It's good that you are trying to work at a certain award for next year. However, when you make a thread, it has something that you think everybody may find interesting and can put on a lively discussion to. Too many topics now adays are kind of thrown out just because (I'm probably guilty of that myself here). If it's something that isn't going to sustain a long discussion, it may be best to keep it in pm's.
On your rp, detail is good, but too much detail makes it more work than fun. Remember people rp to have fun, not a hard time coming up with something. Normally, rp's with less detail required tend to go longer because they are easier and in the end appear more fun. However, it is good you are trying to put thought into an rp. Just try not to make it like a Dungeons and Dragons obsessive rp.