My Fanfic

LBTFan13 · **Reply #20 on:** January 26, 2008, 04:34:42 PM

UPDATE: Chapter 5 is up!

lbt/cty_lover · **Reply #21 on:** January 26, 2008, 05:17:06 PM

I like it. Keep up the good work.

Chiletrek · **Reply #22 on:** January 26, 2008, 11:41:50 PM

Hello:
This is turning much more interesting, I think something big is coming B) .

LBTFan13 · **Reply #23 on:** January 28, 2008, 03:44:23 PM

UPDATE: Chapter 6 is up!

Chiletrek · **Reply #24 on:** January 28, 2008, 09:29:55 PM

Hello:
Awesome, and a little twist I didn't expected

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Keep it up!

The Great Valley Guardian · **Reply #25 on:** January 29, 2008, 12:00:16 AM

Oh boy Rinkus and Sierra had better watch out...they are in for some trouble now! I can't wait to see what Pterano does to those two!

LBTFan13 · **Reply #26 on:** January 29, 2008, 07:15:22 AM

i don't want to give away too much, but you can bet there will be some fighting later on. between whom i won't say

LBTFan13 · **Reply #27 on:** January 30, 2008, 10:45:00 PM

UPDATE: Chapter 7 is up. Here, we see something start to develop between two of the characters, and Rinkus has a surprise for Littlefoot and the others!

Hope you enjoy!

Serris · **Reply #28 on:** January 30, 2008, 11:02:32 PM

Quote from: LBTFan13,Jan 30 2008 on 09:45 PM

UPDATE: Chapter 7 is up. Here, we see something start to develop between two of the characters, and Rinkus has a surprise for Littlefoot and the others! Hope you enjoy!

This is a cool fanfic.

By chapter 7, do you mean the chapters as fanfiction.net counts it or the prologue is not a chapter?

The Great Valley Guardian · **Reply #29 on:** January 30, 2008, 11:08:55 PM

Seirra is crazy, and Rinkus leading? Has the world gone mad?

LBTFan13 · **Reply #30 on:** January 31, 2008, 04:19:48 PM

Quote from: Serris,Jan 30 2008 on 10:02 PM

By chapter 7, do you mean the chapters as fanfiction.net counts it or the prologue is not a chapter?[/QUOTE]

the prologue doesn't count as a chapter, and thank you for your interest,

@GVG: there's a reason why rinkus is leading, and you'll find out in the next chapter or two

Jasper · **Reply #31 on:** February 02, 2008, 09:23:56 PM

Now this is really getting serious here. I like this story.

LBTFan13 · **Reply #32 on:** February 24, 2008, 03:46:13 AM

After a long break due to technical problems and school work, Chapter 8 is finally up!

Cancerian Tiger · **Reply #33 on:** March 04, 2008, 02:36:37 PM

Hiya LBTfan13

! Name's Cancerian Tiger, and I saw the post indicating ya should be back on tonight at the latest. If ya have the energy (believe me, I know a choir trip can really wear one out. I was in a choir for six years

:), could ya possibly post the next chap on your fanfic? I'm lovin' what I'm reading and ya left readers at a cliffhanger :mad! It's so suspenseful. BTW, love the moderate profanity. It's not too harsh and really adds emotional appeal to the fanfic

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Clawandfang · **Reply #34 on:** March 04, 2008, 03:08:28 PM

Is it just me or are these chapters REALY short? I make chapter 1 just under 1000 words, whilst what in I'm currently writing (which, I'll admit, isn't fanfiction) chapter 1 is just over 4000 words. Is all fanfiction like this?

DarkHououmon · **Reply #35 on:** March 04, 2008, 03:13:13 PM

Chapter sizes vary depending on the author. Some are short, some are long, some are in the middle.

LBTFan13 · **Reply #36 on:** April 06, 2008, 10:10:27 PM

After an extremely long break due to too many trips, Chapter 9 is finally up!

Cancerian Tiger · **Reply #37 on:** April 06, 2008, 11:26:37 PM

Keep it up, LBTFan13

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Cancerian Tiger · **Reply #38 on:** April 10, 2008, 11:40:02 PM

Sorry, I forgot to add this in my last post

. I love how Littlefoot and Cera, and Shorty and Ali sang to each other(coincidentally the same song :huh:). It really adds emotion to the story. BTW, did ya come up with those lyrics yourself? That's so awesome!

*Eagerly awaits next chap :^.^:

f-22 "raptor" ace · **Reply #39 on:** April 11, 2008, 10:36:10 PM

It's good I like it! I still have a lot of work to do on my Fanfic.