was as though Chomper had just gone out on a day trip.

“Great actually,” Chomper replied. “Nycha’s really turned a corner…”

He beamed back at her. “That was some dramatic entrance Nycha,” he chuckled. Nycha laughed.

“Thanks!” she beamed back.

“Yeah…Pyron would have been proud at what you’ve achieved,” Chomper added tenderly.

Nycha nodded, still smiling proudly, a faraway look in her eyes. For the first time, the entire group was getting along. Being held together, just the way Pyron had desired.

“Oh brother,” she thought dreamily, Pyron’s grinning, orange feathered head appearing in her consciousness. “How far you’ve plucked this group from the depths!”

Al sniffed the air briefly.

“I hate to break this up,” he said. “But I think our chuckle may be short-lived.”

He predicted correctly, for at that moment, Mei, the mahogany red tetrarchy member leapt down from a small peak in front of them.

“Too right!” she snarled. “You lot have got a lot to answer for!”

“You think?” Lini snarled back. “You have no power to wield over us!”

She was angry, a fact that rendered Chomper quite non-plussed. Lini was never angry – she always took her bubbly attitude and applied it to everything under the sun. Now however, all of that bubble was gone, her sapphire eyes taking on a new attitude, as icy as the wind that criss-crossed around her, and her shocking red scales may well have been from a smoking mountain.

Mei, unfazed, gave a derisive cackle.

“Oh yeah?” she sneered. “And who are you to stop me…?”

She was caught off guard when Lini responded by promptly barrelling into her, ramming her forcefully with her powerful cranium and sending her staggering into the snow.

“You guys concentrate on getting away from here before those other punks get to us,” Lini said to the pack, her eyes still furiously fixed on Mei. “I’m dealing with this bitch. Saureen?”

“Yeah.” Saureen looked riled too. She strode forward to take her place next to Lini. “I’ll deal with her too.”

“We can’t leave any of you here!” Nycha protested, standing her ground.

“We’ll be fine!” Lini insisted. “Besides, you can help find an escape route that avoids all of the other fastbiters, and then come back for us – by which time we’ll be done with this one!”

“Got it,” Seizon nodded. “Good luck.”

As both Lini and Saureen allowed their righteous anger to take over them and leapt upon the snarling Mei, the other four made a hasty skedaddle.

“A girls’ fight, I guess?” Al chuckled, nudging Chomper. “You don’t want to get in their way when they’re riled up.”

“How come I couldn’t stay then…?” Nycha murmured reproachfully.

“Believe me, you’ve been through enough already,” Chomper assured her, smiling a little before taking her hand and squeezing it tightly.

He didn’t know quite why he chose that moment to do such a thing, but for Nycha, this was a zenith. Everything in her life concerning how badly the tetrarchy had treated her and her family was finally coming to a head. She was bound to be windswept by this whole affair, and so any comforting action, no matter how small, would hopefully make her feel slightly calmer. It seemed to do the trick – already the two of them seemed to have a sibling connection.

“Heads up!” Seizon suddenly yelled. The other three saw exactly what he was yelling about and instantly leapt back down the snowy slope as a whole gang of fastbiters descended upon them. Their sliding misplaced a lot of the snow and ice, sending it under the feet of the upright fastbiters and causing their top-heavy statures to slip and tumble at high speeds further down the slope and…

The four young sharpteeth hadn’t had time to find a better location, and, unbeknownst to them, had took their escape route just above a sheer drop about a hundred metres down. Being smaller and already tucked into a relatively safe sliding position, the pack members did not slip over the edge. Other fastbiters however, weren’t quite as lucky. There were terrified screeches and scrapples and the icy rocks as a whole load of them went tumbling over the precipice to their deaths.

As the avalanche slowed, Seizon got unsteadily to his feet, using a nearby rock for support.

“Well…” he gasped. “That was…”

He didn’t get time to say what it was, as suddenly, practically out of nowhere, a turquoise fastbiter had leapt in front of him, delivering a flying kick directly to his face. Fang, it seemed, had evaded getting flung clean over the edge, and was now sending the young bladeback to such a fate…

“SEIZON!!!” his three companions screamed in unison.

Seizon was very lucky – he knew how to position himself in a gripping position as he careered through the air, and clung perilously onto the rocky edge. It was a close thing though – he could feel the ice slipping under his claws, causing deep gouge marks to appear in its shining cold surface as he inched closer and closer to the horrific drop that would certainly spell his doom.

And Fang was going to make sure he was sent that way.

“End of the line little biter!” he cackled, charging towards him with the intent of flicking him off. Al instantly sprang into action, fastening his jaws in a terrific chomp onto Fang’s tail, distracting him long enough for Seizon to hoist himself up and deliver an assault onto Fang’s flank.

Chomper and Nycha both rushed forward to help, but Chomper skidded to a halt when he heard Nycha’s high-pitched scream from behind him. His insides shrank and his eyes widened when he saw Romov, his jaws clasped around Nycha’s tail, dragging her slowly towards-

Chomper didn’t even want to think about it. He hadn’t even conceived a plan in his head as he dashed towards Romov. All he knew is that he didn’t want to see Nycha the way he had seen Pyron, on her back, with the life running out of her almost as quickly as her blood…

Chomper made it to Romov and did the first thing he could think of – shove his claws into his eyes.

Romov let out a great howl, releasing Nycha as he swung his head up, catapulting Chomper onto his back. Recognising an advantage, he promptly bit down onto his back. Hollering and half-blinded by the severe cutting to his eyes, Romov blundered forward, suddenly tripping and beginning to slide predictably to the edge of the peak.

“Chomper!” Nycha grabbed him by his arm and yanked him off the falling body. “You’re such a reckless idiot sometimes!”

“Says you!” Chomper laughed indignantly. The two of them watched incredulously as Romov careered over the edge of the precipice and promptly plunged to his death. One of the tetrarchy was dead – it was almost as though a chain that bound Nycha was broken. He could see it in her eyes – liberation at last!

Then something hard and very sharp caught Chomper on the side of the head, knocking him off his feet and into the snow. Raising his head and blinking blood out of his eyes and spitting it out of his mouth, he saw the ominous white shape of Pagetona standing where he was a few minutes ago, cold fury clear on every line of her face.

“You pathetic brats…” she hissed. “How dare you undermine my authority? I am the newest member of the tetrarchy, and this is what I get as I begin my leadership?? You’ll never get away with this one…”

“We already have,” Nycha snarled back, a new reckless temper rising in her. “Face it Pagetona – you’re a dead-end failure, along with the rest of the tetrarchy and you’re never going to control us, or hurt any of us again.” She leapt at her, claws and jaws aimed for her throat. Pagetona let out a deathly screech, back-flipping onto a rock that formed pretty much a stepping stone for a higher-peak.

“Let’s settle this in a true fashion then,” she growled. “Come and get me if you’re-aaaRRRGHH!!!”

Chomper had caught up with her, and was biting fiercely into her tail.

“Challenge accepted…” Nycha hissed under her breath, dashing and leaping after her mortal foe.

*
The two sets of jaws latched onto each other and the ferocious wrestle between Lini and Mei commenced. Lini was attempting to grip her foe in her claws, leaving lethal looking scrapes where her claws had dug in. Mei, for the time being, seemed unfazed, and continued to claw at Lini is exactly the same way.

Saureen was attempting to help out as much she could, and was trying to deliver a hefty bite to Mei’s flank. This was easier said than done, as Mei kept on shuffling her feet as she pushed with all her might against Lini. But this wasn’t to say she hadn’t noticed it.

“Stupid little twigarm,” she thought reproachfully to herself. “I’ll make her suffer for this…”

She quickly unlatched her jaws from Lini’s head, causing a surprised Lini to stagger forwards slightly. Taking advantage of her being caught off guard, she slammed her chin on top of Lini’s head, and then reversed the situation by head-butting her chin, sending her staggering backwards, finally falling to the ground when Mei swatted her with her tail.

Then she turned her attention to Saureen.

Seeing this shift in attention, Saureen quickly made an attempt to defend herself more affectively, promptly biting hard into Mei’s wrist. This was rather unwise however – even though Mei gave a howl of pain, Saureen was in an extremely vulnerable position, and Mei simply took her other clawed hand and struck it hard across Saureen’s head.

Saureen gave a strangled gasp as dots of snow around her were stained red with her blood. Dazed, she slipped over backwards and attempting to crawl out of the way as Mei advanced upon her, licking her chops with vile excitement.

Lini had gotten to her feet by this point, and made another attempt to charge the fastbiter. She was unsuccessful – Mei had raised a leg to block the slashclaw’s advances, and Lini winced as the infamous sickle-claw cut into her shoulder, wet blood beginning to run down her arm. With a simple kick, Lini was once again knocked aside by this fastbiter leader.

“And now for you…” Mei hissed, sadistic malice glowing in her eyes and drool dripping off her maws. Saureen made to get up, but a stomp down on her chest rendered her pinned to the ground.

“It’s not as if I haven’t tasted twoclaw before,” Mei continued, growing more delighted as Saureen’s eyes continued to widen. “But maybe it’ll taste nicer fresh – whilst you’re still alive! Maybe I’ll start with your intestines!”

She raised her claw.

Lini suddenly had a horrific dÈj‡ vu, coupled with a flashback…

The blood ran in a thin torrent onto the rocky ground. The flies buzzing around the horrifying open wound did a lot to stem the feeble moaning of the Sharptooth, still alive, lying on the ground with his guts hanging out…

“You get first pick,” the elder said.

Not caring or even noticing the fellow sharptooth’s distress, Lini licked her lips ravenously and bent down…


NO! That was not going to happen, not on her watch!

Before Mei could sink her claws into Saureen, the eerie cold mountain air was split in two by a savage, blood-curdling, deafening roar, which echoed precariously around, coming back and haunting all listeners many times after.

This was the roar of the slashclaw, of the Giganotosaurus, one of the mightiest Sharptooth races in history, and such a roar struck fear into all those who listened. Mei even paused in her leering to stare in shock at Lini, ever the sweet and innocent, now bellowing this unimaginable auditory horror show. The look in her eyes told her everything she needed to know. She had crossed an unimaginable line, and was about to pay the price.

“Saureen, get out of here!” Lini yelled, thundering towards her foe, prepared for blood…

*

It was an isolated spot, so far removed from the rest of the goings-on around the Valley, that to an outsider, it seemed there was nothing wrong with Valley at all – it was just as peaceful as it should be.

Two elderly longnecks were dozing upon the mossy ground, savouring the fact that Ulciscor was too busy dealing with the threat of a possible rebellion to be closely scrutinizing them.

Aster opened his eyes, and gazed briefly around at the area before sighing and nuzzling his wife closely. Arianna opened her eyes too, allowing the affection as she lay there, wondering…

“What do you think the others are doing?” she asked quietly.

“You mean in terms of what Ulciscor’s all tied up with?” he replied. “No idea – but I hope it’s something that will remove him from these premises…”

“This is our own son we’re talking about,” Arianna reminded him. “But I agree with you completely.” She sighed. “How on earth did it come to this?” she asked. “Did we do something horribly wrong?”

“No,” Aster assured her. “It must have been his own doing…somehow…”

*
They were not the only ones with Ulciscor on their minds.

Bron surveyed the Rocky Heathland, vaguely noticing his biological and adopted sons and all their friends engaging in some exciting activity, and Old One conversing with Zyro about a new-comer. But he wasn’t overly focusing on them – he was too busy thinking whether or not with-holding information on his brother-in-law was going to do the group any harm. Like his parents-in-law, he was thinking – how did it come to this?

*
The story begins many years ago, in the Mysterious Beyond, where longneck herds all passed each in mutual harmony and informed others of great and varied places and events. Such story-speakers were revered amongst the rest of them, and all of them lived in expectation for a time when a story-speaker would nominate another to take their place.

One such story-speaker, whom we know as Aster, had just delivered a great and tantalizing story at the Speaker Oasis – a place where longnecks far and wide flocked to hear the great stories told. Taking a break from speaking for now, Aster returned to a small lake to reunite with his wife, Arianna.

“I tell you dear,” he said to her, smiling broadly. “Many of that crowd have the makings of story-speakers. One lad, name of Saro, in particular!”

“It seems the future is bright then,” Arianna agreed. “But seriously – get a drink or your throat will dry up from all that speaking!”

A young grey longneck who was sitting, bobbing along slightly, in the centre of the lake, was gazing at his parents with interest.

“A story-speaker, huh?” Ulciscor murmured to himself, leaning back in the water and allowing him to float around on his back. “I could definitely be one of them! Dad tells me all of those fantastic stories anyway – I could recite most of them…”

“Still…” he thought. “Telling stories is all very well and good, but what about actually being in them? That would be novel wouldn’t it? Maybe in years to come, all these story-speakers will be speaking stories of the adventures of the great Ulciscor…”

Ulciscor was just thinking about how best to become a longneck legend, when he noticed a quivering form on the bank that he had just floated past. Smiling, he righted himself in the water to look at his little sister.

“Come on Saura!” he coaxed. “The water’s lovely!”

Saura frowned in a way that clearly showed she thought the exact opposite.

“It looks…well, rather…” she murmured.

“What?” Ulciscor asked, sighing with an impatient air. “Big? Wet? Watery? I hate to break it to you sis, but those are general and repetitive features of water. Now are you coming in or not?”

Saura took a deep breath before diving straight in on top of her brother.

“I didn’t mean on top of me!!!” Ulciscor whined. Saura just laughed and lay back in the water.

“Be careful what you wish for!” she teased.

“Yeah whatever!” Ulciscor laughed. “Just be careful – you ain’t a swimmer!”

“Hmm…” Saura agreed, suddenly thinking. “How come there aren’t any swimmers here? This water should be perfect for them!”

Ulciscor stared at her as if she were insane.

“Well, this place is for longnecks!” he said. “We never do anything with other kinds…”

“Why not?”

“Well…” Ulciscor shrugged. “Because we’re different. It’s always been that way.”

Saura frowned, but Ulciscor just laughed.

“I don’t see what the problem is. You never get great stories out of any other herds…which reminds me, I want story-speakers to tell stories of me in the future!”

Saura gave him a puzzled look.

“Do you even think that’s possible?”

“Why not?” Ulciscor asked eagerly. “Other longnecks have done it! In fact, I’m going to go in search of an adventure right now!”

“What? Are you crazy???” Saura demanded.

“Oh, where’s your sense of adventure?” Ulciscor teased. “Well, if you’re going to stay here scaredy-egg, I’ll be back later!”

Without a backwards glance at his sister, Ulciscor got out of the lake and trotted off towards some mangrove trees nearby, deciding to be daring and exploring what he deemed as uncharted territory. And technically it was – unfortunately for him, following a few tangles in vines and walking around in circles, he found himself lost in dense undergrowth. But he didn’t overly mind.

“This is the sort of thing such legendary longnecks would have to put up with,” he told himself. “Like the Lone Dinosaur – hmm…maybe I could be the second Lone Dinosaur? Ulciscor the Sharptooth Slayer?”

Yes…that had a nice ring to it. Ulciscor grinned to himself. He could imagine charging through terrified longneck herds to restore calm and hunting down all the villainous sharpteeth that scared them so…oh yes, that would be a way of getting him into the Great Longneck Stories!

His daydreaming was cut off abruptly by a rustle in the nearby bushes. Gasping, he readied his tail for action.

“My first Sharptooth!” he whispered excitedly to himself. He couldn’t help but feel a little worried about the prospect of a Sharptooth, but still, he had to start his career somehow…

The interesting thing about whatever was stalking him however was that he could hardly hear any footsteps. In fact, if it wasn’t for the rustling, he probably wouldn’t even have noticed it.

“I’m no Sharptooth!” protested a voice to his left. Ulciscor quickly turned on the spot as a spindly brown longneck about his own age emerged from the undergrowth.

“I guessed you weren’t,” Ulciscor lied, lowering his tail. “I mean…I didn’t even hear you coming…what’s up with your legs?” he gestured.

“What about them?” the other longneck was clearly confused about what to make of this brash, confident individual.

“They’re so…little!!” Ulciscor claimed. He grinned wryly. “I guess I’ll just call you…Littlefoot!”

The other longneck laughed.

“That’s not my name! My name’s Bron!”

“I’m Ulciscor,” Ulciscor replied, nodding politely. “And…well…it doesn’t hurt to have a nickname…right Littlefoot?”

Bron laughed again.

“Great!” he said. “So…I’m just the little-legged longneck to you?”

“Maybe…” Ulciscor grinned. “But there’s nothing wrong with having little legs…good for stealth I think! It certainly worked on me.”

“What would I need stealth for?” Bron asked curiously.

“Sneaking up on sharpteeth,” Ulciscor replied. “One day, I’m determined to become the icon of the Great Longneck Stories by becoming a known Sharptooth slayer!”

“Sounds interesting,” Bron agreed. “But why do we need to sneak up on them?”

“Sharpteeth are cowards,” Ulciscor replied, his face curling. “They’d never dare attack a herd this size…especially one of longnecks. By the way…”

He turned back to Bron.

“Is your family from around here?”

“No,” Bron shook his head. “We just migrated here to hear the Great Speakers – Frazer, Diplocia, Aster…”

“That’s my dad!” Ulciscor crowed.

“No way, really??” Bron seemed awed.

“Oh yeah!” Ulciscor grinned. “Come on – I’ll introduce to my folks. Once I can work my way out of here, of course…and my little sister! She decided to be a scaredy-egg and not come out here, but I’m sure she’ll take to you – Littlefoot!”

The two of them laughed once more and sprinted off.

*

Saura had indeed taken to him, Bron reflected, his eyes now fixed on the result – his own son. How he wished she were still alive. He could use her comfort right now…they all could.

It was amazing how, since then, everything had escalated. Bron didn’t know what he should tell Littlefoot – that the murderous despot who was now terrorizing the Great Valley was the one who had chosen his name, as innocent sounding as it was? And how Ulciscor’s influence had been the reason for Bron’s absence during his birth? How would he feel then?

It was a tricky decision, and Bron didn’t feel as though he could talk to anybody about it. They wouldn’t understand…except perhaps…

Bron’s eyes shifted down to a lone spiketail. Opal may have little memory of her past, but perhaps her disconnection with everyone else made her the best listener – the best impartial judge to hear Bron’s story.

Bron took note of that, before heading towards Zyro to see what he had to say about this newcomer.

*
“Dammit!” a young Nycha cursed to herself as the fish she was attempting to hunt escaped her grasp yet again.

“Problem?” her brother laughed as she probed around in the small stream.

“No!” she lied. “Well…possibly…”

Pyron grinned at her.

“I’ll tell you what – I’ll stand at one end, and chase the fish up towards you, yeah?”

“How will that work?” Nycha asked, puzzled.

“Oh, it will,” Pyron assured. “Now – get ready!”

The result was simple – Pyron chased the fish upstream into Nycha’s waiting claws.

“Great…” she murmured, flopping the dead fish onto the bank.

“You see,” Pyron said, walking over to her. “Teamwork always comes with the best results. That’s what we are as a pack, right? A team.”

Nycha nodded. “I guess so…”

“When mum and dad go out hunting,” Pyron continued. “They work as a team. They communicate to each other – that’s what’s important. If there was no communication, teamwork would be useless.”

“Good thing we worked as a team then!” Nycha grinned, earning a beam back from her brother as the siblings shared a tender hug.


Nycha wasn’t going to forget Pyron’s brotherly teachings in a hurry. As she and Chomper continued to try and land bites on a whirling and stomping Pagetona, she realised that all she needed was a decent form of communication. And they had one…

Last night, sleeping in the freezing cold hadn’t been easy, and so Chomper came up with a good initiative to pass the time.

“I’m going to teach you,” Chomper said earnestly. “To speak flattooth.”

Nycha looked at him sceptically.

“What – you mean to squeak and grunt?” she asked.

Failing to hide a smile, Chomper continued.

“It is actually more sophisticated than it sounds. I guess being hatched by leaf-eaters makes it easier for me to learn the language, but it shouldn’t be too difficult to teach you.”

“How do you distinguish the grunts into actual words then?” Nycha asked.

“I think it’s generally to do with the pitch,” Chomper replied. “How high or low the grunt is can determine what sort of word class it’s in.”

Nycha still looked a little confused.

“I’ll start with something simple,” Chomper continued hastily. “I’ll teach you to say your name. Listen very carefully – Nycha.”

Nycha nodded and then attempted herself.

“Wow…” Chomper muttered. “That was pretty fluent! Nice one!”


Admittedly, she was still rusty even now, but a few simple words in a language Pagetona couldn’t distinguish should be enough to give her the upper hand.

“Chomper – the legs!” Nycha called to him in flattooth. Chomper understood – if they took both out at the same time…

The two of them surged forward in unison to grip one of Pagetona’s legs in their jaws. They then pulled, unbalancing the fastbiter and sending her crashing to the snowy ground.

Their victory was short-lived however. Pagetona rolled over on top of Chomper, flattening him against the snow, and then righting herself and placing her foot on his head.

“One false move Nycha…” she hissed. “And I’ll gouge out his brains!”

Nycha swallowed and didn’t move any closer.

“I bet you think you’re so big, don’t you?” Pagetona growled. “But in reality, Nycha, you’re a pathetic little girl who’ll amount to nothing…”

These words stung into Nycha deeper than a voracious insect. But surely…this was all they ever thought of her?

“Don’t listen to her Nycha!” Chomper gave a muffled yell. But he yelled it in flattooth – something that Pagetona didn’t understand and so Nycha could consider it without her reaction…who was she going to trust? A murderous back-stabbing fastbiter, or a true friend and guardian?

Chomper, twisting his jaws around, bit Pagetona’s foot, relieving the pressure from his head and allowing him to leap to his feet and avoid her claws.

“You alright?” Nycha asked him, relief flooding her entire being.

“Yeah,” Chomper replied. “But it’s going to be difficult taking her out…”

“I know…” As they leapt aside to avoid Pagetona once more, Nycha found herself looking up to the highest peak of the mountain, with a slippery slope of snow and ice, one that could easily provide momentum…

“Chomper!” Nycha shouted, once more in flattooth. “Leave this to me!”

*

Fang couldn’t believe it. He had served as a member of the tetrarchy for years, rolling out hunting strategies and battle plans…and for what?

By the looks of things, to get savagely beaten up by a pair of juveniles.

No more allies were coming to help him, and Al was making use of that by, with help from Seizon, flinging everything at him from pieces of tree to rocks – all with resourceful uses of whatever they could find.

In a desperate attempt to assert his authority once more, Fang lashed out at Seizon, kicking him squarely in the chest and sending him careering back into the snow. Though this distraction was all Al needed.

“Think you can make examples of us?” he growled. Before Fang could defend himself, an entire tree fell on top of him.

“You’ll never understand what true strength is!”

“That’s right…” Seizon murmured joyfully as Fang staggered to his feet. Pelting towards him at full throttle, the young bladeback gave a death-defying leap and caught the fastbiter in the chest with both his legs.

Many happy returns.

Fang toppled over, and, thanks to Al being curled into a ball behind him, went toppling all the way over the peak, screaming in rage as he plummeted, before his life ended with a bone-rattling crash.

Seizon and Al stood there for a moment, watching the tiny dot on the ground below that was once their enemy. Then Seizon gave a great whoop.

“YES!! We smashed him!”

“Good one!” Al grinned enthusiastically, as the high-fived, bro-fisted and all sorts of other such celebratory gestures.

“Well,” Al continued, his brow wrinkled in thought. “I guess now we’ve taken out this one, we should concentrate on where everyone else is…”

“Oh yeah!” Seizon suddenly realised, sprinting off in the first direction he could think of. “We’ve got to find them all…especially Chomper, he’s needed for the revolution.”

“Please Seizon,” Al thought wearily, as he went after him. “Don’t let Xal’s views colour your own.”

*

Slash, gouge, swipe…

Attack after attack was hammered onto Mei by Lini. The tetrarchy member was almost running backwards in an attempt to avoid getting her throat cut by this furious Sharptooth. Lini was oblivious to the blows landing on her as well – all she wanted to do was to take this one out of the picture.

Saureen couldn’t believe it – she just stood there, watching this relentless barrage take place, her eyes wide open, mouth agape. When had Lini become like this??

A swipe of Lini’s tail was enough to catapult Mei backwards, landing with a great thud in the snow. She was exhausted, panting heavily, bleeding cuts all over her scales.

“Please…” she whispered hoarsely. “No more…”

“Lini…?” Saureen began tentatively, but Lini didn’t listen. She strode straight over to where Mei was lying. After glaring at her in a cold fury for a few seconds, she took the fastbiter’s neck in her mouth.

“Lini!”

Crack.

The crack wasn’t loud, and yet it echoed through the frosty air, chilling Saureen to the bone as the sound rolled up the mountains and down again. Satisfied that the neck was broken, Lini dumped the now lifeless head of Mei back onto the snow, before turning and walking back to Saureen.

Saureen was at a loss for words as Lini sat down next to her. For a few moments, her expression was lifeless, but then the tears, which were built up very quickly in her sapphire eyes, began to flow.

“Saureen…” she whispered. “Nobody who needs others pain to make themselves happy…should be kept alive…you should understand…”

But Saureen didn’t, and could only pat Lini awkwardly on the back as her sobs continued to echo through the chilly mists, just as the sound of a breaking neck had previously done.

*
As a child, Chomper had always been afraid of heights. He couldn’t remember why, but it may have something to do with some egg-stealers…

The highest peak on White Mountain was ridiculously high, and yet here he was, fighting for his life.

Chomper wasn’t entirely sure what Nycha had planned as he leapt to avoid a blow from Pagetona. Skidding as he landed, he went to launch another attack. Pagetona was distracted by Nycha’s biting to her tail, but she nevertheless performed a well-aimed swing of her claws, catching Chomper in the face and knocking him back again. Unfazed, Chomper landed 3-point and went straight for her again, Nycha releasing Pagetona’s tail and dashing off, murmuring to him in flattooth,

“Don’t worry – it’ll be over soon!”

Chomper bit into Pagetona’s wrist, kicking out with his legs to prevent her from slashing at him with the other hand. He could taste her blood in his mouth, and was so carried away by what he was doing that he failed to realise that she should easily return the favour.

And she did, giving a great screech, as she chomped down onto his shoulder. Chomper grunted in pain as Pagetona’s teeth sunk deeper and deeper into him.

But then she released him.

Chomper looked up just in time to see a stone, as thrown by Nycha, strike his oppressor hard in the mouth, forcing her to let go of Chomper and knocking one of her teeth out. Chomper watched incredulously as said tooth went sailing over the edge of the icy peak. Pagetona, spitting blood onto the white ground, glared at Nycha, who was standing upon a mound of snow.

“Honestly, Nycha, what is it with you?” she snapped. “After we had disposed of this idiot we were going to allow you into our pack. And yet what do you do? Resist! Why???”

“Because of perspective,” Nycha growled. “I should have been done with the tetrarchy the day I was born. Not because of what you’ve done, but because of who you are. You’re never happy unless everyone around you is upset or scared. And you’re the worst of the lot, because I knew you when you were ordinary…but you decided to become as heartless and cruel as they are…” she swallowed.

“This ends today…right now.”

Nycha then promptly leaned forward.

This was all she needed to do as a whole cascade of snow slid from under her feet and carried her forward, straight into Pagetona. This tumble of ice and dinosaur sent them both careering to the peak, sliding across the icy jut at the edge…

“Nycha!” Chomper quickly jerked forward to pluck the young fastbiter from this mass, pulling her to safety to stand upon the ice as Pagetona, screaming curses at them both was carried effortlessly over the edge before falling to her death hundreds of metres below.

For a moment, neither Chomper nor Nycha moved or spoke. They just stood there, panting as they held each other close. Going over what had just happened.

“Nycha…!” Chomper gasped. “You’re so reckless!”

Nycha gave him a bemused look.

“Says you,” she replied.

They both chuckled to themselves.

“That’s it Nycha,” Chomper mused, gazing over the edge. “They’re gone – they’re not going to harm you again. It’s over.”

Nycha beamed. It was certainly a tender moment they were now sharing, but then…

“Chomper!”

Seizon had finally caught up with them, and seeing Xal’s ëambassador’ standing so close to edge of the peak, panicked, and grabbed him to pull him away.

The trouble was the force of Chomper being pulled away unbalanced both him and Nycha, as he was holding her at the time. As Chomper was dragged by Seizon, Nycha slipped and slid precariously towards the edge, her claws making insignificant marks on the ice. She reached the very edge and managed to cling onto it with her fingers. Chomper and Seizon both immediately made to reach out for her, but before their hands could reach out to grab her…

Crack…

The narrow edge of ice she was holding onto snapped.

Chomper felt his stomach shrink as Nycha began to fall backwards in a graceful arc. No…it could not have happened…not again…

Even as she felt the wind rush past her, Nycha remembered her language lessons.

“Chomper!” she called in flattooth. “Not your fault!”

And it was true, she reflected. Too many spend too much time playing the blame game. Often, it is nobody’s fault.

“My dear brothers,” she thought as she continued to plummet, the wind whistling in her ears. “You have taught me so much in the albeit short time I’ve got to spend with you both. Pyron, Chomper – you were right about me. You showed me beyond all reasonable doubt that I should never aspire to be what I’m not. I am not a bloodthirsty killer of fellows – I am your loved and significant sister. Sometimes, the hardest things to see are those that are right in front of you. A pack that loved me for who I am, not who they wanted me to be. It was a hard lesson, but I’m so glad I finally got to see it in the end. Just because I can’t do what some want me to do, doesn’t make me any less an amazing person, just as important as anyone else – I’m glad I got to see my true family. Goodbye all, especially to you Chomper. And Pyron…I’ll be seeing you soon…”

That thought in mind, she gave a sad smile and closed her eyes, a single tear trickling out of her closed eyelids and rising into the air to mingle with the snowfall.

Then she hit the ground.

*
The pack had carried her away from White Mountain. They knew she wouldn’t have wanted to be buried there, where memories of the now extinct tetrarchy lingered. Chomper had insisted she should be buried next to her brother, as she would have wanted that, but such would have been impractical. Instead, they took her back to where they had all slept the night before last, where there were many flowers, extravagant and brightly coloured, surrounded by towering rocky pillars.

Chomper gazed unblinkingly at the mound of freshly dug soil under which Nycha’s body lay, his mind still numb.

“Chomper…?”

He looked to see Saureen, tentatively standing next to him, a bouquet of flowers in her hand. With a slight pang to his heart, Chomper noticed that the petals were a distinct shade of lilac.

“P-put them on her grave,” Saureen said quietly. “I…think she would have liked them.”

Chomper nodded, taking them from her. “Yeah, I think she would have done…although…”

Without saying another word, he picked a few nearby orange flowers to go with the lilac ones and placed the whole bunch down onto Nycha’s grave.

“This way…” he said, his voice suddenly sounding strangely as though he had a bad head cold. “It is like they’re together…”

He couldn’t help it anymore. At that moment he burst into floods of tears, dropping to his knees next to her. He couldn’t stop – and he just kept on crying as Seizon, swallowing hard, suggested they all say a few words.

Chomper barely heard everyone else say their words – they all went vaguely along the same lines. He just wanted to get to his. Wiping his eyes, he eyed the flowers’ petals intently.

“Nycha…” he said. “You were unfairly taken from us and will be sorely missed. Sometimes the cruelty of nature can be irregular, taking those we love from us away, and yet…”

He stood up, something more in his eyes than pure shock and grief.

“Sometimes…there can be reason and fault behind it.”

The other four were silent. What had he just said?

Chomper slowly turned on the spot. His eyes, despite still showing the shadows of their sorrow were now worryingly dark and angry, and were determinately fixed on Seizon.

“What?” Seizon was beginning to feel uncomfortable. “Come on Chomper – what are you on about?”

“Does Xal really mean that much to you?” Chomper asked. Al already could see where this was going, and so he decided not to say anything, lest it prove even more inflammatory than it was already. This time was bound to come anyway…he gestured for Lini to come over to him. She had been in a strangely quiet mood even before they had found out about Nycha’s death, but he didn’t want to read too much into that now.

“What’s this got to do with him?” Seizon snapped, starting to grow just as agitated. “Stop blaming him for-”

“Oh, but I’m not blaming him,” Chomper said in a voice of forced calm. He took a few steps towards Seizon.

“Chomper…” Saureen murmured warningly.

Chomper ignored her.

“I’m blaming you, Seizon,” he spoke very clearly.

“Me?” Seizon growled through gritted teeth, his eyes just as focused, the amber locking onto the red. “What the hell have I done?”

“You grabbed me aside back on White Mountain,” Chomper said. “Despite the fact that me and Nycha were completely fine, in no danger. You were too worried about losing out on your big hit with Xal, and so you let Nycha fall to her death!”

“No I didn’t!” Seizon yelled, his hands balling into fists. “Don’t be ridiculous Chomper!”

“And back at the Cave Network,” Chomper continued, unafraid by Seizon’s advances. “You wanted to stick around to, what, gain territory? Your single-minded fixation with your stepfather cost Pyron his life too! When’s it going to end? How long are we going to go on, losing more and more members of our pack, just because of one thing you feel you have to do?”

“You know nothing!” Seizon hissed. “You have no idea how dedicated I am to this pack!”

“Oh yeah?” Chomper let out an angry laugh. “You just care about Xal more, right?!”

Seizon didn’t reply.

“Enough to let your comrades die??”

“I didn’t!” Seizon snarled. “That’s what I’m trying to tell you!”

“Not intentionally, for sure,” Chomper agreed, still glaring at Seizon. The other three were watching this confrontation wordlessly. “But it’s your carelessness and your Xal-worshipping which are constantly landing us into trouble. And it’s that that has recently taken two innocent lives from us.” He glanced back at the flowers on Nycha’s grave.

“Don’t be ridiculous,” Seizon muttered. “I’ll ensure it doesn’t happen again…”

“But Seizon…” Saureen murmured timidly. “That’s more or less what you said before we headed for White Mountain…”

“Stay out of this Saureen!” Seizon shot at her, but Chomper was appalled.

“Is that so?” he growled. “Sounds about right…you just can’t control your priorities Seizon. And we can’t have that in this pack. If it’s going to continue, and I’m sure it will, then I suggest new leadership is needed.”

Seizon gave a guttural growl as he forced himself to remain self-controlled. That statement burned…

“Oh yeah…?” he muttered. “Like who? You?”

“I didn’t cross my mind actually,” Chomper replied honestly. “But now I think about it…yeah, why not?”

Seizon’s face curled into a deep-set snarl. Challenging Seizon’s authority was a very dangerous thing to do…

~0~

R.I.P Nycha.
Yes, I'm a cruel person. Yes, I'm an evil writer. And yes, I did have Nycha's death planned pretty much from the beginning! But it is no pointless act of violence - this a pivotal moment, when Chomper decides he's had enough of Seizon leading them...Seizon, his mind still on Xal, does not like!
And how about Ulciscor's story eh? I hope you noticed that Ulciscor practically fed some of the more famous lines to certain respective characters...and what has he got to do with Littlefoot's birth? Only time will tell...as with this dark little secret Lini seems to be harbouring beneath her innocent exterior...
Please review, and thanks for reading!!!  :DD


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Review to Chapter 16!

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“What I see,” Chomper explained. “Is an amazing individual who is perfect for what she is meant to do, but she fails to see it because she’s far too worried about what a bunch of fastbiters think and how they see the world. You shouldn’t have to let their presence linger on you for years to come – break free! There is so much more to everything you see and realise. You should just learn to be yourself. Because those who matter, don’t mind it. And those who mind it…”
His eyes flickered over to the fastbiters.

“…don’t matter…”
Chomper is joining the philosophers? WHAT!?! :spit Seriously, lines like these are what shows the skill of a writer!

I'm quite worried about them though... Nycha is seemingly close to being torn apart and everyone seemingly hates Chomper... not a good mixture :unsure: At least they work together now :yes

Seizon! He behaves like Xal more and more... I once liked him, not sure if I still do.. Good that there are individuals that intervene... Very authentic fight though  :exactly
Al realises the obvious and they're on their way, yay. Hmm Seizon, why are you taking orders from Al, eh? Think about it, twice, if needed!
Neat little flashback you wrote there :smile Seizon as pack leader? Not the best cast but Seizon as the leader of the revolution?! Nope, nope, nope! Though Xal's even worse anyway so..
Good thing's Seizon admits his fault :yes If they find Nycha and Chomper (they will, everything else would be a big surprise :p) it'll probably be an awkward situation, or a dangerous situation... I sense it.

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To distract herself from such unsettling thoughts, she wondered over to where Old One was squatting, merely thinking on the current situation, and her alliance with Zyro.
I guess you meant wandering?
Opal & Old One, interesting conversation. So Opal remembers Omendric... then it won't be long until she knows how he died and who is the reason for that to happen...

Ah, the Longneck tests. Bron finally tells Shorty he considers him his son *awww* I have a feeling I know why he says it just at this moment...

Hyp is finally maturing, eh? :wow I like his part of the revolution of the Valleians :p

Awesome fight scene, Toby! Nycha discovering her strength only to be reminded of her values by Chomper... awesome. They live, for now, that is...

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“It’s strange…” he murmured. “They seem so alike…”
You're right, little Longneck.
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“But I suppose, if you’re a herd leader, by opinion doesn’t really matter…”
You meant 'my', didn't ya?
Ali passed and Shorty did not, as I expected. You watched that Tv-ep carefully for sure :lol

Chomper's parents :lol the conversation is funny and that comment about 'Are you changing the topic again?' ! And they found Ferox so he made it, whoo!

You are worried about the chapter, specially the talk between Nycha and Chomper being rushed? Are you crazy?! It's more than long enough :smile I love your ability to analyse things, you show it every chapter and I just notice it now :bang
Anyway, I'm so glad Chomper and Nycha are now close to each other!

About the Shorty-Seizon thing: You are right, but their step-fathers are COMPLETELY different  :exactly

I admire your skills, keep it up! (I see you already did :lol)
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If there was a fainting emoticon I'use it, and if there was slapinyoface emoticon, I'd use that too :DD

lol I joke... but STILL.... omg Dosu, are you testing how many times my heart can snap in two before it's crookedly mended together again?!?!

Nycha.... now I have to do a sad death scene about Nycha! :(

Anyway, chapter on whole is very emotion-wracking, very pivotal, and very very interesting. If I dind't know better I'd say Ulciscor was a lot like Littlefoot back when he was but a wee little rotter :3
I liked his and Bron's interaction in the beginning.

Uhohhh... Chomper did a no-no... *clings to edge of seat*

Great chapter as always, Dosu :yes
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Dammit Dosu! :anger

Young Ulcisor reminds me of both one of my characters and Littlefoot, but he does seem quite driven by his desire to be in a longneck story. :o

So THAT'S where the name Littlefoot came from. I wonder what the deal is with Ulcisor around Littlefoot's birth. :(

That was an intense fight between the pack and the the tetrarchy. They all got what they deserved, though.

NOO! NYCHA!! DOSU, WHY DO YOU HAVE TO KEEP KILLING OFF CHARACTERS?! I'm sad now. :cry

Uh oh, this looks like it's going to be intense between Chomper and Seizon. My bet's on Chomper, though. *hides in a hole*


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Toby!!! You-you evil thing! Killing off poor Nycha :anger I tell you what: If you do that again, I'll take the next plane to UK and will make you pay the prize :mad Uhh, scratch that :p
What a masterpiece of chapter again, seriously. Nycha's death is only the end of it so I shall start at the beginning:

A conversation between Dil and Ichy can only be funny and that's exactly what is is: Funny, I mean. You got those two pretty well, and are they scared of being getting rid of? :smile
 
Wonder what Redclaw's up to... or Xal for that...

NO CHOMPER! SAVE HIM, NYCHA!

Uh oh... Ulciscor and Kai and Shock noticed it.. Be worried! And Rinkus... got fired, eh? Well, I guess Ulciscor just made a rough mistake :yes
Oh and also this:
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Rinkus’ face was twisted into an ugly expression. Actually, it was ugly before he had started, but now it was even worse.
:spit

Chomper acts fairly brave when being faced with his near death if you ask me, he has matured throughout your fic :yes

Nycha rescues him, whew! And they are rescued by the pack, even bigger whew!!! :D
Everything seems fine but then Mei got to them... wonder what going on with Lini, nobody in the pack doesn't have a dark secret in their past, aside from Saureen perhabs. Cheers for girls' fights! :lol:
What a fight! Man, this is great stuff :DD
Lini :o

Ah, the long-awaited flashback :smile That's how they met... Ulciscor as a kid is... interesting, very self-confident and knowing his destiny. Gotta love to get to know more about 'Bron's story'

Nycha speeks... FLATTOOTH?! Is this really Nycha or a new character? :lol Anyway, I love the way they fight together, a great pair.
Good job Al and Seizon... Oh Seizon, will you ever change?
omg Lini! You better don't get into her way :lol What's up with her?
NYCHA!!! What a loss :cry :cry :cry :cry :cry And who's responsible? Heh? Seizon again!!! I start to hate him with a passion now...
Chomper challanging him? Now THAT'S gotta be awesome.

So much happened (again!) in this chapter.. No doubt, one of your best chapters so far, Toby.

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“You’ll someone giving you directions like some sort of tour guide.
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And he sounded it too
And he sounded like it too (not sure if the 'like' is needed here but it sounded wrong to me without it)
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Mei, for the time being, seemed unfazed, and continued to claw at Lini is exactly the same way.
Mei, for the time being, seemed unfazed, and continued to claw at Lini in exactly the same way.
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I’ll introduce to my folks.
I’ll introduce you to my folks.
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Nycha.”

Nycha nodded and then attempted herself.

“Wow…” Chomper muttered. “That was pretty fluent! Nice one!”
I guess you got the italics mixed up he
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Hello people! Here is the next chapter...


Chapter Eighteen: A Battle of Brethren

Saureen, Lini and Al all stood silently, watching this square-off between the scrawny twoclaw and the head-strong bladeback, feeling the tension in the air and hoping their worst fears wouldn’t come to pass. They were all prepared to intervene if necessary.

Chomper and Seizon continued to glare at each other for a few more nerve-racking moments, before Seizon broke the intensity and closed his eyes.

Chomper grew confused as he continued to gaze at his rival, who was now drawing deep shuddering breaths.

Then Seizon opened his eyes again.
“Chomper,” he said, in a much calmer voice that took Chomper by surprise. “You don’t know what you’re talking about. At this stage in our mission, we cannot deal with changes in leadership.”

“But why not?” It wasn’t Chomper who spoke this time, but Al. Seizon turned to face him, his expression unreadable.

“Why?” Seizon repeated, as if Al had just asked why they shouldn’t go dancing into Redclaw’s vicinity. “Because we’ve got to rendezvous with Xal back at the Fanged Forest, and he-”

“And there you go again!” Chomper’s confusion had gone, and the anger was back with a vengeance. “Can you possibly explain anything that doesn’t refer to Xal? What has it got to do with him?”

“Everything, rockhead!” Seizon snarled back. “It was him who commissioned me to retrieve you! And the reason you won’t be a better leader than me is because you don’t even know Xal!”

“Funny…” Chomper growled. “But I think I will be a better leader for exactly the same reason.”

Seizon’s face twisted once more. He was about to counter once again, when something happened that cut across their argument very abruptly.

The five sharpteeth all felt a tremor in the ground, which radically built up until it was a full-blown rumble which shook them to their very bones.

“Earthshake…!” Al murmured. He quickly dropped to all fours, hoping such a position would allow him to absorb most of the seismic activity. He motioned for Lini beside him to take a similar position. However…

He had disregarded the nearby stones, arranged in might pillars around them, and they soon began to tumble towards them in a cascade…

Oh…

Forgetting their argument momentarily, Chomper and Seizon both made towards Saureen, who was in less of a perilous situation than their protectiveness would suggest. But as the earthshake finished at they all stood vigilant to survey the damage, they noticed something horribly wrong.

A massive mound of displaced rocks was where Lini and Al had previously been.

“Oh no!” Chomper thought horror-struck as the three of them raced towards the mound. Chomper noted, with some relief, that Nycha’s grave had not been covered by these rocks, but it was still rather the least worry on his mind as he pressed his ear to rocks.

“Lini, Al!” He called desperately.

“Are you alright?” Saureen added breathlessly.

“Say something!” Seizon demanded.

“Ahh…” Al’s mellow tones came from behind the rocks and Chomper’s stomach sagged in relief.

“Are you alright?” he shouted through the stones.

“Yes, I’m fine,” Al replied. “But we’re pretty much trapped. I can work on shifting the rocks from here, but…”

“But what?” Seizon asked.

“Lini’s in a bad way,” Al replied, letting the sentence hang in the air.

Chomper heard a sharp intake of breath from Saureen beside him.

“What’s wrong with her??” she asked, gulping slightly.

“One of the rocks landed quite badly on her leg,” Al called back. “I think she may have broken it.” Then his voice dropped to a soothing tone to reply the feeble whimpers from Lini they now heard.

“Hey, don’t worry, you’ll be alright.”

“Of course you will…” Chomper murmured to Lini through the rocks, trying to convince himself that he believed it too.

“You definitely will,” Saureen assured. “We’ll shift the rocks here as well, and we’ll get you out as soon as we can.”

The two of them were about to start shifting the rocks they hoped wouldn’t cause a massive cave-in, but then a voice cut across their work, stinging into Chomper’s very soul with unshakeable fury.

“There’s no time.”

Hardly daring to believe what he had just heard, Chomper slowly turned to see Seizon, who had a slight frown on his face as he moved to address Al and Lini on the other side of the rocks.

“Hang in there Al – me, Chomper and Saureen will go onto the Forest, and then once the revolution begins, we’ll come back for you two.”

“Oh really?” There was a definite sarcasm in the way Al spoke now. “Well, we’ll just make use of all the non-existent prey within here until then…how long exactly will that be?”

“Not sure,” Seizon replied earnestly, now beginning to move off. “But I’m sorry, we’re behind schedule as it is, and, like I said, we can come back for you, but this is of paramount importance and-”

“ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR BLOODY MIND????” Chomper screamed at Seizon, completely losing control as the rage boiled up inside him. Ignoring Saureen’s chagrined and worried moan as he swept past her, he strode right up to look Seizon directly in the eye, panting slightly in an attempt to suppress his growing rage. His hands were also twitching irregularly, almost as if they longed to be around Seizon’s neck.

Seizon glared coolly back, rocking backwards slightly as he stood, prepared for a lashing out from his challenger. Sucking in his fiercely guttural breath, Chomper spoke.
“I don’t care what you say. We are NOT leaving them here!” he roared, clenching his claws into fists as he did so. “Now, if you’re so worried about being late, you would have the sense to come and help us get them out now!”
“I repeat,” Seizon growled back. “There is no time.” Perspiration was already beading on his forehead as the chilling realisation of how much time they had wasted struck him. “We need to go now.”

“We’re not having another incident like Pyron and Nycha’s!” Chomper snapped back, trying his best to keep his emotions under control as memories of their untimely demises came back to him. “You can go if you want to, but Saureen and I aren’t moving until we get Lini and Al out of there!” He turned to go back to Saureen, but Seizon clamped his claws around Chomper’s arm.

“No…” he hissed. “You still don’t understand! You are what Xal requires. I am not going to show up to the Fanged Forest empty-handed!”

“Oh, I understand alright.” Chomper had turned back to him now, the cold loathing and resentment on his face matched only by Seizon’s, whose time-sensitive panics were causing a tic to develop in his amber eye.

“It doesn’t matter to you,” Chomper was telling Seizon now. “What the fate of everyone in the pack is, bar me. You don’t care what happens to your blessed comrades, who called you brethren and friend, and covered your back during fights. All you care about is getting me back to your precious stepfather, alive, and, if necessary, not kicking. I always found you an arrogant little berk, Seizon, but I thought your sense of unity was something to be admired.” He glanced briefly back at the pile of rocks, the voices from which had gone silent.

“But it turns out you really are deluded and just as pathetic and egotistical as I thought you were. You don’t deserve comrades like them…” he gestured to Saureen, as well as Lini and Al behind the rocks and Nycha’s grave. “Maybe it really is time I took this pack over myself…” Chomper paused to consider the concept. It was never something he had wanted, a pack of his own, as he never felt that there would be the circumstances in which he’d have to form it. But now it seemed that taking over this one from Seizon was the only option he had.

“And when I take them from your grubby clutches,” Chomper continued, noticing Seizon’s scowl grow darker with every word he said. “I shall take them all back to the Great Valley, and we can live there…”

“You will do no such thing!” Seizon roared back at him, saliva flecking the side of his mouth.

“Oh yes I will!” Chomper growled determinately. “And there they will be safe from your pathetic ideals and your ridiculous, insane, deluded, twisted and gormless stepfather…”

But he had finally gone too far. With an ear-splitting roar that shook the very ground and echoed around the previously quiet vicinity, Seizon swung his heavily clawed arm around, striking Chomper hard across the face, sending him flying backwards and rolling down the rock pile that had fell, little droplets of blood being flecked in all directions.

“SHUT YOUR FILTHY MOUTH!!!!” Seizon was livid, his eyes popping insanely out of their sockets. Saureen looked at him in abject terror and then back to Chomper, who was steadily rising to his feet and wiping his mouth with his hand, looking determined to continue the bout.

Saureen, her arms in front of her in an instinctive defence position in an attempt to null her rising sense of panic, cried out to him.

“Chomper! Don’t do anything, please st-”

But Chomper raised a hand to silence her.

“Please Saureen,” he said firmly. “Stay out of this.”

“Yeah,” Seizon agreed, flexing his arms, his face still twisted with unfathomable rage. Chomper, the malice alight on his face also, quickly charged him, and after a brief wrestle jaw-to-jaw and claw-to-claw, the two of them tumbled straight into the meadow of flowers, snapping stems and scattering petals as they continued to claw and snap at each other. Chomper leapt back to avoid a direct snap from Seizon, who then twisted around and swatted Chomper with his tail. With him reeling from the whack, Seizon took the opportunity to leap upon the young twoclaw, pinning him to ground, but Chomper clamped his teeth around Seizon’s arm at this point, causing him to yell out and attempt to break free, giving Chomper the opportunity to rise to his feet. As he was still biting into his hand, Seizon slashed his free claws across Chomper’s muzzle, allowing droplets of blood to drip upon the destroyed flowers and forcing Chomper to let go. Seizon held his injured and bleeding arm close to him but maintained a steady fixed stare upon his equally unwavering foe.

Saureen found herself rooted to the spot as she watched the two of them brawl unkempt. Mixed with her terror, she was also furious with herself for not intervening. But even as her guilt grew, she still couldn’t find it in her to move – not even to help free Al and Lini! Her mind was too much of a whirlwind of emotions to even try and comprehend what was happening before her. The two of them had flipped, and this fight could easily end in…

No…

Surely, Saureen thought desperately, no matter how angry they both were, neither of them would attempt to kill the other?

Seizon wouldn’t surely? No…he needed Chomper alive to take back to the Fanged Forest. Immediately however, Saureen felt a deep rush of despair. It was highly upsetting to think that this was the only reason she could reassure herself that Seizon would not kill a fellow pack member. What on earth had happened to that strange and yet loveable eccentric young bladeback she used to know in her childhood?

Infant sharpteeth traditionally learn to hunt large prey in a careful and rational manner by practicing their predatory skills on insects and other small invertebrates. It was a way, as enthusiastically trumpeted by many parents, of learning to hunt free of risk. But Saureen, as a hatchling twoclaw, didn’t see it that way.

“Don’t be ridiculous,” her grandmother used to say to her, as Saureen cowered and trembled next to her foot, clinging to it and pressing her body so close to it, it was as though she desired to melt into it. Tyra would then gently lower her head to her granddaughter’s level and nudge her.

“They’re not going to hurt you dear,” she would say, with an air that was more patient than most other adult Sharpteeth would have been in her position.
The point was, ever since birth, Saureen had always been conspicuously entomophobic – for reasons inexplicable to her father or grandmother, she had a deep-set terror and hatred for insects of all kinds. She would nestle up to the nearest leg (her traditional source of comfort as a hatchling) with terrified squawks whenever any insect was so much as visible to her. And if one ever actually landed on her, her screeches could be heard for miles around. Of course, she had always eaten from her father’s kills, but Ferox knew that this would not allow her to learn. And so he had passed the responsibility of teaching her to love chasing insects to his mother, hoping she would help Saureen conquer her fear.

“Come on now,” Tyra had said on one memorable occasion, gesturing to the dragonflies and damsel-flies that were hovering above a small stream before them, which Saureen, with formidable reluctance, slowly turned to look at it.

“They’re good to eat!” Tyra insisted. And slowly, as she inched forward, Saureen began to believe her.
It took at least an hour, but eventually Tyra had managed to get to her to actually chase the insects, and she was hoping that finally, Saureen understood that they were more afraid of her than she was of them.

But the whole idea went completely to pot when Saureen, having finally chomped down on one of the buzzing insects, gagged and spat the whole mangled thing out. It appeared they were not to her taste at all. And to cap it all off, suddenly a swarm of butterflies came over.

Saureen had a deep-set phobia for all insects, it was something that she just had. But as bad as all the other insects were, they just didn’t compare to butterflies. Butterflies were the absolute zenith of horror, brain-sucking, fluttering, colourful monsters and harbingers of doom.

And as if that weren’t enough, one of them landed directly on top of her sniffer.

For about half a second or so, Saureen just stood there, strangely cross-eyed as she examined the creature gently settling its wings onto her, as more of them flew past. Then it came. The blood-curdling screech that split the air in half and deafened every soul in the vicinity. Saureen was screaming blue murder as she ran in circles and every which way as the butterflies, confused at the sudden piercing wail that was being emitted from this strange young creature, continued to flutter near her.

“Saureen…?” Tyra had said as Saureen dashed past her, but Saureen had gone deaf, which was hardly surprising considering how loudly she had screamed. She just kept on running until she had reached the water, and had dived head-first into it.

It had been there that Seizon had found her. The two of them knew each other before hand, but this is where they had really hit off. Seizon, at that point, had taught her how to fish, allowing her to hunt small prey without the risk of getting mobbed by brain-sucking butterflies, and also allowing more social interaction to be underway as he taught her.

That was the Seizon she had always known. A big brother type figure, a little bit eccentric, but always there for her. Did that mean anything to him? Saureen could hardly believe it so as she watched in despair at Seizon and Chomper continuing to fight with increasing aggression.

And what about Chomper? That scrawny little Sharptooth who always fought the leaf-eaters corner seemed to have taken being in a Sharptooth pack in his stride. And now there was a direct challenge – all or nothing. Did Chomper have it in him to kill either? Saureen doubted it, and yet at the same time, he himself had been partially responsible for the death of both Romov and Pagetona, not to mention Torq. It seemed, if he hated someone enough, he could bring himself to do it. And there was little mistaking the loathing in those red eyes of his.

Seizon and Chomper made a charge towards each other again, slamming into each other headlong. It was formidable wrestle, and Seizon, with the smaller skull, found himself getting pushed back. In a desperate attempt to counter this, he brought his hands to claw at Chomper’s mighty head, at which Chomper brought up his own claws to stop him. However, it was apparent that Chomper’s arms were not nearly as muscular as his opponents’ and so Seizon could twist Chomper’s arms into any position that suited him. So saying, Seizon took advantage of Chomper’s disused arms by biting into his chin, and then shoving him backwards onto the ground where he towered over him.

Largely unperturbed, Chomper kicked Seizon fiercely in the chest, causing him to get flung off behind him. Even as Seizon righted himself, Chomper too was getting to his feet, ready to continue.

“Give up Chomper!” Seizon snapped. “This is futile!”

“Maybe fighting is,” Chomper admitted. “But my cause is far from it!”

They charged once again.

*
Zyro turned to face the onlookers, looking grim.

“What did he say?” Old One asked. She was referring of course to Ferox – despite placing emphasis on the need to rest, Zyro had been making use of getting as much information from the twoclaw as possible.

“It was just as we feared,” Zyro replied. “Xal is indeed making use of the Piercer Platoon. Now it seems his army is even larger than the one he had before.”

There were intakes of breath from all the onlookers, at Bron, Ulciscor temporarily driven out of his mind, said,

“How is he able to manage such a force?”

“Well, according to Ferox,” Zyro continued. “Xal is making use of a hierarchy within the Platoon, at a scale of which allows such a vast force to be contained. He has unwavering support mostly, by the sounds of things, from his right-hand man – a slashclaw named Gigas.” He shook his head. “I must confess I’ve never heard the name,” he admitted. “But perhaps someone like him is used to working in the shadows of other sharpteeth. As far as I know, he wasn’t part of Eykion’s original army, but I could be wrong…”

Behind him, virtually ignoring this conversation, considering it was a language she didn’t understand anyway, Rhea turned to Ferox.

“What does this Gigas look like?” she asked.

“Well, he has scales of mossy green,” he replied, hardly thinking it mattered. “With paler green plates down his neck, back and tail. His eyes are blood-red.”

Ross noticed his mate looked troubled at these words.

“What’s wrong?” he asked her. “Do you know this Gigas person?”

“Ross!” Rhea groaned impatiently, looking up at him in desperation. “We both do…he was that slashclaw that attacked us and Chomper and…his friends back on the island!”

Ross’ eyes widened as the memory instantly flooded back – the drawing of blood across his snout, Rhea’s injury to the thigh, Chomper falling into the Big Water…
Of course, they couldn’t be sure that the malevolent individual was actually Gigas – as far as they knew, that attacker had been washed away into the middle of the ocean and sunk without trace. Though given everything else they knew about Xal, they figured he would have probably been able to find some way to fish his followers out from any unfortunate trepidation they happened to find themselves in.

Rhea’s horror grew every passing second, and her scarlet eyes began to fill with tears.

“Ross…!” she breathed. “If it is him…he will surely kill Chomper when he arrives at the forest!”

Ross immediately moved to console his mate. He gently rested his massive head next to hers and made a soft purring sound that all twoclaws have the ability to make use of via the back of their throats.

“No, he won’t,” he assured her. “Xal needs him to get into the Valley – as bad as that sounds, I’m sure Gigas would not deliberately undermine him.”

“But they will surely kill him once they get the information they need!” Rhea choked, stamping around in her distress. Ross nudged her shoulder in an attempt to get her to calm down.

“Maybe so,” he agreed. “But I promise we’ll get him back before that happens…”

Her sobs subsiding, Rhea turned her tear-stained gaze to where Zyro was continuing to explain what he had been told to the leaf-eater’s in their native language.

“Do you trust him?” she asked.

“Yeah,” he admitted. “He’s a little strange that one – can’t always tell what he’s thinking or planning next. But he’s Shark’s greatest lieutenant – and I trust Shark with my life.”

Ferox watched the two of them in silence as the nuzzled closer together. He felt a slight twinge of loneliness as he did so – his own mate had died not long after Saureen had hatched, and such an event had always made that area of his life incomplete. But then that reminded him – Tyra. His own mother had surely been killed, and as upset as he himself was at that sudden realisation, he couldn’t even bear to think about what he would tell Saureen.

Zyro finished explaining what Ferox had told him to the leaf-eaters, and allowed a grave silence to descend upon them. However, it was then punctuated by a strangely optimistic voice.

“But that means surely,” Opal said. “That Xal’s forces and hierarchy have dropped by two – it should be easier for us to undermine him now.”

Old One, Bron and Zyro all looked at her, and Zyro soon began to smile.

“I’m glad one of us is remaining optimistic,” he said. “You’ve certainly put me in my place. Let’s just see what happens next…”

*
Tria remained stoic as she chewed on some ferns, even as Shock came up behind her.

“Tria.”

He spoke with an air of a professional authoritarian, but as Hyp had told her, nobody should back down just from a voice – it’s when the tails are used that one should worry.

“Maybe,” Tria replied, not turning around.

Shock’s lip curled. When did she grow backbone?

“There are things I need to know,” he continued, trying to maintain a commanding voice.

“Really?” Tria asked, in an increasingly bored tone which further irritated the Bludgeoner. It was a form of psychological torture – he was not permitted to physically interrogate her unless she was deliberately withholding information. But Tria’s calm fearlessness of him was getting severely under his skin.

However, before Shock could reply, another voice behind him spoke.

“Continue your patrols, Shock. I’ve got this one.”

Despite her determination to remain cool, this new voice sent a chill up Tria’s spine. What less could be expected from Ulciscor’s sadistic right-hand man?

Nervously, Tria turned to face the spiked longneck, who was gazing at her imperiously. It seemed he was able to take his time, unlike Shock, who, to Kai’s orders had walked off.

Eventually he spoke.

“Well, Tria,” he said softly. “How are you?”

“What is it you want, Kai?” she asked, surprised at her own bravery. But she wasn’t going to play games – Kai had not come here to make an enquiry about her health. The only sort of enquiries he ever made were the ones that others helped him with. And she got the nasty feeling that this is what he was here for.

Kai began to pace around Tria, drawing a large circle around her with his steps, almost trapping her in his steady saunter. Then he looked her directly in the eye again.

“So,” he said, in a much more business-like tone. “Where is she?”

“Who?”

“Don’t play games with me Tria,” Kai flicked his tail menacingly and lowered his neck towards her. “I’m talking about your daughter.”

Tria swallowed hard as her heart skipped several beats. So, finally someone had noticed – the Bludgeoners were all going around, far too busy trying to notice absenteeism in the ëusual suspects’ to notice that many infants were missing too. Hyp was busy looking after Tricia, of course, along with many other young ones in the secret swampy location. But if Kai knew that, there was no telling what he would do.

“She’s…she’s being looked after by a friend,” Tria replied, trying to keep her voice steady and convincing. “You see – this line of work could easily prove dangerous for her. You know how young ones are!”

Kai nodded. “Of course – you wouldn’t want to run the risk of her getting hurt now, would you? Of course, it’s not always children who behave foolishly. May I remind you where you husband is right now?”

“He’s not my husband anymore,” Tria replied coldly.

“Wise decision,” Kai complimented. “You don’t want to be associated with dissidents. You’ve got your work to focus on. But surely everyone else is working just as dangerously as you…which friend is looking after your beloved daughter? Surely not…” he chuckled darkly. “That old clubtail?”

Blood pounding in her ears, Tria forced herself to remain calm. “No,” she replied. “Mrs Maia. She’s a very dedicated mother and therefore a good babysitter for Tricia.”

“Mrs Maia, eh?” Kai nodded and raised his head up to sky. “Very well then Tria. As you were.”

Tria heaved a sigh of relief and was about to turn away when Kai spoke again.

“You know,” he said. “For someone who was once the lover of a rebel, I figured you’d come up with a more convincing cover-story than that.”

Tria froze in her tracks. He knew she had lied…

Kai pushed his snarling face up to Tria’s.

“I’ve seen Mrs Maia,” he growled. “I’ve been patrolling and examining every four-footer this side of the Valley. There are very few young children about – and certainly none with her. So…I’m going to ask you again – where are the kids???”

Tria desperately tried to think of some explanation, but all she could see were the pitiless pupils of her oppressor and her mind went blank.

“It’s a two-footer isn’t it?” Kai whispered, his voice dripping with venom. “A two-footed dissident is running a little babysitting scheme in secret with an organisation akin to rebellion.”

Tria didn’t say anything, but the look on her face was enough to tell him that his suspicions were right. His face contorting with loathing, he swung around and struck Tria full on with his viciously spiked tail, sending long and deep cuts across her hide and sending her flying, landing on the ground with an unpleasant thud, to the gasps on onlookers.

“I knew it,” Kai snapped. “Interaction between different types of dinosaur will not be tolerated at this level, and you will certainly not get away with this lightly. I will take some Bludgeoners to comb the Valley to find the ringleader. We will kill him on sight.”

*

It didn’t take them long to find Hyp.

The hidden swamp area was, of course, well known to Kai due to his meetings with Ulciscor, and when he and the Bludgeoners had found Hyp, they flew into a rage and tried to slaughter him. Hyp had only just made it out alive, fleeing out of their sight, even as they attempted to give pursuit. So far, no word about where he was, though according to Shock, he could not have left the Valley due to how heavily guarded the entrances and exits were. Kai vowed to find him, but now the burden of punishment lay upon other perpetrators.

“This will not be tolerated,” Ulciscor growled at the populace. “I thought the execution of that clubtail would have hammered home the message, but no…you defy me again and again. This time, maybe I should do something to make you understand.”

Nobody said anything. They were terrified about what he might do. Ulciscor paused for a moment, as though considering his next actions.

“It seems your families are what you care about the most,” he said, striding slowly towards the infants found with Hyp, which were now guarded my Bludgeoners. “What if something were to happen to them?”

And then, beyond all expectations of the bystanders and without warning, he picked Tricia up by her tail and between his teeth and hoisted her up into the air. Tricia let out a shrill shriek of terror, and was crying and writhing as Ulciscor began to walk away with her. Her call out for her mother made Tria step forward, forgetting common sense briefly.

“NO!!!” she screamed. “NOT MY DAUGHTER, PLEASE!!! DO ANYTHING YOU WANT TO ME, BUT YOU CAN’T HARM TRICIA, SHE’S JUST A CHILD…!”

Ulciscor ignored her screaming pleas.

“I wonder what I should do to her to make you understand,” he wondered aloud, positioning his teeth so Tricia did not escape him as he spoke. She was still sobbing fervently and calling for Tria, who was in a silent shock. She did not know what to do. For one brief moment, she found herself longing for Topps, and his strong, warm hide that would always comfort her, tell her that everything would be alright…

Kai was grinning malevolently as he watched Tricia writhe, but even some of the Bludgeoners looked slightly uncomfortable at what Ulciscor was doing. Unfazed, their leader spoke again.

“Perhaps I should drop her from somewhere…? Some tall tree? Or the mountain wall…”

“PLEASE…!” Tria choked again. Then she tried to force herself to remain calm. He was only bluffing, surely? He was doing this to scare them all into obedience, right? He wouldn’t commit infanticide…would he?

“They are not to blame for this!” Tria insisted. “The children don’t understand – we can work something out I’m sure, BUT YOU’VE GOT TO PUT HER DOWN!!!” She gulped as Tricia’s wails continued to penetrate her. “She doesn’t like heights!”

At these words, Ulciscor tensed, and he was suddenly reminded…of an occasion many years ago, when he was stuck up a tree, looking in terror at what was beneath him…

He closed his eyes.

Then he bent his neck down and deposited Tricia on the ground, where she immediately scampered back to Tria.

“OK,” Ulciscor replied. “This time…” he began to walk away. “Kai – you need to administer the punishments to the adults. Two-footers who were involved should be imprisoned, and four-footers shall receive beatings. See to it…oh, and I think it’s time we let those other dissidents out. No arguments just get on with it.”

Nobody else said a word until the sleek longneck was out of sight.

*
Lini gave a small gasp as the rock that was on her leg was removed by Al.

“C’mon, Lini,” he whispered, nudging her. “We’ve got to get moving. I think Saureen must have loosened the rocks on her side, so now there’s an opening.”

“I don’t think I can…” Lini moaned.

“Yes, you can!” Al insisted, grabbing her hand. “You’ve got to – Chomper and Seizon are fighting.”

Lini’s eyes immediately widened.

“We’ve got no time to lose,” Al continued. “We’ve got to get Chomper and Saureen and go and find Zyro.”

“What about Seizon?”

“He can do what he likes,” Al replied. “But he’s not taking us anywhere against our will.”

“Al…” Lini whispered.

“Your leg isn’t broken, I’m fairly sure,” Al said impatiently, giving it a quick examine. “I can help you walk.” He helped her stagger to her one good foot. “Lean on me.”

So, begrudgingly, Lini did so, and Al began to help her limp over the opening in the rocks.

“It might be a long trek,” Al admitted. “But we’re going to find Zyro.”

*

Chomper was thrown bodily against a large boulder and felt the blood fly out of his mouth as Seizon came for him, but he was able to avoid him just him time, forcing Seizon to corkscrew around and take a swipe at him. Chomper just about dodged this and retaliated with an attempt to bite down on Seizon’s shoulder, and so he spun around and dodged this blow too.

The two Sharptooth then launched themselves at each other, crashing head-to-head once more, pushing and struggling, wrestling with their arms and growling…Seizon clawed at Chomper’s neck, but Chomper then leapt aside, wincing at his wounds and grappling at Seizon’s side, sending them both tumbling to the ground. They simply rose to their feet and continued fighting.

Eventually, Saureen could watch no more and sprinted towards them in a desperate attempt to drive them apart.
“Please stop!!” she pleaded, trying to grab hold of both their arms. But this was a big mistake.

“I SAID STAY OUT OF IT!!!” Seizon snarled, swinging his arm to fling her off and accidentally catching her in the face with his claws in the process. He didn’t stop to apologise however.

Saureen took a step back, clutching her face, and when Chomper saw the blood seep through her fingers, his temper increased a thousand fold.

“HOW CAN YOU CALL US ALL OUR FAMILY????” he screamed at Seizon. “WHEN YOU CARE FOR NO ONE BUT YOURSELF???” He launched himself at Seizon, who absorbed the impact with his arms and bit hard into Chomper’s shoulder. Even as Chomper cried out, Seizon kicked him in the stomach and slashed ruthlessly all over his face, neck and chest, before kicking him again, this time forcefully down the slope they stood on, sending him skidding before finally stopping at the bottom, panting heavily, his face covered in blood.

And then there was silence – nobody moved or spoke. Saureen, her cut forgotten, was simply staring in horror at the two who had previously been fighting, unable to believe what she had just witnessed. Chomper was motionless, and Seizon was too – standing there with his eyes closed. Then they flew open.

“There…” he muttered. “I win.”

Saureen swallowed. Chomper just raised his head and looked at him sceptically through his blood-stained eye.

“Now we get moving,” Seizon declared. “We’re heading to the Fanged Forest. Saureen-” He turned to her.
“I may need your help moving him,” he said. Then he began to walk down towards Chomper.

Was that it? Saureen thought to herself. No apology, no explanation…just business as usual, Xal, Xal, Xal…

Just as Seizon had reached Chomper, who was making no resistance, he heard more footsteps approach him. Looking up, all three of them saw Al and Lini slowly heading their way, Lini leaning on Al for support as she limped.

“Excellent,” Seizon continued. “You managed to get out of those rocks OK? C’mon, I need your help moving…what?” For now Seizon saw that Al and Lini were gazing at Chomper’s injured form with transfixed horror.

“Seizon…” Lini breathed, looking as though she were about to faint. “Did you do this?”

“I had to!” Seizon shot back. “He was resisting…I’ll need your help getting him to the Fanged Forest…”

“No.”

Al had spoken very clearly, and the contempt on his face as he gazed at Seizon was unmistakable.

“What do you mean no???” Seizon snapped impatiently.

“Exactly that,” Al replied. He drew a deep breath. “I’m sorry – but Chomper’s right. We can longer be a part of your pack if you continue to disregard all members’ well-being in favour of someone we’ve never met. We’re going to leave the pack.”

“You don’t understand…” Seizon looked highly distressed now. He took a step towards Al, and as he did so, Saureen quickly ran over to Chomper behind his back and helped him to his feet.

“Xal and I have been working towards this for years…” Seizon declared. “And I’m sorry if my leadership has resulting in some problems with you…but you can’t take away everything we’ve worked for now!”

“If it endangers the people I care about, then yes I can, Seizon,” Al replied levelly. He looked over at Chomper and Saureen. “Chomper, Saureen – are you with us?”

Determinately looking anywhere but Seizon, they both gave their affirmatives.

“YOU CAN’T DO THIS!!!” Seizon roared, in a full blown state of panic.

“You really want to try and stop us?” Al asked as they began to walk away. “Unless you want to come with us?” Seizon didn’t move, so Al continued. “Do you really want more blood on your hands?”

Seizon unconsciously gazed at Chomper’s blood on his claws and didn’t answer. For one thing, he didn’t trust himself, and for another, he couldn’t believe he was seeing his entire pack walk away from him. It was impossible! This couldn’t be happening!

“Saureen!!” Seizon called helplessly after her. Saureen paused, her hand still on Chomper. Seeing that the other three were waiting for her, she turned back to look at Seizon.

“I’m sorry Saureen!” Seizon wailed, the pleading obvious also in his twitching jaw and shimmering eyes. “Please – after everything we’ve been through together…you’ve gotta come back to the forest with me, I need you by my side!”

Saureen looked down at the Sharptooth she once called brother, and then looked back at the three sharpteeth she was performing an exodus with…and burst into tears. For her focus was on Chomper’s battle scars and Lini’s injured leg.

“What happened to you Seizon?” she sobbed, the tears already flowing down her face. “What happened to the helpful and eccentric brother I used to know you as? It’s almost as though you’re a different person – one who uses intimidation and ruthlessness to get what he wants…you’re like Xal, or maybe even Redclaw…and that’s not who you should be. I don’t even want to know you anymore…or spend another second with you!” She gulped. “I’m sorry…”

Without another backwards glance, the four sharpteeth continued to walk away from their leader.

“SAUREEN!!!” Seizon yelled pointlessly after them, almost going hoarse. “AL, LINI, CHOMPER, COME BACK!!!!!!!!”

But they were soon out of earshot and out of sight, and Seizon felt that he didn’t have the guts or the heart hard enough to go back after them.

He rolled his eyes heaven-ward as he took one moment to absorb everything that had just happened, and felt the weight of his abandonment come crashing down on him like a tonne of rocks. He couldn’t believe it…now here he was, alone and dreading how Xal would react when returned to the forest empty-handed and solitary…

If only there were some sky-water, he thought miserably, gazing up at the clear sky. Cool, fresh and tranquil…that might have calmed him slightly…

He felt something crawl across his foot, and when he looked down to see a lizard, suddenly the rage came bursting forth from him like a rapid. Because he couldn’t reach Saureen and the others…this lizard would pay for their crimes!

It was the work of a few minutes for Seizon to let his anger out on this hapless creature, as he tore it into three pieces with his jaws and claws, letting the blood run freely from him as his tongue lapped it up…

Seizon was not happy. And soon, he felt, something had to give. Once he returned to Xal, he would see what that something was…

~0~

And there you go, and there it is, and there you have it!
This chapter may seem rushed, so apologies for that... :oops But its all a change now! Seizon has been left by his four remaining pack members and he's not happy about it! What will the future hold for them all? Only time will tell...oh, and it seems Ulciscor has a conscience after all! Shame it doesn't make up for everything he does...Oh, and this soundtrack that I've been throwing around a bit is what I've always imagined taking place during Chomper and Seizon's fight.  :slap Oh well, please review and comment etc!!!  :smile  


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Whoa! The powder keg exploded :wow

Before I start, is 'brethren' some ancient word similar to 'brother' in meaning?

No fic without a good ol' earthshake eh? :p No worries, that was a good move and I shall point that out below the review itself.
So Al and Lini are trapped. Oh my.. Seizon... now who's the rockhead here?  :rolleyes: Seizon has become antagonistic..
How can you evil thing interrupt the flow of the fight using a flashback!?! :lol Well, the flashback itself is really worth a smile :smile Saureen being terrified of insects?!? Brain-sucking butterflies?!? :DD You put that nicely! Not to mention you managed to do the transitions smoothly.

So Giga's from LBT 5?  :idea cool. Whatever Zyro has discussed with the Old One and Bron, you won't tell us I guess   :exactly

Uh oh... Kai knows it and Tria has to pay the prize or whut?!

The other rockhead, Ulciscor...  :slap I wonder why he didn't drop Tricia.. Knowing you, Toby, we'll see sooner or later :smile

Well, Seizon eventually wins and Lini & Al free themselves but what now? Well, the last scene was one of your best ones so far, Toby. The whole chapter is just awesome as usual just a little bit more awesome (may it be there is a climax in awesomeness of the chapters? :lol:)
Seizon being abandoned by the pack was a forecastable thing but I haven't exactly guessed that you meant this with major changes within the pack :angel


Okay, so the earthshake is well placed for the following reasons:
  • Al & Lini get trapped so there's only one individual left that could intervene, Saureen.
  • It provides a good situation to reveal Seizon's priorities
That being said... I bow down in front of you, keep writing awesome chapter's such as this one!
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Yes, brethren does mean brother.  :DD

Glad you liked it, and don't worry - we haven't seen the last of Seizon, not by a long shot... :angel


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*OMG* *GAWK* *GASPETH*
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I dunno if I can find the words to describe this chapter. It's just so--- everything!
Well okay, let's start with the jaw-dropping moment at the end: I'm just surprised that it ended like this (ended?? XDD) with Seizon just blatantly denying everything and forging on nonetheless. His arrogance is something to be admired in a way :DD
But then-- GUH! It's getting harder and harder to feel bad for him when he does things like this!

And that moment with Tricia... AHA!! Found a spot of weakness, have we? *evillaugh* Again, I find it hard to beleve that Ulciscor would in fact kill a child, that's just something even the most hard-hearted of criminals balk at. So tricia's probably safe, right.... RIGHT?!?!
You've done it again, Dosu - an enjoyable, emotional trainwreck of a read and I'm loving/writhing at every second of it!! XDD
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Glad to hear it!  :lol And don't worry, you shouldn't have long to wait until the next chapter...


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Here we go, at long last, the next VV chapter! Will discuss the content at the end. Until then, ENJOY!

Chapter Nineteen: Help is at Hand?

“He’s back!!!”

It was a shrill cry, one quite uncharacteristic of Ichy as he flapped in sudden a wave of drunken excitement over the heads of larger sharpteeth.

Xal’s eyes narrowed at the enthusiastic sharpbeak above his head.

“Ferox?” he asked slowly, Gigas and Redclaw remaining in a stony silence.

“No,” Ichy replied impatiently. “Not him.” He perched precariously on Xal’s nose.

“I’m talking about Seizon,” he explained. “He’s heading towards the forest as I speak!”

For the first time in a very long while, something akin to pure, non-malevolent joy and delight manifested itself into an expression on Xal’s face, and his eyes widened also with the same emotion.

“Excellent! I was beginning to wonder what had happened to him…we can now finally get things moving. The revolution begins here…”

“What about this Zyro person?” Gigas questioned. “Won’t he get in the way?”

“Not if he knows what’s good for him,” Xal shot back. “Besides – we have the ambassador now…”

“Sorry Xal!” Ichy piped up, now dispiritedly. “But the ambassador isn’t with Seizon.”

“What?”

“That’s not the half of it,” Ichy continued. “Nobody’s with him at all…not even Saureen.”
*

Despite dreading the reaction from his stepfather when he informed him that his entire pack had abandoned him, Seizon had nevertheless loyally dragged himself back to the Fanged Forest, if only to re-group and consider the next best course of action.

As he approached the sheltered conifers which marked the forests’ beginning, he noticed three large sharpteeth emerge from the trees to meet him. One of them was unmistakably his stepfather Xal, with the mid-blue body and blood-red sail on his back. To one side of him was a tall, green plated slashclaw that Seizon didn’t recognise and the third…

As soon as Seizon recognised the third, he stopped dead in his tracks, staring at said Sharptooth. On top of everything else that had happened, his disbelief was beginning to mount to an incredible height, almost so he could barely think straight anymore…

“Well, Seizon?” Xal’s voice cut across his thoughts. With some effort, Seizon turned to look at him. Xal didn’t seem angry, but there was a slight frown on his face, one that would have filled Seizon with a wave of guilt at his stepfather’s disappointment if he hadn’t been so transfixed with horror at the Sharptooth that he hated.

“Where is everyone else?” Xal continued.

“First and foremost…” Seizon replied, swallowing slightly. He pointed at Redclaw.

“What the hell is he doing here?”

“Hm?” Xal glanced over at Redclaw. “Oh right…of course, you weren’t to know. Redclaw came to us to offer his allegiances, because he had nothing else left. I was reluctant to enrol him at first, but Gigas here…” he gestured to the slashclaw on his right. “Convinced me that Redclaw may prove useful…and he is. He is providing us with both muscle and vital information about our enemies. But Seizon – I want to know why you’ve come back here alone.”

“Right…” Seizon wasn’t entirely convinced about Redclaw, but he supposed that Xal wouldn’t have allowed him to join his army without good reason.

“I’m sorry Xal…” he continued. “But the ambassador, Chomper, was reluctant to come back with me. He battled it out – I won, but then Saureen and the other members of my pack announced their intentions to leave as well…” His mouth took on a contorted, pained expression. “I couldn’t stop them, they all left…”

The moment came back to him – their ever shrinking sillohuettes in the distance, all having told him the same thing – we can no longer follow you…

He clenched his fist. They would see – once the revolution came round, they would all see how wrong they were, and would rejoice at the sight of him…

“I see…” Xal nodded, and rolled his eyes skyward to consider his options briefly. Gigas gave him an odd look. He couldn’t quite understand why Xal was being so lenient with this brat – not only was he late, he had failed in his mission completely. Xal should have punished him severely…and yet he wasn’t. He supposed there must be some sort of family connection between the two of them that prevented Xal from being so severe, but in his time, Gigas reflected, that had never stopped him…

He looked over at Redclaw to see if he were thinking the same thing as him. His expression was unreadable, and Gigas guessed that he didn’t want to seem treacherous to Xal at this point.

“Do you know where they went, Seizon?” Xal asked.

Seizon shook his head. “I’m not even sure they knew…but I will find them, I promise!” He now looked up, his eyes bursting with determination.

“You should have thought of that beforehand!” Gigas snapped at him. “You should have gone after them instead of returning here empty-handed!”

“Trying to convince them again would have done him little good,” Xal assured Gigas. “I personally think coming here in an attempt to re-group was a far better strategy.”

“True…” Gigas admitted.

“The problem remains, however,” Xal continued. “That they will continue to resist us. Particularly Saureen, once she learns the fate of her grandmother and father.”

“Tyra and Ferox?” Seizon murmured. “What happened to them?”

“They were being insubordinate and declaring their intentions to leave,” Xal replied. “A familiar story, I’m sure you’ll agree…Ferox escaped and we were forced to kill Tyra.”

Seizon nodded and felt a rush of sympathy towards Saureen. It must be terrible having family that don’t understand what’s good for them…he hoped she would have a better life once the revolution began…if they could find her…

“Therefore,” Xal continued. “We will have to bring them here by force.”

Redclaw’s eyes lit up.

“Whatever works,” Seizon agreed. “It’s for their own good. But how are we supposed to find them?”

“I may be able to help you out there,” Redclaw said suddenly, stepping forward.

“Who asked you??!” Seizon growled at him.

“Let him talk,” Xal rebuked Seizon.

“It goes back to Ichy’s report from when he encountered you all at the Cave Network,” Redclaw explained. “The description of one of those involved matches very closely to one young Sharptooth whom I know to be associated with Zyro…”

Xal glared at him. “And you didn’t think to tell me this before?”

“I figured it would have been easier to see how events unfolded from there,” Redclaw replied defensively. “And it would have given us a better insight into how these pacifists operate!”

“I could have told you that,” Xal countered. “You still should have let me know.”

“Who’s Zyro?” Seizon asked.

“An obstacle,” Xal said simply. “But if this child was indeed working for Zyro, it’s highly likely that he’s taken the ambassador and the others to where he is.”

“Who was this person?” Seizon demanded.

“I’m not sure of his name,” Redclaw admitted. “But he’s a young crunchbiter with stripes…”

Images of Al immediately flitted into Seizon’s mind, and his rage grew. Al would certainly not get away with taking his pack from him…how could he have not have known he was a spy??

“Right…” Seizon murmured, pummelling his fist into the ground. “So our top priority is finding Zyro?”

“Quite,” Xal agreed. “It may make infiltrating the Great Valley even easier – it’s been taken over by Ulciscor, and so removing all possible enemies at any time is a good move. But once we find these pacifists…it may be difficult getting them secure.”

“Now, this is where I might be able to help you,” Gigas spoke up, grinning. “I know somebody in that pack as well…”

*
Dust and small pebbles rose up around the sharptooth’s feet as they continued to walk and trudge towards an unspecified destination. Chomper, who was, along with Saureen, aiding Lini by supporting her at either side reflected at how suddenly and quickly Al, who was walking in front of and taking them to their destination, had taken up this leadership role.

Chomper supposed he had always taken Al for granted. He had always been the quietest member of the group, always calm and mellow without any other particular personality traits. Chomper had previously been so worked up about the issues surrounding Pyron, Nyhca and Seizon that he hadn’t had a lot of time to give Al much thought, which made it all the more shocking about what he and Lini had said the previous night.

“I don’t believe this!” Chomper protested with severe indignation. “If we can’t go back to the Valley, where are you suggesting we go?”

“There is a Sharptooth,” Al replied patiently. “Who will be able to explain to us everything that is going on. He commissioned me to join this pack to ensure everything was kept safe and sane, and I promise you he does not hate leaf-eaters.”

“Are you talking about Zyro?” Lini asked, her face suddenly alight with interest as supposed to contorted with pain.

“Yes,” Al replied, smiling a little. “He will be our safe haven at last.”


Zyro, it turned out, had sent Al undercover into the pack to keep an eye on things, whilst reporting back to Screech and Thud – something Chomper hadn’t been entirely sure about. Apparently, Al had lost contact with them, meaning that they had had to flee their outpost near the Valley for some reason. Therefore, the Valley was an unsafe zone.

Al had spoken about Zyro with some admiration, and yet for some reason it didn’t seem to Chomper as though this was the same sort of bond Seizon and Xal shared, and as everything he had heard of Zyro and Shark made him like them even more, he had decided to go along with it. All the same, he was still a little uncertain about what was going on.

He glanced across Lini at Saureen, who had been largely silent since they had walked out on Seizon. He could understand how painful the whole experience must have been for her – she had known the obnoxious bladeback since they were infants and had seen more of the light and dark of him than the rest of them had. It was impossible to tell quite what she was feeling about it, and even less so about the meeting with this mysterious Sharptooth.

Then, Lini spoke, as though she were reading both their minds.

“I know what you two are wondering,” she said softly, an albeit pained smile creeping across her face. “Wondering whether you should trust another individual you’ve never met?”

Chomper and Saureen just listened and waited, confirming her suspicions.

“There’s no doubt it’s strange,” Lini admitted. “But following someone in life, even if it’s for a short amount of time, will help you get skills and trains of thought to follow…”

Chomper was instantly reminded of how he had instantly imprinted on Littlefoot following his birth, and he nodded understandably.

“That’s provided,” Lini added, her smile slipping slightly. “You follow the right ones. From what I’ve heard of Zyro, he seems to have the right idea about these things…”

“He managed to get Screech and Thud in their place,” Saureen interjected suddenly, remembering now how the two fastbiters had sounded as though they were trying to help Seizon and give him advice when he had taken Chomper from the Valley. “If he can get them to act like rational individuals…”

“Exactly,” Al turned back to them smiling. “I understand why you might be suspicious, but I advise you all see Zyro before you make your decisions. Right now, we’re headed towards the Rocky Heathland, and area which I was told was the ideal place to rendezvous if the Valley scrutiny tactic didn’t work.”

*

Littlefoot gave a small sigh as he flopped his neck onto the ground to join the circle of him and his seven friends. Well, six – Spike was a short distance away from the rest of them, eating stolidly from a large bush and enjoying the companionship of Opal. Their spiketail kinship really seemed to have kicked in.

“Anymore word on what Zyro and the other sharpteeth are saying?” Cera asked to no one in particular.

“Nothing,” Ali admitted. “Apparently, they’re still sitting tight and waiting. But I’m bored of waiting!” She flopped her neck onto the ground in a similar fashion to Littlefoot’s.

“You’re saying you really want to go to war?” Shorty asked, puzzled. He seemed to have gotten over failing the test now, and was much calmer.
“Well, no,” Ali admitted. “But…well…if what they’re saying is true, we need to free the Valley from this Ulciscor!”

“Agreed,” Littlefoot replied. “I think my dad recognises the name from somewhere.” He frowned. “He won’t tell me anything about it though…”

Petrie, getting bored and slightly weirded out from this constant war-talk, had allowed the wind to catch under his wings and was drifting off slightly into the sky. Where they were sitting was on the edge of the heathland, where they liked to be to overlook the whole area, seeing the longnecks and sharpteeth lying side-by-side. Old One and the others allowed them to go there, provided an adult leaf-eater went with them, and Opal was their favourite choice of chaperone due to how well she got on with Spike. As Petrie drifted and gazed at the land in the distance, he noticed some distinct figures on the horizon. As they moved closer, he could make out their number (four) and when he peered closer, he saw something that caused him to almost fall out of the sky.

“Whoa…!” he gasped, hardly able to form words with his astonishment. Gathering his thoughts together, he quickly dived back to the group. There could be no mistaking the purple one…

“IT’S CHOMPER!!!” Petrie screeched, borderline hysterical.

Heads instantly snapped his way. Even Spike, with a mouthful of leaves, turned to look at him in wide-eyed curiosity.

“Huh?” Cera muttered.

“What?” Ruby responded.

“What do you mean?” Littlefoot asked.

“Chomper – he’s coming over to heathland!!!” Petrie replied in earnest. He took off again. “Follow me!” He called to them. “Me show you!”

The seven children all rushed in the flyer’s wake, Opal following them and bringing up the rear. Over the crest of the hill they stood on, they could see the figures coming along the horizon in more focus now. Four small sharpteeth, one of whom was…

“It IS Chomper!” Ducky yelled in delight. “It is, it is!!”

Recognition hit the rest of them, and despite the presence of other sharpteeth, euphoria immediately spread throughout their beings, shining outwardly on their faces. He was safe…

In a unanimous movement, the children began to gallop towards their long-lost friend.

Of course, the galloping was not going to go unnoticed by the other party either. As soon as Chomper heard the familiar cries of delight quickly coming his way, he quickly raised his head to see the sight for sore eyes that he had desired for so long. Quickly but gently releasing Lini, he mustered the last of his strength that had been diminished by his constant walking, and sprinted at full-pelt towards the party coming to greet him.

Al watched with some surprise as Chomper soared past him, but smiled along with his two other companions when he saw the cause.

Littlefoot and Chomper finally met in the middle of these two groups, wrapping their bodies around each other in an ecstatic embrace of brothers separated for too long.

“Littlefoot…!” Chomper whispered in a kind of hoarse euphoria.

“Welcome back Chomper!” Littlefoot murmured back, his joy as conspicuous as ever.

Eventually, the two of them released each other, and Chomper quickly turned to greet all his other friends in a similar fashion, including Ali and Shorty.

“Chomper, we’re so glad, yep, yep, yep!” Ducky cheered enthusiastically.

“Good to see ya, buddy!” Cera grinned.

“You too!” Chomper laughed back, as Spike gave him an excited lick.

“I have to say,” Al smiled back at the equally beaming Saureen and Lini as they watched this joyful reunion from afar. “This has turned out even better than I expected. I didn’t know they were going to be here too! Isn’t it great when that happens?”

“I know!” Lini cooed appreciatively.

“They all look so cute together!” Saureen agreed, smiling in spite of herself and her constant worry about Seizon…

Shaking this off, she then said to Al,

“Shouldn’t we introduce ourselves?”

Al’s smile slipped slightly.

“I guess so,” he admitted. “But we’ll need to get Chomper to do the introductions…”

“But Chomper…” Ruby murmured to him, wiping her eyes as he released her. “What’s happened to you?”

“It’s a notoriously long story,” Chomper replied honestly. “At the moment…I’m just so glad I’m here!”

This statement was greeted by more smiles from his friends, and they moved in on him in a massive group hug.

“Nice to see you two again as well!” Chomper added to Shorty and Ali. “But I suppose it begs the question…what are you all doing here?”

“Well,” Littlefoot sighed. “THAT’S a long story as well!”

“Really?” Chomper replied absent-mindedly, staring over the horizon. “So, who’s that?”

He was referring to Opal, who was still back where the Gang had left her, and she was now watching this exchange from a distance rather awkwardly. It wasn’t as though she mistrusted Chomper – but she felt that watching this way was being rather intrusive on an issue that was obviously just about the kids. All the same, she couldn’t help but feel connected to these children somehow. The attitudes of the longnecks in the herd weren’t impolite, but she never felt as though she had much place among them, even just as another adult.

“That’s Opal,” Ruby replied. “She’s a travelling companion.”

“And she’s far better than our last one,” Cera added, rolling her eyes. “You’ll understand what I mean once you hear what’s going on…”

“So…” Petrie piped up, looking nervously at three approaching figures. “Who’re they?”

Chomper turned around to where Petrie was looking.

“Oh! Sorry guys, I almost forgot!”

He strode up to Al, Saureen and Lini with an apologetic though jovial look in his face. He then turned back to his leaf-eater friends whilst gesturing to his Sharptooth ones as he spoke.

“Guys, these are Saureen, Lini and Al – they’re my really good friends who helped me get here!”

He smiled at them, and they grinned sheepishly back. Of course, they couldn’t understand a word he was saying – he could have been violently slagging them off for all they knew.

Then Chomper switched to Sharptooth.

“Guys,” he said again, now addressing the remaining members of what was once Seizon’s pack. “These are my friends from the Great Valley – well, not all of them…anyway, Saureen, you’ve already seen them right?”

Saureen nodded. Chomper smiled mysteriously back at her and began to gesture at the leaf-eaters, who were watching patiently.

“This is Littlefoot, Cera, Ruby, Spike, Petrie, Ducky, Ali and Shorty,” he explained.

Lini frowned.

“A lot to remember isn’t it?” she asked in a stage whisper. Not that it mattered due to the barriers of language.

Chomper chuckled.

“You’ll get used to it soon enough,” he replied.

“Well, now we’ve got the introductions out of the way,” Al continued, a more serious expression fixing itself on his features. “Could you ask them to lead us to Zyro, if he is indeed here? We have a lot to talk about…”

*

Zyro was positively overjoyed to see that the four young sharpteeth had managed to make it here safely. He jubilantly congratulated Al on his work, politely welcomed Saureen and Lini and then turned to Chomper.

“It’s a pleasure to finally meet you in person, Chomper,” he smiled. “I’ve heard a lot about you.”

“Yes, likewise,” Chomper replied, looking Zyro up and down with some admiration. After what Al had explained to him, he didn’t quite know what to expect of Zyro, but he had to admit, now seeing him, Zyro conformed to the heroic leader title extremely well – he just shone awesomeness even just from his colouration scheme, Chomper couldn’t keep his eyes of the dazzling blue and white scales, almost as impressive as Saureen’s, though Saureen’s case was different, of course…

“I will admit,” Zyro went on. “That you had many of us worried. Including…” he inclined his head.

Chomper followed Zyro’s gesture with his gaze. His mouth fell open when he saw who was being referred to. It had been over a year since he had been forcibly separated from them by Redclaw, and he could see that, in all their time apart, they had taken on the burden and scars of a wandering sharptooth’s life. And yet, they still greeted him with the same old loving smiles that he had grown to only associate with his loving parents.

He didn’t say a word. He didn’t have to. He just ran, ran faster than his tired frame could logically be expected to move. He ran straight into Rhea’s open arms and allowed her to lift him up to nuzzle him as tears flowed freely down both their faces.

“Oh, my son…” Rhea purred, absolutely overcome, holding tightly to Chomper like he was a newborn. As Chomper purred in reply, he saw his father, out of the corner of his teary eye, approach them. He was blinking furiously.

“I’m not crying,” he said, smiling weakly at Chomper. “I just have something in both of my eyes…” Grinning at his father’s all-too-familiar wit, Chomper twisted around to hug his massive nose, at which Ross purred too.

“The Great Circle of Life is truly a wonderful thing…” Chomper murmured to his parents. “As quickly as it divided us it brings us together again…”

“Indeed,” Rhea agreed, sniffing him uncertainly. “But it brought you back far dirtier than when you left us! What on earth have you been doing?”

“All sorts of things?” Chomper shrugged. “Please – you don’t have to wash me now!”

“Oh yes we do!” Ross replied firmly as Rhea placed Chomper on the ground. “We wouldn’t be fulfilling our duties as parents otherwise!”

Inevitably, Chomper found himself writhing and squirming in discomfort as his parents’ tongues lapped every inch they could reach. Lini found it all absolutely hilarious.

“When’s it my turn?” she snickered, and Chomper wasn’t sure whether she meant being licked or doing the licking, and then decided he didn’t even want to know.

“If you’re just going to snigger,” he complained. “You might as well have the full works yourself!”

As Ross and Rhea finished up washing their son, Ruby stepped nervously forward.

“Chomper,” she said, swallowing slightly. “I think it just needs to be said…”

“What does?” Chomper asked, looking at her puzzled.

Ruby hung her head.

“I want you to apologize to your parents for not watching out for you the way I should have done when you were taken…” she replied. But her expression quickly changed to horror when she saw Ross and Rhea notice her and immediately stride straight over.

“Oh n-…look…I understand you might be…” But she faltered when the two huge sharpteeth bent down to her level and nuzzled her gently between their snouts, purring as they would to their own child.

Rhea emitted some tranquil, low growling sounds, which Chomper translated for Ruby, who was speechless with astonishment.

“She’s thanking you for looking after me all this time,” he beamed, his delight at this turn of events shamelessly displayed. “It seems that they don’t blame you any more than I do.”

Amongst the sharpteeth, another family reunion was taking place.

“So glad you’re here dad!” Saureen smiled as she and Ferox nestled each other. “But…” she looked around confused and the absence of a familiar blue form. “Where is granny?”

Ferox’s smile transformed completely. His eyes had lost their merry twinkle that had ignited upon seeing his daughter and they now carried an empty look in them.

“Saureen,” he said, in a voice as controlled as he could make it. “Could I talk to you privately please?”

*

Thud sat idly on the heath, taking in its fresh smell as the wind billowed around him. He also gazed over the lip of the small hill he sat on, watching a father and daughter’s embrace as they mourned the loss of Tyra, weeping quietly in private.

“It’s strange to consider it?” Thud commented as Screech sat down beside him. “That Tyra’s gone…she always seemed to be winning her battle against old age…”

“It wasn’t age that killed her though…” Screech frowned. “It was Xal’s thugs!”

“Exactly,” Thud smiled. “I’ve got to admit, it’s very her, isn’t it? Dying by fighting against something. In all our time in the Fanged Forest, I always found her the easiest to get on with…”

“She wasn’t too amused to discover we’d joined Redclaw though, did she?” Screech murmured.

“True,” Thud admitted. “But if anything, that’s what made her so impressive…”

There was a short silence.

“Why did we do it, Thud?” Screech asked despairingly.

Thud considered for a moment.
“We weren’t really part of the group without Maya,” he admitted. “And after her passing, I guess there was little else we could have done…”

“But Redclaw though?”

Thud smiled weakly.

“Perhaps we just needed to feel strong again. Have the backing of someone formidable. He needed the companionship as much as we did, after his brother…”

“Why would he have missed him though?”

“Hey.” A sombre voice cut across their conversation, and they both turned to see Al with a dissatisfied glower on his face.

“Al!” Thud grinned rather impishly at him. “How’s it going?”

“I could be better,” he shot back. “I only come here because Zyro sent me to tell you that he is going to make an announcement en masse, and needs everyone present.”

“Got it…” Screech nodded. “I’ll tell you what – you’ve done an impressive job in leading them all back here.”

“Quite,” Al agreed. “No thanks to you two – abandoning me in my time of need…I never asked to work with you, I only did because I knew it would be the most beneficial way of achieving Zyro’s goal. Now, he may think you’re worth reforming, but I know better.” An ugly look crossed his face before he turned away.

“That’s a bit primitive of you Al,” Thud remarked.

Al stopped in his tracks.

What did you just say to me?” he snarled.

“What I mean,” Thud continued, rising to his feet. “Is that someone who is as rational and intelligent as you should not believe certain individuals are beyond redemption.”

“Is that so?” Al replied coldly. “Or is that just a fallacy thugs make up to try and make themselves feel better?”

“Ah, Al,” Thud continued to smile, further irritating his quarry. “Your headstrong and independent nature – your desire to do the right thing, and your inherent mistrust of all those who seem to be the perpetrators of injustice…it reminds me strongly of someone else.”

Al glowered.

“I swear, if you’re talking about-”

“Our sister,” Thud cut across him smoothly. Screech looked uncomfortable, but Thud continued. “I’m sure you would have liked her Al. Your viewpoints on everything were remarkably similar…” he closed his eyes. “And if I’m honest,” he continued. “If she could see what we’ve become, she would turn in her grave.”
Al nodded, unsure of how to respond. Eventually, turning away, he managed to mutter,

“Well…at least you didn’t say Seizon.”

*
The gathering was immense. Chomper stared around in awe at the crowds of leaf-eaters and sharpteeth, all waiting patiently, showing no sign of fear of the other, all united in a single cause. It was incredible! The sight of such a union and a mutual alliance between dinosaurs of radical difference was a harbinger of joy to Chomper in such a way he could barely describe. Seeing this harmony, he was reminded of a few words once whispered to him…

“Chomper…please…don’t let your dream die. It’s still possible, I know…a world where leaf-eaters and sharpteeth can live in harmony.”

Pyron had certainly believed in him. He had believed that Chomper would have been able to bring it about. But, Chomper, observed, almost welling up at the prospect, it looked as though he didn’t have to. Such had already been accomplished by this fantastic person. He gazed up at Zyro, and wondered whether he had any flaws at all. He certainly couldn’t see any from where he stood.

Zyro noticed Chomper gazing up at him and turned to smile down at him apologetically.

“Sorry about putting you on the spot like this,” he said. “But I feel it would be better if I can address both groups virtually at the same time, so they’re both on the same wavelength. And you’re the only other bilingual here.”

“Bilingual?” Chomper frowned. “What’s that?”

“It means you have the ability to speak two languages,” Zyro smiled. “Like me, you can speak both flattooth and Sharptooth.”

“You can speak flattooth too?” Chomper squawked, eyes boggling. Zyro was still full of surprises, it seemed. Where would they stop? Not noticing the gaze of sheer admiration, Zyro continued.

“Yes. But I think your friends and fellows would benefit from hearing something from a familiar face, whilst my own community would rather here something from me. Therefore, when I address the group in Sharptooth, I’d like you to translate for your leaf-eater companions. Is that alright?”

“Sure!” Chomper grinned back, nodding eagerly. “I’m ready!”

“Nice!” Zyro smiled at Chomper once more before addressing his community.

“Alright everyone!” he called over the chatter of the sharpteeth who all settled down at once.

“Now that everyone we were anticipating has arrived here, we can set our plans in motion to liberate the Great Valley from Ulciscor!”

Chomper translated for the eagerly listening leaf-eaters, and a great cheer arose from them.

“We shouldn’t be too hasty,” Zyro continued, with Chomper translating. “Because these youngsters have travelled for so long, they will need time to rest and recuperate before we go marching off to war…”

“Why do the kids have to come with us?” Rhea demanded. “I don’t want my son in any more danger than he needs to be! And I’m sure…” she turned to Ferox. “You’d agree with me concerning your daughter?”

Before Ferox could respond, Zyro jumped to answer her question.

“I understand your concern, Rhea,” he insisted. “But we can’t leave them behind, even with chaperones to watch over them. I don’t want this group to be divided over long distances. They will be safer with us as we travel, and once we get to the Valley, they can be taken to a safe location as the battle commences.”

“What did she say?” Ruby asked Chomper.

“Oh, she just asked if it would be safe for us to come to the Valley for the duration of the battle,” Chomper replied. “And Zyro replied that it would be better for the group to be united than divided.”

“I agree,” Littlefoot said firmly. “I don’t care what anyone says…I’m not letting this Ulciscor, or…” his face contorted in loathing. “Or Kai get the better of my grandparents or anyone else in the Valley!”

“Hear hear!” Cera cheered.

Bron sighed as he looked down at his determinately righteous son, torn between pride and despair. The boy had no apathy in him at all…just like a certain someone who was once his best friend. The similarities were uncanny, but Bron was certain Littlefoot would not go down the same path as his uncle if he knew the truth…he knew he would have to tell him soon.

Zyro continued, with Chomper continuing to translate.

“For a few days, we shall all have the chance to rest,” Zyro assured. “So therefore, during that time, I think we should also investigate into what’s going on in the Valley currently.”

Following this translation, Old One spoke up.

“If I may Zyro,” she said. “I may be able to help you out there. I have a very trusted messenger, who may be able to investigate the goings-on in the Valley and tell the populace of the impending liberation front…”

“Do you really think it will be wise to parade what we’re doing though?” A longneck asked her. “We don’t want Ulciscor getting wind of our plans…”

“Don’t worry,” Old One assured. “The messenger knows better than that – besides, he’s used to espionage.”

“Good,” Zyro nodded. “I would much like to meet this messenger, but apart from that, it shouldn’t be a problem.”

Switching back into sharpteeth, he addressed his community.

“I think that’s all,” he said, Chomper providing the translation for the leaf-eaters. “Everyone go and enjoy yourselves. Rest, spend time with your families, relax, but most of all, PREPARE.”
He paused for effect before dropping his voice to an even more serious tone.

“Make sure you’re ready for this,” he advised. “Because before the week is out, we’re going to be marching off to fight. And it’s going to be tough. You must make sure you’re prepared. Are you with me?”

There was pause finishing this statement and the translation. But then, both sides, sharpteeth and flatteeth alike, issued a mighty war cry, one of determination and jubilation, one of courage and unity, one that was music to the ears of Chomper and moved him to tears.

Zyro smiled at the sound of this enthusiasm, and spoke over the noise. “In that case, I wish you all the very best!”

And so the group disbanded, and as Chomper, wiping his eyes, went to join his friends, he could still feel the adrenalin pumping through his veins. He was on the verge of the greatest and most dramatic moment of his life, the great zenith of everything he had worked towards so far, and his only wish was that him, his friends, his family, all the members of this herd, every Sharptooth in the community and every single Valleian would pull through and come out on top at last.

*
Topps could not believe his eyes.

He hadn’t even been imprisoned all that long, and yet the Valley was now unrecognisable. Gone were the pleasant green pastures and leaves, as vegetation had been taken by Bludgeoners in order to force others to work for their food sources. The Valley did not look right without its everlasting green. Only a few bits of moss could be found here and there to stop the Valleians from simply starving to death. But that wasn’t the worse of it. What had made to Valley truly alien to him now was the fact that the joy had been drained from it. No longer was the air full of the laughter and whooping of happy children as they played and wrestled each other in the dirt. There were no happy and content adults as they sat around, chewing on plants and discussing the latest gossip. This was no longer a Great Valley. It was just a Valley full of miserable, tired and thin leaf-eaters, slaving away to serve their monstrous despot. Ulciscor had the Valley in his iron grip, and had sucked all the joy from it and everything that had ever made it great.

Desperately trying to find some reason, Topps turned to look at Dorian, but to his discomfort, the latter’s eyes were just full of knowing despair.

He of course, had seen this all before.

“There is little we can do at present,” Dorian told Topps quietly. “But right now you should go and speak to your wife.”

Topps swallowed, but nodded and steeled himself. “Yes…” he replied. “Perhaps you’re right…”

The two of them parted ways and Topps set out to his old nest.

His heart leapt to see Tria and Tricia at the spot, chewing silently on a few ferns they had, but Topps couldn’t shake off how utterly defeated they both looked. Even Tricia, as young as she was, seemed to know that something was up…

Topps cleared his throat.

“Uhm…hello Tria.”

Tria looked up in surprise.

“Oh…hello…” she managed.

Tricia’s reaction was considerably more rewarding. With a cry of ëDaddy!’ mixed in with some toddler jargon, she came charging up to him and immediately embraced his leg, nestling up to it. Smiling serenely, Topps bowed his head and nuzzled her gently.

“She’s been pining for you for ages,” Tria remarked, slowly walking up to them both.  “I told her that for the moment, you…had to go away.”

Topps nodded.

“Well, I’m back now, so-”

“But Topsy,” Tria cut across him. Every word seemed to cost her great pain, but she still said with determination and purpose. She fixed him with a meaningful look.

“I should never have been in the position to tell her that in the first place,” she said. “Poor kid – how am I to tell her what really happened?”

Tricia looked up as Tria began to speak to Topps in more condescending tones. These sounded familiar, but they were far from what she wanted to hear…

“Come on, Tria,” Topps said earnestly. “You’ve seen what’s happened to the Valley and what is still happening. It just wouldn’t have been me to stand idly by and watch.”

“No,” Tria admitted. “But sometimes for the sake of your family you need to bury your feelings deep down and continue doing what you have been called to do.”

She turned away from him, and as she did so, Topps noticed for the first time, the scars of gouge-marks down her skin.

“Where did they come from?” he demanded, wide-eyed.

“Hm?” Tria looked. “Oh, them…that was Kai. He had discovered a little insurgent group which involved babysitting that I was involved in.” She sat down. “Because you weren’t here to divide parental duties with me…”

Topps rolled his eyes.

“Tria, please…” he said. “Can you stop turning everything on me? I promise…” A snarl became pronounced upon his features. “Next time I see Kai, I’m going to kill him…”

Tria gave a hollow laugh.

“Good luck with that!” she replied. “And how long will it be until you meet Kosh’s fate?” She closed her eyes and bowed her head.

“Listen…Topsy, I loved you…I always found your desire to fight for everything you care about very touching, sweet and romantic. Cera helped convince me of that with the whole little longneck issue.” She smiled briefly. “But there comes a time when you can no longer solve everything with your brawn, and maybe it’s your failing to recognise that that has led to your losses…especially where family is concerned.”

Images of Trinity’s untimely death flashed uninvited into Topps’ mind, coupled with that of his daughters’ fates…he shook his head defiantly.

“Don’t your dare…” he growled, his voice now taking on a more dangerous edge as his rage grew. “Suggest to me that I’m responsible for the death of my wife and children!”

“I know it may not be my place,” Tria replied, as firmly as she could muster. “But it does make you wonder how they all managed to pass in such a short space of t-”

“SHUT UP!!!” Topps roared at her. “YOU KNOW NOTHING!”

Tricia trembled and quaked as her parents’ argument fired up. She gazed from one to the other, frozen in fear and emitting little whimpers as the tears began to leak from her ears…

“I knew them!” Topps snarled. “I knew them and I loved them and I did everything I could for them. I spent my life walking with them…how can you-?”

“But I knew Trinity as well,” Tria cut across him. “Don’t you remember? And I knew Cera…”

Topps’ retort died in his throat at the mention of his and Trinity’s youngest daughter.

“Are you insinuating that she’s dead?” he eventually asked in a hoarse whisper.

Tria sighed and avoided his gaze.

“How should I know?” she said helplessly. “Whether she’s alive or dead, I really hope she’s in a better place…”

There was a brief pause.

“But the fact still remains, Topsy,” Tria continued. “That it can’t go on like this. We may have worked well together a long time ago, but it’s just not the same anymore…”

She let her sentence hang in the air. Eventually, Topps nodded.

“You’re right,” he said. “Maybe it’s for the best…”

And with no proper valediction, he turned and walked slowly off into the distance.

Determinately tearing her gaze away from him, Tria fixed her eyes on her daughter, who, to her sudden stab of despair, was looking up at her mother with nothing more than fear and misery.

Upon seeing this, Tria could suddenly envision how Tricia’s world was slowly destroying itself around her, in the midst of all of Ulciscor’s actions and her parents’ arguments. At this, Tria herself broke down into tears.

“Oh…Tricia…” she sobbed, nuzzling her daughter and holding her close. “How could it have come to this?”

On his way away from them, Topps heard the sound of his mate’s tears. No, he reminded himself. His ex-mate’s. He was not part of her world anymore, and he could not step across that threshold. He could only observe…

But Topps Threehorn does not do well observing. And now the whole reality of the situation was crashing down upon him, drilling a hole into his heart so deep he wished the whole thing would just dissolve under his weight of despair. He had reached the end of the line – he was a complete failure of a threehorn, of a life form in any sense. His bigotry and his cruelty and his irrational actions had led him to this, where he had failed two wives and lost many daughters. He had failed Trinity, Tria, Cera and Tricia, those of the Valley he had always sworn to protect, and above all himself. What was he now? Whatever it was, he hated it…

And so Topps collapsed to the ground under his great burden, and his dry racking sobs filled the still air of a Valley that was once great.

*

“How come I didn’t see you at the meeting?” Old One asked accusingly.

The messenger turned to look at her disdainfully.

“I have already given you my reasons, my dear,” he said stubbornly. “Considering everything that I’m about to do, I’d rather the children were left out of the picture.”

“Come now, Pterano,” Old One coaxed. “You can’t hide yourself from them forever, you know. I’m sure they have no grudge against you now…”

“You underestimate the attitude of the threehorn girl,” Pterano murmured.

Zyro was watching the exchange between the two of them with a slightly non-plussed expression.

“OK,” he said. “Sorry, but you’ve completely lost me here…you have a history with the Valley?”

“Yes,” Pterano replied shortly. “But I have no wish to explain it now. Old One will fill you in I’m sure.” He spread his wings. “I have a Valley to get to!” He took off and hovered slightly above the heads of the longneck and Sharptooth before turning back to them and frowning slightly.

“I still don’t get why you’re using me!” he declared.

“Because you know the Valley and its habitants, Pterano!” Old One called back.

“But I was banished!” Pterano retorted. “Twice, in fact, they hated me so much!”

“Believe me,” Old One said to him. “After everything that’s come to pass with Ulciscor, you’ll be welcomed back like a hero.”

*

Chomper stroked his chin in concentration as he listened to the growls.

“Alright,” he said. “That’s very good, but you might want to try doing it so that your throat doesn’t kill quite so much…”

On a rather unusual whim, Chomper had decided to give out language lessons to his friends, both leaf-eater and Sharptooth alike, considering it would be advisable to break down all language barriers between his two groups of friends now that they were going to spend more time with each other. He had started by attempting to teach Saureen, Lini and Al the leaf-eater language, and they had been able to pick up simple words and phrases fairly well. Chomper was impressed by how they had done – almost as well as Nycha when he had taught her to speak leaf-eater during that night on White Mountain. Satisfied with their skills, Chomper had then turned to his leaf-eater friends, hoping they would be able to pick up the Sharptooth dialect with similar ease.

They didn’t.

Their language attempts were fairly abysmal – at least not to the standard of the others. Chomper found that the best by far was Shorty, who had been able to growl his own name almost instantaneously, followed by a few other phrases.

“How do you do it?” Ali asked, gaping at him in a combination of annoyance and awe.

Shorty, smiling at being the centre of attention for once, simply replied,

“I don’t know…I guess it’s just one of those things that people can get to grips with easier than others…”

Ali smirked and rolled her eyes.

“Careful,” she teased. “You might not be able to hold your head up if it gets any bigger!”

Shorty laughed.

“Even if I am get of the hang of this language thing, there are many things others can do with ease that I can’t,” he said. “For example Ali…” he blushed slightly. “You are far better in the looks department.”

She smiled back.

“Aw, thanks Shorty,” she said, and they both turned to see how Littlefoot was doing.

Littlefoot, Chomper noted, was picking up the words alright, but not so much the pronunciation. His attempts at growling were punctured by the hoarse groans he emitted.

“You don’t want to give yourself a sore throat!” Chomper advised. “Admittedly, it is difficult, considering sharpteeth tend to talk from their throats, whereas leaf-eaters err…from their chests.”

Littlefoot coughed.

“Eh, sorry Chomper, I’m going to give it a rest for today, my throat really is killing me…but after I have a drink we could all play something?”

“Sure,” Chomper nodded. “Taking into account Lini’s leg, how about Pointy Seed Bowling? And Cera…” he turned to her.

“I’m going to win this time!”

Cera grinned wryly back.

“Challenge accepted!”

And so the twelve of them began their game, which, despite the obvious barriers between language (albeit improving) and species, Chomper could see, just as he did when he played with Pyron, that this didn’t seem to matter. He smiled at the prospect of being united under a single simple game, and how that idea could be applied to the rest of the world. His smile quickly faded when Cera beat him however…

Eventually, they all settled down for the night. Despite their complicated arrival, they had quickly been able to devise sleeping areas for themselves – Littlefoot and Shorty slept with Bron, whereas Spike and Ducky took up night refuge with Opal. Ali was with her mother, and Old One had kindly offered to provide night companionship for Cera, Petrie and Ruby. Chomper was with his parents, and was accompanied by Al, whereas Saureen was with Ferox, along with Lini.

Soon, as the night closed in and only the gentle whisper of the wind could be heard, one young dinosaur found her sleep patterns a little disturbed. Eventually, Lini sat up blearily and gazed at her injured leg in annoyance. That rock must have fallen on her harder than she had realised, and it kept on throbbing when she tried to sleep. She was about to wake Saureen and ask for advice, but then decided against it – Saureen was still in mourning about her grandmother and probably didn’t want to be shaken out of a well-earned rest. Therefore, Lini eventually decided to go and help herself to a drink of water and perhaps splash a little water on her leg also, in an attempt to soothe the pain.

Slowly, so as not to wake her sleeping companions, Lini stood up and quietly limped over to the water-source in the heathland, near the trees. The water was undeniably refreshing, but as she gazed into the smooth and reflective surface, she couldn’t help but feel something was wrong. Slowly, she tilted her head back and sniffed the air.

Yes…there was definitely a Sharptooth scent in the air, one that was actively moving around in the trees. If this was one of Zyro’s community sharpteeth, what were they doing?

Curiosity getting the better of her, Lini crept into the small forest, following the scent of this mysterious Sharptooth, careful not to snap too many twigs. She wasn’t sure why, but she felt that to make any noise would be dangerous, and the realisation sent a chill up her spine.

Eventually, the source of the aroma came into sight. It was a medium-sized, jet-black Sharptooth with gleaming yellow eyes, and, oddest of all, a triangular fin protruding from the base of its tail.

Before Lini could give a single greeting, the Sharptooth fixed his gaze upon her and she found herself struck down and frozen by his piercing stare.

After a few moments of stare-off, the Sharptooth leaned down to her and whispered.

“Is this the dwelling of Zyro?”

Lini found her body sag in relief. She remembered how Al had told her of how sharpteeth would often go looking for Shark and Zyro for shelter. This must be the case for this one too!

“Yes,” she smiled. “He’s asleep at the moment, but once morning comes, I’m sure he’ll be glad to meet you.”

“Pity,” the stranger replied, now looking Lini up and down. “I don’t think I’ll stick around for that long…”

“How come?” Lini asked, but her answer came to her when she looked over his shoulder and saw a pair of gleaming red eyes…

“Because, Lini,” a new menacing voice said. “We didn’t come for him.”

These words seemed strangely distant to Lini. They were echoing around her as the whole forest seemed to sway, the world almost dissolving before her. Dread began to fill her heart and crush it to pieces as she continued to gaze, transfixed with horror and these horrifying red eyes, whom she knew belonged to the one she hated and feared the most in the world. More so than Xal, more so than Redclaw – to Lini, whatever the situation was, him coming into now had made it a hundred times worse. After everything that had happened…HE couldn’t be here too!

“G-Gigas…?” Lini managed to croak.

“Yes,” Gigas grinned. “I’m afraid you’re going to have to come with us…”

Lini’s screams were muffled as the gang of Piercers, most of which that had been hidden nearby, leapt upon her and restrained her with ease and expertise. Lini soon passed out and her head slapped pitifully onto the cold forest floor as she was dragged off into the night.

~0~

Well, there you have it...and yes, Lini knows Gigas! I suppose that explains whatever dark little secret she had back at White Mountain, yes? ;) It's all part of Seizon and Xal's plan, whatever that may be, and I guess you all hate Seizon now, but just tell me what you think of him here anyway! Things haven't improved for Topps and Tria it seems, unless...Pterano?
Anyway, I'm going to shut up now, give me your thoughts, and THANKS FOR READING!  :DD


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Wow, what a release at last :lol:

Here are my thoughts:

Well, I thought Seizon's return to Xal wouldn't be that smooth to be honest :wow Knowing Xal, he could have beaten him as well...
Obviously, he has to catch up with things (and I can tell he's not amused hearing them).

So Al has taken the leadership now... considering he's the only one not physically or mentally hurt that makes sense. I assumed Lini, Chomper and Saureen would trust him and Zyro.

Ahh, that scene HAD to be in this chapter XD This came out really well if you ask me :yes Oh, gotta love see them getting to know each other :smile

Ah, but first Chomper needs to meet Zyro :smile Ross, you ain't cryin' for suuuuure :exactly I love that scene! Ruby is forgiven as well, she is even appreciated for taking care of Chomper all the time even though she failed at his important occasion.. Oh, and Saureen... and who's that messenger...?

So... Screech and Thud used to have a sister, eh? Interesting...  :idea It's no wonder that Al is a little pissed...

Another powerful scene you pinned on paper (well.. screen) there :yes A unified army of both leafeaters and meateaters, Chomper's dream...

Awww, Topsy alone 4eva... Poor him, Tria's actually right though. Knowing you, however, I bet they'll eventually become a pair after the battle...

The messenger is... PTERANO?!? Now that's a surprise, I admit :p Old One knows how to motivate him ^^

Well, of course Chomper just couldn't translate all the time... so teaching each party the respective languages makes sense :yes

NOOOOOOOOO, NOT LINI TOO!!! If you dare, Toby... :anger

Well :smile Overally, this chapter is really, really well done again. I like how you always incluse a little humour here and a little analysing (or thinking) there without it being too obvious (like in my fic...)

Keep it up! I'm eagerly awaiting the next one :yes
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