The first thing that comes to my mind is more profanity/obscenities, especially during the fight scenes, but that's my thought. It all depends on how far the author can comfortably take language. I don't use F-bombs, n*****, certain vulgarities, or any curse with God's name in it, either in my writing or in everyday life. Anything else is fair game
. As for ideas, the only one I can think of for now is to keep the one about capturing and interrogating an enemy sickleclaw
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Well, I can take foul language to its maximum level but the dinosaurs do not understand certain anatomical terms, religious/racial slurs, anything with God's name in them, the F-obscenity, the b-obscenity, the s-obscenity. That limits me to about 4 profanities, thus I have to use them sparingly or they lose impact.
Also, how many times do you see people talking in fight scenes?
On a side note, why more profanities?
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