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The Cold Time

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Chapter XXVIII

Ali prepared the right words. She would address Littlefoot now. Since they were up here on Chomper’s rock Littlefoot hadn’t said a single word and Ali hadn’t dared to speak with him while Littlefoot stood nearby the edge of the rock looking down on the flaming inferno that raged below, with a petrified mien. Only now and then, when he believed to recognize a motion he looked up and strained his eyes. But every time he had to see that his eyes had cheated him. Ali on the other hand had walked in circles from one end of the rock to the other incessantly the whole time. Now and then she had cast a look down and after a while she had noticed that the ice sheet had disappeared from the river. The river streamed past along the rock as it had certainly done in previous, warmer days. When she listened carefully she could hear the murmuring of the river in spite of the cracking and crackling of the fire.
Ali stepped aside Littlefoot, who still sat motionless at the edge of the rock. It weight heavily upon Ali’s mind to see Littlefoot as he was now. At the first sight his face seemed to be completely blank but if she looked carefully Ali could see the despair in his eyes and when she glimpsed shy at him she noted that tears formed in the corners of his eyes. There were nearly no spots in the forest below that were not aflame. A giant black column of smoke ascended over the valley and somewhere in the midst of the valley the volcano that had at least tripled its size meanwhile still spat glowing rocks up into the sky occasionally. It was very hot up here. In the morning Ali would have considered the heat a pleasure, but along with the stuffy, smoky air it was nearly unbearable. White and gray ashes fell from the sky like snow and covered the valley and Chomper’s rock. Even Littlefoot’s head and his back were covered by a layer of ashes and Littlefoot didn’t seem to bother to shake it away. Fortunately the wind drove at least the densest clouds of smoke away from them.
Ali didn’t have the courage to address him and was very surprised when Littlefoot himself suddenly turned his head to her and said with a husky voice: “Down there they are somewhere, Cera... Ducky... Spike... Petrie... and Chomper.”
Ali shook her head slowly it was difficult for her to speak. “No Littlefoot. I don’t believe that. Why do you think they didn’t make to get out of danger?”
“Where should they have gone?” Littlefoot asked with a suffocated voice and made a far-reaching gesture that enclosed the whole burning forest. “The fire has spread so quickly.
It was everywhere immediately”, Littlefoot continued.
Ali didn’t know why, but she felt that Littlefoot was wrong. “They are in safety Littlefoot. Cera, Ducky, Petrie, Spike... and Chomper.” Strangely Ali still felt a shudder when she thought of the sharptooth.
“How could they possibly escape?” asked Littlefoot with a hopeless mien. “Nobody can survive in this”, said Littlefoot and pointed at the burning treetops again.
Ali just wanted to reply something when they heard a loud cracking from the ramp.
They looked in the direction surprised. Where the rocky ramp disappeared into the primeval forest the treetops quivered as if something big made its way up the ramp. Ali’s face lightened up, her inspiration seemed to prove right, and Littlefoot too stood up and looked down at the ramp expectantly. A big silhouette that was not exactly recognizable in front of the dazzling fire and the flickering air broke out between the treetops and stormed up the ramp. Littlefoot and Ali strained their eyes, but when they could recognize the stooped figure it had almost reached the top of Chomper’s rock already. Littlefoot and Ali cried out in the same moment, for it was a sharptooth, a huge grownup sharptooth. Only because of their horrified yells the sharptooth noted Ali and Littlefoot. It looked up, spotted them and began to run faster.
Its eyes flashed.
Ali had the presence of mind to jerk around, while Littlefoot stood there paralyzed with fear and starred at the sharptooth. Ali pushed him fiercely and cried: “Come on Littlefoot!”
Then she ran off. It was as if Littlefoot would awake from a dream. Nearly another second passed before he followed Ali, but he caught up with her soon. “Where shall we go Ali?” called Littlefoot drowning out the roaring of the sharptooth behind them.
“I don’t know!” Ali cried back after she had made sure with a hasty look around that here was no shelter, nor any safe place. Suddenly Ali skidded to a halt with an outcry. Littlefoot jumped aside not to run into Ali’s back. In the very last moment he too came to a standstill. In front of them was the abyss and far down the river meandered along. They both cast a look back over their shoulders. For a short moment Littlefoot’s look met the sharptooth’s. The sharptooth seemed to be surprised, but the next moment it continued to ran towards them with far reaching steps. Littlefoot and Ali exchanged a short look. And it was as if they would speak. They could see what the other one thought. They couldn’t run away anymore and they both had the same idea.

They jumped down the cliff in the very same instant yelling as loud as they could. The sharptooth was only few steps behind them. When it saw the two longnecks jump it uttered a short roar that didn’t sound threateningly at all for some reason. The sharptooth slowed down, stepped to the edge of the rock, bent forward and looked into the deepness that was dizzying even for the sharptooth. It saw how the two longnecks were swallowed by the water of the river. The sharptooth turned round just when a second sharptooth reached the top of the rock. The two sharpteeth ran to meet uttering relieved snarls and growls. But finally the first sharptooth led the second to the edge of the rock uttering a bloodcurdling roar and pointed with one of its thin claw armed arms into the deep. The second sharptooth looked at it very surprised.

Chapter XXIX

Littlefoot cried during the whole fall from the rock. Everything whirled around him. One moment he saw the river racing towards him the next he saw the rocky cliff getting farther and farther away. The last thing he saw was the silhouette of the sharptooth standing out against the smoky sky. “Hope it doesn’t jump after us”, Littlefoot thought and then he fell still crying into the icy cold water. The impacted on the water surface was so hard that his whole body seemed to burn and the next moment his far opened mouth filled with water. Littlefoot stopped crying, but he had already swallowed water and felt he had to cough. At the same time he felt he was sinking deeper and deeper while the water pressed stronger and stronger on him from every side. For a moment, just for a very short moment, the icy coldness was almost pleasant after the stuffy heat on the rock. Littlefoot felt how the stream tore him away. He was out of air.
He had to breath immediately! But he didn’t know which direction was above and which was below. He kicked fiercely, but didn’t find the water surface. He didn’t move for a moment and felt how he was carried into one certain direction by the water and somehow Littlefoot knew, that this direction had to be above. The water pressure diminished and he opened his eyes. In front he saw a bright gleaming. He did another stroke with all his legs and then he broke through the surface. Littlefoot sucked in the air and some spatters of water which made him cough convulsively.
He was sure he wouldn’t have endured it any longer. While he paddled fiercely and craned his neck to keep his head above the water he looked around for Ali. She was nowhere in sight.
A sudden undertow pulled him into the deep again, but this time he reemerged faster.
The very same moment Ali broke through the water surface, just a short distance away, and gasped for air. “Ali! Ali I’m he...”, again a wave dipped Littlefoot, but Ali had seen him and made her way towards him as good as she could. When Littlefoot emerged again she wasn’t far away from him anymore; the stream had floated her directly towards him. Ali seemed to have less problems than Littlefoot to keep herself at the surface. During the migrations with her herd she had crossed many rivers. Certainly none had been as wild and torrential as this one though. Littlefoot and Ali tried with all their might to swim over to the other bank, but the current made it almost impossible to swim into that direction.
Everywhere carbonized boughs and tree trunks drifted in the water.
“Littlefoot we must try to get on one of these trunks!” shouted Ali and pointed with a jerky movement of her head at a couple of carbonized trunks that drifted downstream close behind them.
“Okay”, Littlefoot choked out along with a mouthful of water and he began to struggle against the stream with all his might, very much intended not to be floated too far away from Ali.
“Look out...”, gasped Ali when they approached the tree trunks, “...that none of them hits you!” Littlefoot nodded as the thought, that the force of a collision with one of these trunks in this stream had to be more than painful, had just struck him too. Finally they had edged near to one of the trunks. “Go on!” called Ali and seized the trunk with her forelegs. Littlefoot did the same and tried instinctively to push off from the ground to get on the trunk, but of course there was no ground below his hind legs. They both tried to pull themselves onto the carbonized trunk, but this inclined far to the side. Suddenly the trunk lost its balance and rolled over towards Ali and Littlefoot.
They took distance from it hasty not to be submersed by it. A wave dipped Littlefoot shortly. When he emerged again Ali was by him and grasped one of his forelegs as if she was afraid that he could anew sub- but not emerge again. “We try again”, she gasped. “We take a broader trunk and you climb up first. When you’ve made it I’ll follow you.”
Littlefoot wanted to protest, but he realized that Ali’s words hadn’t been a suggestion, but an order. Ali seemed to notice his reluctance, for she explained hasty: “If we try it one by one the trunk maybe won’t roll over so easily.”
Littlefoot nodded. A relatively broad tree trunk drifted past so close to them they could get to it nearly without an effort. They grasped it and Ali gave Littlefoot an encouraging nod. Littlefoot began to pull himself up onto the trunk.
It inclined to the side, but not as far as the other one had done during their first attempt. Climbing up on the trunk Littlefoot besmeared himself all over with soot, but above all he had the unpleasant impression that the porous wood crumbled under his grip. He cast a hopeless look at Ali, and was being paralyzed with fright. Directly behind Ali a tree trunk drifted along at high speed. She hadn’t noticed it of course because her look was turned on him. The trunk would collide with the one he clung to, but above all it would hit Ali!
“Look out!” Littlefoot screamed and pushed off from the trunk. The moment he fell into the water he heard the nasty grating noise of the colliding trunks. He sank down in the water, but fought back to the surface immediately. The two trunks floated abreast now, but Ali was nowhere to be seen.
“Ali! Ali can you hear me?” Littlefoot cried and he looked desperately in every direction. “Everything alright. Could get away in time.”
Littlefoot uttered a sigh of relief and closed his eyes for a few split seconds when he heard Ali’s voice over the din of the water from behind the two tree trunks. A moment later Ali emerged from behind the trunks and headed towards Littlefoot. When she arrived by him she mumbled: “My goodness, that was narrow. It was a piece of luck you saw it in time. I guess we should forget about that idea about getting onto a trunk.”
Littlefoot nodded. “We better try to get to the other bank again”, he suggested before a vortex pulled him down again. Ali grasped at him and pulled him up again. Littlefoot felt a bit embarrassed about how poor a swimmer he was compared to Ali, but the lasting strain exhausted his legs. “We try”, Ali agreed and again they fought against the strong current that pushed them away from the bank.
Ali did her best to help Littlefoot swimming, but she had to trouble herself to stay at the surface of the fierce masses of water. A little vortex pulled her down for a moment. The last thing she saw before the water clapped together above her was a tiny figure that flapped high up in the air. “Petrie!” cried Littlefoot, who had seen the tiny flyer too, a moment before he was dipped again. When Ali and Littlefoot came to the surface again snorting and gasping for air the flyer was not to be seen anymore.

Chapter XXX

“Quick! You hurry!” cried Petrie as soon as Cera, Ducky, Spike and Chomper came in sight again. Quick as a greased lightning he shot through the air to reach them as soon as possible. He had flown off a short while ago to search for Littlefoot and Ali, but he hadn’t had much hope. He had flown aimless to and fro above the burning forest for a while and had tried to recognize anything through the dense smoke, flaring flames and the tree’s tops, which proved completely impossible of course. All he had obtained was that he was almost suffocated in the dense smoke and, shaken thorough by the turbulences of the burning hot air, had nearly precipitated down into the fire several times. But everything was better than the inactivity his friends at the other bank were condemned to. Nevertheless Petrie had found it stupid after a while to risk his life for absolutely nothing and he had been about to fly back to his friends, when suddenly a thought had come to his mind. Littlefoot and Ali were not stupid and he took it for very unlikely that they had wandered aimlessly through the burning forest during their flight. It was more likely that the two had tried to reach the other bank too. So he had decided to search there, as the other bank was probably more promising, but certainly safer than to continue flapping above the fire. While he was still flying along the river another thought had come to his mind. The direction Littlefoot and Ali had taken during their flight from the volcano was roughly the one in which Chomper’s rock was located. Perhaps the two longnecks had tried to make for safety there. Petrie hadn’t discovered them at the other bank so far, and so it was the last hope he could cling to. He had looked over to Chomper’s rock that towered high up above the sea of flames, but he had been unable to recognize if somebody was on top of the rock through smoke and flaring air. So he had been heading for the rock and suddenly he had spotted a movement in the water of the river during his flight. He had descended a bit to take a closer look and had recognized Littlefoot and Ali who were swept along by the water’s current. Petrie hadn’t hesitated for a second but had flown straight back to the others immediately. They had to rescue Littlefoot and Ali!
“What’s on Petrie?” asked Cera alarmed by Petrie’s call while she jumped up.
Chomper, Spike and Ducky prepared to hurry too, as Petrie had said, without knowing what they should hurry to do at all. Petrie had reached the others now and gasped with his last force: “Littlefoot! Ali! Are in the river! We must get them out!”
That was all Cera, Spike, Ducky and Chomper had to know. They ran to the bank as fast as they could and Petrie followed them after a few deep breathes. Cera looked around hasty to all directions sides when they had reached the bank. Littlefoot and Ali weren’t in sight yet, but the torrential river would float them past soon. The river was pretty broad here and its bed was very steep. It had been pure luck for Cera that she had been floated to a rare shallow spot after she had slipped of her ice floe a short while ago. The chances to rescue Ali and Littlefoot out of the water right here were very poor. But not far downstream the river made a sharp bend around a small peninsula and not far behind the peninsula it ran into the canyon that led out of the valley. At this bend the river narrowed and at the top of the peninsula grew a copse of trees from which some low boughs and roots hang far over the water; at this spot there would be the best chances to seize Littlefoot and Ali when they drifted past.
“Over there! Come on quick!” Cera shouted and ran off.
The others hesitated. The peninsula Cera was heading for seemed to be too near to the canyon. If the stream floated Ali and Littlefoot into the canyon, everything would be lost, as they would be unable to follow them in there. There was no bank in the canyon they could walk on.
“Come on!” Cera shouted impatiently back over her shoulder without slowing down.
It was Chomper who followed her first. Then Ducky ran off; on her own legs she was faster than on Spike’s back although her “little brother” was hard at her heels her. Petrie flew, as fast as he still could after the others with his tongue hanging out. When Cera had arrived at the tip of the peninsula she noted with some satisfaction, that the spot was even better than she had expected. The river had washed very much sand ashore at the end of the peninsula so the water was comparatively shallow even several steps far from the waterline. But for her discomfort she also had to notice, that the current here in the bend would drive Littlefoot and Ali over to the opposite bank. Impatiently Cera looked back for the others and was relieved to  see that Chomper just arrived by her and the others were close behind him. When she saw Petrie she called to him already from a distance: “Petrie! Fly to meet Ali and Littlefoot!
Tell them we are waiting for them here. But return immediately and give us word when they are coming!”
The little flyer moaned, but flew off immediately. Cera pointed at the river with her head and  waded into the cold water as the first. In the shelter of the peninsula the water was quite calm, but with every step Cera progressed farther into the water the undertow around her legs grew stronger. Cera felt how the sand below her feet gave way. There was no safe foothold provided by this ground. Cera heard a loud splashing from behind. When she looked back Spike stood behind her. Ducky had climbed on a bough of a big tree, that hung low above the water a few steps downstream. She clambered to its end carefully. Chomper didn’t seem to be completely sure whether he should follow Cera and Spike or Ducky, but finally he climbed after the little swimmer. The bough inclined deep down towards the water below their weight, but it seemed strong enough to bear their weight. Spike uttered an impatient mumbling and nudged Cera with his head. She went on some steps hasty and felt the ground lay deeper below the water surface, which reached up to her chin meanwhile, with every step she advanced further.
She tried to erect on her hind legs a bit to be able to advance further. But it was very difficult not to be swept along by the water in this posture. Cera felt Spike seizing her as firm as he could, and did another careful step. They wouldn’t be able to go any further; otherwise they would lose the ground below their feet and be swept along by the river. She cast and anxious look over to the canyon and implored Spike: “Hold me firmly! Please!”
Spike nodded; with his teeth he held Cera’s tail and made efforts to conjure a calming smile on his face, but he didn’t really succeeded while he felt how the sand below his feed was being washed away.
Cera felt the heat of the fire from the other bank that was fortunately driven away from them by the slight breeze. Cera saw big carbonized tree trunks drifting in the stream. “Look out that none of them hits us!” shouted Cera to Spike when an extraordinary big trunk drifted past right in front of them. “They come! They come!” shrieked Petrie out of breath long before he arrived by the others. “Do they know that we are here?” called Cera back over the rushing and gurgling noise of the water. “Me thinks so. But maybe they no understood what Petrie said”, Petrie replied. “Me had no more time no more.”
Cera nodded and called to the others: “Look out carefully! We must catch them!”
The next moment Littlefoot and Ali were there. They could barely keep themselves at the surface. “Come over here! Over here!” cried Cera at them nervously when she recognized they would drift past far off along the other bank. Ali and Littlefoot tried with all their might to crawl over to Cera and Spike.
A big trunk at the other bank, so carbonized already, that only a few flames still licked up on it suddenly inclined to the water with a loud creaking and fell into the river close to Littlefoot and Ali whereby even the last flames and sparks extinguished with a sizzling. The trunk lashed up waves that rolled away from it in every direction. Maybe it had been those waves that had given Littlefoot and Ali the decisive push; maybe the current had been diminished for a short moment for some reason; maybe it had been blocked by any obstacle below the water surface for a moment at the spot where they swam. Certain was only that it was incredible luck that Littlefoot reached Cera. Ali was close behind him; she had shoved him on as good as she could and in the water they had tried to hold on to each other as firm as they could not to be separated. When Ali saw that Littlefoot had reached Cera and that she, Spike and Petrie, who had landed on Cera’s head nearby her horn had seized him, she clung to Littlefoot and let herself be pulled along towards the bank by the others. Spike and Cera who at first had feared that the sand below them would be washed away, and they along with it, were already on safe ground in shallow water, Ducky and Chomper were about to climb down from their bough, Littlefoot too just reached the deposited sand and Ali was the only who was still in dangerously deep water when Petrie suddenly uttered a terrified warning cry.
He had seen something big drifting around the peninsula, but it was already too late.
The trunk grazed Ali’s head and tore her away from Littlefoot. She was floated towards the overhanging bough to which Chomper and Ducky clung paralyzed with the fright.
“Ali!” cried Littlefoot and Cera could only just keep him from jumping after Ali in a thoughtless rescue attempt. “Let me go!” raged Littlefoot, “You shall let me go!”
He kicked around fiercely and hit Cera in the face. “Ah!” she cried, but she didn’t let go. “You be calm Littlefoot”, croaked Petrie frightened, “Me hold Ali!” He flapped after her. Cera felt that Littlefoot didn’t struggle against her clutch anymore and finally she let go. “Come along!” she shouted and ran as fast as possible downstream along the bank.
Spike had a lead already and Littlefoot followed them. Ducky and Chomper climbed hasty as far as possible back to the end of their bought where Ali would drift past. The bought inclined deep down and gave an ominous crack. Petrie had reached Ali and tried, flapping fiercely with his wings to keep her head above the surface, he did it for the moment.
Ali hadn’t been knocked out senseless by the drifting tree trunk, but she was too dazed to swim all by herself.
“Help Petrie!” moaned the little flyer at Ducky and Chomper for he couldn’t hold Ali alone anymore. Worse even he was sopping wet himself already which made flying harder and harder for him. “Hold on to me!” called Ducky at Chomper just in the moment when Petrie and Ali floated past below the bough and she jumped so suddenly that Chomper barely managed to catch her feed when he bowed forward hasty. Ducky saw Petrie and snatched at him. Petrie himself still held Ali with the claws of his feet as firm as he could. The current pulled at all of them. Petrie felt weaker with every second, Ducky felt like she was elongated between the stream, that threatened to tear Ali and Petrie away, and Chomper’s hold; breathing was quite difficult for her. Chomper tried desperately not to loose his balance while at the same time he had to bent forward to hold, Ducky’s, Petrie’s and Ali’s weight. He and clawed firmly to the bough with the claws of his feet not to be dragged down from it.
But despite of all these toils it was none of them who gave in, but the bough on which Chomper stood. “Look out!” cried Littlefoot and Cera, who stood at the bank beside the trunk of the tree. For right there, the wood had begun to splinter. The bough was almost broken by the lasting heavy load. It inclined deeper and deeper and it seemed to be only a matter of seconds until it would snap in two completely. “Ducky the bough is breaking!”
called Chomper. “Let go! Maybe it’ll hold then. I’ll swim! We make it!”
“That will never do! I’ll come along!” “No Chomper! You’re no swimmer! You will drown!” Much as it displeased him, Chomper had to admit that Ducky was right. With his thin arms he would hardly be able to keep himself at the water surface, even for a short time and in this strong current he would have even less of a chance. But Chomper had no choice anymore, for there was no time left to climb back to the bank, although Littlefoot, Spike and Cera did everything possible to delay the breaking of the bough. “Come Chomper!” shouted Littlefoot, but he only shook his head for he had noted something. “Try to get us out further downstream!” he called back, let Ducky go and jumped with a wide leap over onto a broad carbonized trunk that floated past a short distance away. The bought broke when he jumped. Chomper landed sprawling on the shaky trunk. Carefully he stood up and had to lean to one side immediately to prevent the trunk from rolling over and throwing him off. Chomper sat down again to bring the trunk into a more stable position and let his legs dangling on both sides of the trunk. He clawed firmly into the sooty wood and doing so he realized that he was besmeared with soot all over his body. He cast a hasty look around. Cera, Spike and Littlefoot ran along the bank, but they had fallen far back; the current was much faster than they were. Chomper saw Ducky, Petrie and Ali emerging with the crest of a wave; they were a respectable distance behind him too. It was probably because Ducky, Petrie and the slowly recovering Ali fought against the stream to the best of their ability and also because the trunk drifted away with very high speed offering less resistance to the water than the swimmers did. The entrance of the canyon was not far away anymore; he had to hurry with whatever he was going to do, but he didn’t have a clue about what to do at all. Finally he tried to drive the trunk over to the bank.
He rowed with his legs, fidgeted to and fro, leaned to all sides and more than once he almost fell into the water. It was probably a vortex that seized the tree trunk suddenly and let it spin around like a top, so Chomper became really dizzy and closed his eyes firmly. Then suddenly a violent jolt ran through the trunk like it had hit on something solid. This jerk again almost hurled Chomper down from the trunk, but he managed to hold on and when he opened his eyes again the carbonized trunk lay motionless, laterally in the water so the stream of the water surface broke at one side of the trunk. It took Chomper a few seconds to recover from his surprise. The trunk had apparently been wedged in between any rocks below the water surface so firmly the stream didn’t sweep it along anymore. But Chomper heard the porous burned wood creaking from the strain. It wouldn’t stand the pressure for long. But for the moment the position of the trunk could mean the rescue, for its one end lay close to the bank, close enough to reach it from there. But Chomper stayed where he was. If there was a chance  anywhere to catch Ducky, Petrie and Ali out of the water, then it was here. The three were just floated along. Ali swam mainly by herself now, but without Ducky’s support she would have probably foundered for she hadn’t yet recovered from the bump of the trunk against her head. Ducky as a swimmer got along with the water much better than any of the others, but she certainly had no chance to struggle against this current either. Though Petrie still pulled at Ali’s head to keep it at the water surface, it looked much more like he was sitting on the head rather than flying above it. Chomper saw Spike, Cera and Littlefoot running along the bank, but they were far behind and wouldn’t be here in time to help them. Ducky had seen the tree trunk and Chomper and had recognized the chance.
“There we must go!” snorted Ducky to Ali and Petrie. But they didn’t even have to struggle to reach the trunk, for they were floated straight towards it anyway. “Look out!” called Chomper and made ready to grasp at them as soon as they would hit upon the trunk. Ali held out her forelegs shielding to soften the collision with the trunk, for the current would throw her against it with quite a force. The wood creaked ominously when Ali bumped into it, but it stood the impact. Chomper bent forward and clutched Ali, who uttered a frightened outcry, at her long neck.
“Don’t worry! It’s just me”, called Chomper over the gargling and splashing of the water.
“Oh I see, this calms me”, shouted Ali who seemed to have recovered her senses completely from the fright. Chomper was not sure if Ali was being sarcastically, but at the moment it was really all the same to him. He erected and tried to drag Ali upon the tree trunk. But she was to heavy for him and gasped fiercely for breath when he tried it. “Let go! You’re choking me!” cried Ali. Chomper bent forward again, but he didn’t let her go.
“Come along this way Chomper!” shouted Ducky and began to pull Ali along the tree trunk over towards the bank. Again and again jolts ran through the trunk when drifting boughs hit into it, but they were too small to break it. Chomper cast a worried look at some big trunks drifting closely past his own. He pulled and Ducky pulled Ali over towards the bank.
Cera, Spike and Littlefoot just arrived there and waded carefully into the shallow close to the bank. They had almost reached the end of the trunk that pointed at the bank, when Ali shouted suddenly: “I’ve ground below my feet! I can stand here!” and a bit quieter she said to Chomper and Ducky: “Thanks! You can let me go now. I can get the last steps to the bank myself. Make for safety yourselves!”
Ali uttered a nearly inaudible sigh of relief when Chomper let go her neck. Having the sharp claws of the sharptooth clutched around it had been a quite unpleasant experience.
Petrie wanted to flap up into the air from her head, but he staggered with his sopping wet wings to and fro for only a few seconds and clapped into the water. Chomper jumped down from the trunk hasty and grasped the coughing and snorting flyer in the very last moment. Ducky reached the bank with some breaststrokes; Ali waded behind her and last in line came Chomper who held the completely exhausted Petrie in his arms. They heard the wood of the trunk breaking with and ugly grating. Littlefoot, Spike and Cera welcomed them exulting. When the first cheerfulness had faded away Ali mumbled:
“Oh dear! I’m completely worn out!”
She withdrew some more steps from the bank and then she lay down below a tree to rest for a moment. The strains since the flight from the volcano had taken their toll from the others too. Spike went in circles a few times, lay down then and fell asleep instantly. Ducky lumbered near, snuggled to her “little brother” and began to doze too. Petrie, who had almost fallen asleep in Chomper’s arms already, joined them after he had “wrung out” his wings scantily. Chomper let himself drop to the ground with far outstretched arms. And Cera too lay down where she was standing. They enjoyed it, for here, on the safe side of the river, the heat of the fire could be felt as a pleasant warmth that had even melted away the snow that had been laying close to the bank.


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I really enjoyed those chapters....and Im also glad Chomper was able to help Ali! Now they can all rest and relax...after all they deserve it! I look forward to more chapters!


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Very well written and quite an action scene.  Thanks for posting it here.


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I've enjoyed reading this so far. If I remember correctly, you wrote this back in 2000 or 2001, right? Still, I think this is a great story. I think of you as a professional at writing pure LBT fanfics (non-crossovers). If you were this good back then, I'd like to see what you can write these days.

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Thank you :)
Yes, I wrote "The Cold time" from 1999 to 2001 and translated it from 2001 to 2002. Some of the translation was done during my students exchange, so while there are some shortcomings in the language they are not as striking as in case of "The Big Quarrel". Sometimes I used (and I guess I still do sometimes) very un-LBT-like terms. For example in an earlier version of the story I had Cera talk of "insurmountable impediments" and somewhat dated terms such as "thus" may still be in there somewhere. :lol
One problem that is still there in The Cold Time is that I was using the past perfect ("he had done something") rather than the simple past ("he did something") way too often. The past perfect is more commonly used in German than in English and it shows that I was translating the story too literally.
As for what I'm writing these days I must admit that it is some time ago that I last wrote on an LBT story. I have been writing on "Old Threehorns" since 2002, but not really continued the work on it in the last two years. This is in part because the story sort of "outlived" itself as movies were released meanwhile which strongly contradict "Old Threehorns" (which tells a different story about Littlefoot's dad and features Cera's mother as a character). A problem about my writing is that I tend to write very long winded at times. I am putting in many details (sometimes I'm surprised at how often discussions start in the GOF about matters mentioned in "Old Threehorns"), but I'm afraid I'm putting so much stuff into it that I'm boring most readers (I don't think many ever read far beyond the nine pages prologue).
"Old Threehorns" by the way is written in English and translated to German. This way there shouldn't be any of the translation problems of the earlier stories ;)
Anyway, there is nothing as motivating as feedback (both positive and critical), maybe I get myself to continue the writing once I finish an essay I have to write for the university at the moment. Here are the next chapters of "The Cold Time":


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Chapter XXXI

Littlefoot, who had lain down as well just where he stood, watched the sparks that flew over to them now and then, when a gentle breeze blew over to them. He and Ali had been incredibly lucky. So had been the others of course, but he and Ali had not only escaped the volcano, the fire and the torrential river but also a grownup sharptooth the others didn’t even know about. “Maybe...”, thought Littlefoot, “...it is better if they don’t learn about the sharptooth at all. It would just worry them needlessly.”
Littlefoot got up quietly, not to disturb the others, and sneaked over to Ali.
She had nodded off and Littlefoot had to nudge her repeatedly to wake her up. “Littlefoot? What’s the matter?” asked Ali relatively loud, while she was blinking tiredly.
“Hist! Don’t speak too loud, so we don’t disturb the others!” answered Littlefoot whispering, while he looked around worried, if they had already attracted the attention of any of the others. Cera looked over to them shortly but turned away again immediately. “What’s on?” asked Ali, this time so quiet that only Littlefoot heard it. “It is because of this sharptooth;
I think it is better if we don’t tell the others about it.”
“What? But why? We sure have to warn them!” called Ali so loudly that Littlefoot jerked and looked back. But none of the others stirred.
“Be quiet! And what should we warn them off anyway?” Littlefoot shrugged. “The sharptooth is up on the rock and it can’t go down there before the fire has gone out and the ground has cooled down; and this will take some time for sure.”
“But the sharptooth just has to jump after us”, answered Ali, this time quieter again.
Littlefoot shock his head: “It won’t. Otherwise it would have done so already. The water is too shallow for a grownup sharptooth. It would break all its bones. So why should we frighten the others unnecessarily?”
“Because the sharptooth will come tomorrow!”
“It’ll probably take longer. And even by tomorrow we won’t be here anymore. And also, why would the sharptooth follow us? It certainly thinks the water has swept us away. I don’t believe that it can recover our trails. Our trails end in the water and those of the others have been deleted by the fire.”
Ali nodded: “That’s very well, but how do you want to get away from here? We can’t go through the canyon anymore. It will take quite a while until the water will be hard again. Certainly longer than it will take the sharptooth to get down that rock!”
Littlefoot thought about it. “I don’t know yet, but we’ll find a way to go on.”
There was a short break, then Littlefoot pointed over to the others with his head and said: “Come on! The sooner we begin to seek a way, the sooner we’ll find it.”
“I hope so”, said Ali setting in motion.

When they arrived by the others, who lay dispersed over a large area, Littlefoot called:
“Come on! We must think about what to do now.”
Ducky blinked shortly with one eye, but closed it again immediately. Cera grumbled quietly and the others didn’t show any reaction at all.
“Now come on!” Littlefoot shouted impatiently. Chomper stood up moaning and approached slowly. Petrie flapped over to them in an irregular zigzag. Ducky got up with a groan; she had to push Spike several times until he woke up and trudged after her tiredly. At last Cera, who seemed to be in a rather bad mood, came too. “What’s your problem?” she growled. And a little more conciliatory she asked: “Did anything happen you want to tell us about?”
Littlefoot shook his head hasty. He hoped that Cera hadn’t overheard anything of his talk with Ali. “No, but we should think about how we continue now. We can’t walk on the river anymore.”
“And that’s all?” Cera roared up angrily. “That can wait. You should let us some time to rest!” Cera stepped forward pugnaciously while Littlefoot fell back one step.
“Take it easy!” said Ali mitigating and stepped between Littlefoot and Cera.
After a tensed moment Cera nodded and sat down.
“So, uhm...”, said Littlefoot nervously and searched for the right words. Cera’s outburst had rather confused him. For a moment he considered telling the others about the sharptooth after all, for at least Cera seemed to suspect that he and Ali kept something secret from them, but he decided against it. Actually Littlefoot thought it would be much easier to tell the others about the sharptooth. They would certainly not panic, but would understand his and Ali’s hurry. But something dissuaded him from telling the others.
“We must go on. Now there is really no food left around here”, Littlefoot said finally.
“But we can’t walk on the water of the river anymore, it is not hard anymore.”
Littlefoot heard Ducky utter a sigh of relief and cast a reproachful look at her.
“Does anyone have an idea, or a suggestion?” Nobody spoke for a while, but finally Petrie  said almost like he would hardly dare to say it: “Petrie could fly out of the valley on his own and seek help.”
Littlefoot smiled at him. “That’s nice of you Petrie, and very brave, that you want to search for help on your own, but I don’t believe that you would find any. All saurian herds are in search of warmer regions and even if you did find one I don’t believe they would change their direction because of us. And also we don’t have enough time to wait.”
Petrie nodded with a mixture of regret because he couldn’t help his friends and relief that he didn’t have to fly on his own. “I cannot swim here for long and you cannot either”, said Ducky pointing at the river, “But do you remember how we tried to cross the Big Water on a trunk? The trunk swam excellently and there are plenty enough trunks around here.”
But Chomper objected: “The current is too strong. The water pushes the trunks wildly to and fro. I could hardly keep myself on that one tree trunk. We would all fall into the water and drown.”
Littlefoot and the others nodded agreeing. “We could try to hold several trunks together somehow, so they don’t turn over so easily”, mused Ducky and she seemed to like her idea more and more the longer she thought about it.
“Oh great! And how do you want to hold the trunks together?” asked Cera challenging.
“With vines!” answered Ducky eagerly and pointed at a copse of trees some distance away,  nearby the rocky walls that enclosed the valley and that was especially high at this point. Everywhere between the leafless boughs hung snow covered vines and lianas. “Vines are everywhere around here. Oh yes, they are! Yep, yep, yep!” By her last words Ducky had started to hop around enraptured. She seemed to be really most enthusiastically about her plan. Finally she ran over to the copse of trees with the vines.
The others followed her hesitating. When they arrived at the copse of trees Ducky already tried to pull a vine that hung nearly down to the ground, out of one treetop.
“Now take it slowly Ducky!” said Littlefoot. “I don’t think this is a good idea.”
Ducky looked at him offended and asked: “Why not? Huh?”
“Firstly I don’t believe the vines would hold very long and secondly we wouldn’t be able to return. Who knows where this river runs.” Finally Ducky nodded and sighed.
“And moreover we don’t have enough time”, added Littlefoot.
“Not enough time?” asked Cera and looked at Littlefoot frowning, but she didn’t get an answer. “Does anyone have another suggestion?” asked Ali. After a long pause during which everyone thought intensely Spike got up and made a face as if he had an idea. He ran over to the rocky wall, looked around for a moment and seemed to find what he was looking for. He went over to a small boulder that lay nearby and rolled it over to the rocky wall. Then he searched anew, found another big stone and shoved it to the boulder. He repeated this again and again and the heap of stones that lay in front of the rocky wall grew. Spike’s doing was a riddle to the others until Ducky said finally: “I believe Spiky wants to pile up rocks so high that we can climb over them and out of the valley.”
Spike who had heard her words nodded eagerly, but made a somewhat mortified face when the others burst into laughter. Still laughing Ducky said: “Oh no little brother we really can’t do that. By the time we would be done with that, the cold time would be probably over.” Spike looked at her questioning; he didn’t see why that was so bad. “There is not enough left to eat for us over such a long time”, explained Ali; from the corner of her eyes she saw that Chomper nodded agreeing.
Spike understood that and he uttered a disappointed sigh.
“Moreover I don’t think that there are enough stones around here”, said Cera.
“And we must get away from here sooner”, added Littlefoot thinking of the sharptooth.
“Why do we have  to go that soon?” asked Ducky.
“Yes, why are you in such a hurry?” Cera inquired distrustful.
“Be... because...”, stammered Littlefoot searching for a credible excuse, still not wanting to tell his friends about the sharptooth without knowing for sure what prevented him from doing so. He crossed his hind legs inconspicuously. “...here isn’t enough food.”
“But Ali had said just that already”, Cera stated with increasing mistrust.
Littlefoot blushed and tried to act as if he hadn’t remembered that before. But Littlefoot wasn’t a good actor. Ali stepped forward, pushing him a bit to the side. She too crossed her hind legs inconspicuously.
“We all want to return to our families as soon as possible, don’t we?” Petrie, Spike, Ducky and Chomper nodded and Cera didn’t say anything more. By Ali’s words a thought had come to Littlefoot’s mind for a moment, but before he had really grasped it, it was gone already.
For a moment he tried to remember the thought, but it didn’t come back and finally Littlefoot gave up on it. It certainly hadn’t been that important.
Finally Ali said: “We still haven’t found a possibility how to get out of here. I suggest that we check if there is yet any place where we can climb up the rocky walls.”
Littlefoot sighed; he didn’t seem to be very confident.
“Well, come on. What other choice do we have?”
They walked slowly along the rocky wall for a while inspecting it searching for a possible way out. Littlefoot cast an unsure look over to the other bank where the fire still blustered for his relief; so the sharptooth still had to stand inactively on top of Chomper’s rock.
Ali fell behind a bit, as she eyed the rocks most carefully. Cera realized that and went slower to let herself drop behind to Ali.
“Is there anything you and Littlefoot conceal from us?” asked Cera Ali so suddenly that Ali, who was completely absorbed in inspecting the rock twitched frightened. The others were too far ahead to hear them; they didn’t have to keep down their voices.
“What makes you think so?” answered Ali evasively and went on slowly not to attract the others’ attention. “You crossed your legs when we asked about Littlefoot hurry. And I believe Littlefoot hasn’t told us the whole truth either.”
Ali didn’t answer. She didn’t know at all what to reply. Cera had looked through them, and for a moment she was close to tell Cera about the sharptooth, but she remembered Littlefoot who didn’t want to tell the others about the sharptooth. Cera was looking at her impatient, almost grimly; she had to tell her anything.
“You’re right”, muttered Ali like she was afraid the others would hear her.
“And?” Cera asked apparently somewhat placated, “Did anything happen?”
“Ahem well, yes, but it’s a secret.” Cera looked at Ali expectantly.
“I mustn’t tell you”, Ali repeated. Angry Cera snorted, lifted her horn and ran after the others.
Ali stayed behind feeling quite dismayed. Cera seemed to be really mad. Finally Ali went on slowly and let her eye travel along the rocky wall.
“Here! Here it could be possible!” Ali shouted suddenly and looked up the rocky wall that rose aside her. The others, including Cera who hadn’t caught up with the others yet, turned back on the spot. For the moment she seemed to have forgotten about her anger because of Ali’s discovery. When everybody had arrived by Ali Ducky stepped towards her shaking her head. “Oh no I’ll never make it up there!”
And she made a helpless gesture up the steep rock. Spike nodded agreeing and uttered a hopeless moaning. The others too didn’t look exactly hopeful. The rocky wall was especially high here, but in different intervals shelves and ledges projected from the wall, some of which  were even big large enough to offer room for all of them. The rocky wall cambered inwards several times, so it sloped nearly gently at some points to become steeper and steeper, almost perpendicular the farther you got.
“Do you honestly think that we can go up here?” asked Cera Ali unsure.
Ali shrugged. “I don’t know. But look around! The rest of the rocky wall around here looks even more difficult to me!” And Ali made a far-reaching gesture that enclosed the rocky walls all around.
“So we try?!” It was not really certain if Littlefoot’s words had been a question or a statement, but Ali nodded, took a few steps distance from the rocky wall, and then she rushed forward determined to make it.
She had gained a lot of impetus through the short run, and she needed it. Though the incline was gentle at first, it became steeper and steeper with every step. Suddenly Ali saw the first ledge in front of her, but at the same time she felt that their was none of the impetus left she had gained during the run so she would slide backwards the next moment. Once more she tensed every muscle, pushed off from the ground and caught the edge of the ledge with her forelegs. Moaning she pulled herself up and finally stood on the ledge. When she heard the others applauding she blushed a bit and called to them: “Come on! Now it is your turn!”
The others hesitated and finally it was Chomper who stepped forward first. A bad feeling overcame Ali when she saw how the little sharptooth took a long run in bowed pose and rushed towards the rocky wall with an astonishing speed.
Chomper too managed just barely to catch the edge of the ledge, and there was an ugly grating sound when his claws scratched over the stone leaving thin white lines behind.
Ali shuddered, but when she saw that Chomper wouldn’t manage to pull himself over the edge of the ledge with his scrawny arms she grasped at him instinctively and pulled him up. “Thanks!” gasped Chomper when he stood aside Ali on the ledge taking a deep breath.
She just nodded, but suddenly she couldn’t help smiling.
“Very well...”, Ducky interrupted the cheers of her friends below, “...but I would like to know how you think Spike and I shall go up there. Yes, I would like to know that.”
She pointed up to Chomper and Ali. “Climb on my back!” said Cera and Ducky took seat behind her neckshield. Slowly, but increasing her speed with every step Cera ran towards the rocky wall. Ducky clung to the neckshield tighter and tighter for the inclination became steeper and steeper with every step Cera took until so she finally dangled from the shield rather than she sat on Cera’s back. When Cera felt the impetus of her run was gone she jumped just like Ali and Chomper had done. But Cera didn’t reach the edge. Although she had jumped off from the ground with all her strength she didn’t come high enough. She lost her balance and tumbled over backwards down the rocky wall. Littlefoot, Spike, Petrie, Chomper and Ali cried out terrified and except for Chomper and Ali who had to watch inactively from the ledge everybody ran to the place where Cera had come to lie.
But before they had even reached her Cera stood up slowly and groaning. She didn’t seem to be hurt apart from some bumps and bruises and Ducky who had cowered down trembling behind Cera’s neckshield had gotten away with the fright. Once Ducky had more or less recovered from the fright Cera said: “That won’t do. Alone I would certainly make it, but Ducky is pretty heavy and...”
“I’m not that heavy at all!” Ducky interrupted Cera and she set her arms akimbo angrily. “Never mind Cera!” Littlefoot intervened hasty to prevent an imminent quarrel between Ducky and Cera, who seemed to be a bit embarrassed because of her fall.
“There must be another way for you Ducky.” Littlefoot pondered for a moment and then he turned to Petrie. “Do you think that you can carry Ducky up there?” Petrie looked first at Littlefoot, then at Ducky and then at the rocky wall. Finally he shook his head slightly.
“Way up to there? Too far! Me no make that!”
“And if...”, Littlefoot pondered on, “...Ducky runs up there as far as she can and you support her on the last part?”
Petrie eyed the rock thoughtfully again. “Maybe me make it. Me must try!”
“You really want to try it?” Littlefoot asked. “It could be dangerous, especially for you Ducky.”
Petrie nodded and looked at Ducky. She nipped her beak and nodded too then.
“Do I have a choice?” she asked and with an invidiously look at Cera she said: “I hope I’m not too heavy for Petrie. At all events everything is better than to try on Cera’s back again!” “Hey!” Cera cried angrily and made a threatening leap towards Ducky. But Littlefoot stepped between them and shouted: “Stop it! We don’t have enough time for that!”
Reminded of her previous anger Cera answered fiercely: “Oh my! Why not?”
Littlefoot looked at her surprised and cast a short glimpse to Ali. But for his relief Cera left it at that. Ducky took a run and asked Petrie who flew close above her: “Come when I call you!” “Petrie stays with you! Me’ll hold you tight!” Ducky smiled nervously and mumbled a short thanks, then she ran off. First it worked out quite well, but the steeper the rock became the slower became her steps. The fast run became a shaky clambering up. Ducky felt how small stones loosened from the rock below her feet. “Only some more steps”, she thought.
But then she lost her foothold and fell backwards. “Peeetrriiiieeeee!” she shrieked and waved wildly around in the air with her arms. She felt how she was snatched at the shoulders and what followed then resembled more to a very far jump than to a flight. They clapped heavily on the rock, but they had made it. Ali and Chomper helped them to get back to their feet and from below the cheers of Littlefoot, Spike and a bit restrained those from Cera sounded up to them. “And now it’s your turn Spike”, said Littlefoot. Spike looked at him with such a how-shall-I-possibly-make-that?-mien that Littlefoot added hasty: “Don’t worry! We help you. Won’t we Cera?”
“Of course”, Cera said with such an edgy voice that Littlefoot stared at her astonished for a moment. Spike ran off. Cera and Littlefoot heeled him. First Spike got on very well, but when the rock became steeper he began to skid backwards slowly, no matter how much he tried to get on. “Go Cera!” shouted Littlefoot and both pushed Spike forward with all their might. They succeeded to shove him on slowly. Petrie came flapping over to them and pulled on Spike’s back, without achieving anything though.
He and Cera wouldn’t be able to keep Spike up much longer thought Littlefoot. But suddenly the weight grew less. They had made it close enough to the ledge, so Ali and a moment later Chomper and Ducky could grasp Spike too. The next moment Spike made to reach the edge with his forelegs and with Ali’s, Chomper’s, Ducky’s and Petrie’s support he pulled himself up to them. Littlefoot and Cera skidded back down the rocky slope, but they didn’t tumble over and thus remained unscratched.
“Are you alright Cera?” asked Littlefoot while he shook his feet a bit to relax them after the effort, but Cera didn’t answer and just took a run again.
“What’s the matter with you Cera?” asked Littlefoot while he approached her.
“Nothing at all!” Cera answered with an angry voice that sounded far more as if she wanted to say: “There is a lot of matter with me and that is your fault!” Confused Littlefoot looked after Cera, who reached the ledge this time. Littlefoot followed her and made it too.

For hours they made their way up over the ledges. It was a strength consuming way.
On one ledge Littlefoot kept Ali back inconspicuously when she wanted to set off for the next ledge. He waited until the others, Spike and Ducky again with the other’s support, had arrived on the next ledge and then he asked Ali quietly: “Do you have and idea what’s the matter with Cera? Wasn’t she with you a short while ago?”
Ali nodded: “She noted that we’re concealing something from her and the others.
Shouldn’t we tell them everything? They won’t panic.”
Littlefoot considered for a moment and shook his head then. Ali shrugged.
“What are you waiting for?” Ducky called down to them. “Yes! While we have so little time!” Cera added grimly. Littlefoot and Ali followed the others hasty.

Chapter XXXII

The sun approached the horizon when they finally reached the last ledge before the edge of the crater-like valley. The air was very stuffy because of the smoke, for the fire still burned at many places in the valley. They all were very exhausted. And when Cera saw the last slope of the rocky wall, which was steeper and higher than most of the previous, she let herself drop sprawling and didn’t move anymore. Everybody looked at her for a while. Finally Littlefoot stepped forward and asked carefully: “Cera?”
“I can’t go on anymore! It was in vain”, Cera answered faintly.
“What do you mean?” Littlefoot asked worried.
“Go on! I stay here!”
“Here?” Petrie asked upset.
“Stop being silly! Get up Cera, and come on!” Littlefoot said beseeching.
“No, I’m done up.”
“Cera...”
“Leave her Littlefoot!” Chomper interrupted him and cast an imploring look at him and the others. “It is a simple fact that threehorns are weaker than other kinds and...”
“What?! Weaker?!” shouted Cera furiously and jumped up.
Chomper had intentionally hit a very sensitive nerve of Cera’s mind, and she reacted just like he had hoped. “I’ll show you if threehorns are weaker!”
Cera shouted angrily; stormed up the rocky wall and reached the edge of the crater. Triumphing she turned round looked down at the others and said to Chomper:
“So, do you still think that threehorns are weaker than others?”
Chomper shook his head and was all grins. “No Cera. And to be honest I never did. But it seems to me that at times they need some prodding before they show it. Didn’t you just say you wouldn’t get up there?” Cera looked around surprised and even she couldn’t help grinning when the others burst with laughter.
One by one the others too made to come up to Cera with their last strength. Up there they rested for a moment at the edge of the Valley. In front of them was the low snowy ridge of a hill that blocked their sight. Littlefoot looked back into the valley above, which dense columns of smoke rose up to the sky. Roughly in the center of the valley, that resembled to a huge meteoric crater, he recognized the volcano that had, still spiting embers now and then, assumed a multiple of its size in the morning. Littlefoot also saw Chomper’s rock, but he still couldn’t recognize through the smoke if the sharptooth was still on it. He noted that fires had broken out also at some spots places at this side of the river in the meantime. The valley offered a gloomy view. Cera got up and slowly went towards the low ridge to cast a look on the region they would have to cross during the next days. “Come on!” Littlefoot said to the others, “Lets search for a place we can spend the night. Perhaps we even find something to eat. I’m really very hungry.”
The others got up and followed Littlefoot who went after Cera who hadn’t yet reached the crest of the hill. When Cera arrived there she seemed to freeze in the motion.
The spirits were low and Littlefoot wanted to cheer the others up a bit. “We did it!”
he said, “We are out of this valley. Now we simply need to recover our families.”
Cera turned back to Littlefoot slowly and looked at him so angry as if he had said something nasty.
“I believe that this could take quite a while!” she said very earnest.
“Why? What’s the matter now?” he called angry about Cera disturbing his attempts to encourage the others. He ran towards Cera and wanted to say something more, but whatever it was, he never said it, for now he could look over the ridge of the hill too.
In front of him spread a landscape of the highest and most pathless mountains he had ever seen. Behind every of the giant mountains another one seemed to rise that was even higher. Most of the slopes were snow-covered, but others, which were probably leeward most of the  time, or simply too steep, were entirely free of snow.
Like a crack in the earth the canyon, through which the river from the Valley ran, cut through the landscape. Some mountain slopes were covered with large coniferous forests.
Ali regained her speech first: “Maybe it is good that we couldn’t walk through the canyon. Who knows where it ends and when we would have found anything to eat again.”
Littlefoot nodded and pointed at one of the coniferous forests with his head.
“Yes. At least we won’t be starving.”
“You won’t”, said Chomper gloomy.


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I enjoyed reading this, the characters seem fleshed out well.  Imagine if one of the movies had been a bit more like this.  Though it would have to be more like a mini series likely also.


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Quote from: Malte279,Feb 27 2008 on  04:26 AM
This is in part because the story sort of "outlived" itself as movies were released meanwhile which strongly contradict "Old Threehorns" (which tells a different story about Littlefoot's dad and features Cera's mother as a character).
Malte, don't be discouraged by what the "official" LBT storyline has been.  Imagination is one of only a few things in life one does not have limitations to.  It is your dream, your story, your idea.  Go for it, man.  Keep on sticking to your fanfic :yes.


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^ It is a "moral conflict" of sorts ;)
I have always been one of the loudest advocates for the idea of keeping fanfictions in accordance with the movies. Therefore it would be kind of strange for me to write a story that does no longer comply with the movies. Then again I must say that at least in some respects the story is more in accordance with the earlier movies than LBT 10 and the later sequels are.


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Chapter XXXIII

Not far away there was a cave in a mountain. It was on the usually leeward, and thus less snowy side of the mountain, so the inhabitants of the cave didn’t have to life with the fear that an avalanche could block the entrance of the cave.
Those inhabitants were Ozzy and Strut, two eggeaters. The very eggeaters from whom Littlefoot and his friends had saved Chomper back then when they had met for the first time, and from whom Chomper had saved them later. Chomper had been the wanted prey then, as the eggeaters didn’t hesitate to make a young hatchling their meal if they managed to catch one. During such an occasion Ozzy and Strut had been surprised by Chomper’s parents. Though they had escaped the furious sharpteeth then, they hadn’t ever dared to enter the vicinity of the Great Valley again. During the warm time dinosaur herds had often crossed the mountains or had even stayed here for a while, and Ozzy and Strut who knew nearly every square-centimeter of the nearby mountains in the meantime had made plenty enough prey. But now quite a while had passed already since a herd had come past the last time, and also the more settled saurians had moved on by and by, when the cold time hadn’t passed as usually.
Ozzy and Strut however still hadn’t made up their minds to move on, although there was hardly anything left to eat for them.
The mountains with their uncountable hiding places had been the best imaginable hunting ground they could find. Since then they had barely scraped by, by feeding on small lizards and other little animals whose burrows they located to surprise them in their winter sleep. Strut, who was not only far more simple than his brother, but also felt much less bound to eat just eggs and meat, had more ant more frequently satisfied his hunger at the numerous evergreen conifers, when he felt unobserved by his brother. And even Ozzy, who would have never tolerated his brother doing this, had sneaked to the conifers no and then to satisfy his hunger with this “nasty green stuff”, as he never got tired to call it with the uttermost scorn when his brother was around.
They had been sitting in the hindmost and warmest corner of the cave for the whole day and they hadn’t exchanged a single word so far. For many hours Ozzy killed the time with his favorite game, the only that was possible here at the time at all. He tried to hit stones with smaller stones he throw from ever increasing distances and as there hadn’t been any other occupation, except for sleeping and foraging for food, for what seemed like an eternity, it hardly ever happened that one of the stones missed its target.
Strut was struggling for a long time already to make up his mind and say something to his brother, but he didn’t really dare it, as he foresaw that one of Ozzy’s dreadful outbursts would be the result.
But Strut couldn’t stand the silence, that was interrupted only by the clicking of the stones, any longer. And so he took all his courage together and said: “Ozzy?”
Ozzy stopped throwing stones and turned his face to him.
“Ozzy I’m hungry”, wailed Strut who regretted it, almost the moment he uttered these words almost as quietly as he possibly could. But despite of that Ozzy had understood him very well. He whirled around furiously and shouted far louder than necessary: “And what do you expect me to do about it? I’m hungry too! I can’t conjure eggs you know!”
Even more discouraged than before Strut suggested: “We could go to the trees with the needles and...” Ozzy jumped at Strut, and Strut shrieked terrified.
“Like it wasn’t bad enough...”, thought Ozzy “...that he himself had already humiliated himself by eating this disgusting, nasty green stuff secretly. Why did his brother have to suggest that openly?”
“Shut up you grasseater! I’m really ashamed for having something like you in my family!” cried Ozzy angrily. Strut cowered up a bit and sighed quietly. “But what else can we eat?” Ozzy snorted furiously, but he didn’t give an answer. Finally he turned round and continued with his stone throwing game. Strut stood up quietly and went past Ozzy to the entrance of the cave. He had never really understood his brother’s abhorrence of plants.
No doubt an egg or a piece of meat was better, but Strut didn’t find the green stuff nearly as terrible as his brother always described it. And so long there was nothing else...
Strut walked a few steps out of the cave into the icy coldness. It was reviving to breathe fresh air again, for it was very stuffy in the cave, but it was also really chilly. Strut already wanted to turn back to return into the warmth of the cave, when he recognized some indistinct shapes climbing up a mountain not very far away.
“Ozzy come here!” called Strut into the cave.
“What’s up?” Ozzy asked irritated when he appeared in the cave’s entrance a few moments later. He still seemed to be angry.
“There are somebodies”, answered Strut and pointed at the shapes that stood out distinctly against the snowy slope of the mountain. Immediately Ozzy pushed past Strut.
“Where? Where is them?” Ozzy asked impatiently.
“Over there!” answered Strut pointing at the mountain slope.
Now Ozzy spotted them too. He shielded his eyes against the light with one hand and his eyes narrowed to thin slits.
“Those are very young”, he muttered. “Easy catches. But, but those are...” Ozzy whirled around to Strut. “It’s them!”
“Who?”
“This dreadful grasseaters we came across in that great valley and who nearly feed us to two sharpteeth!”
“Oh, are the sharpteeth with them?” Strut asked alarmed.
“Nope”, answered Ozzy, “Only the little one. And it appears that they got some addition.
It was only one longneck last time, wasn’t it?”
Strut nodded and said: “And when we wanted to throw him down the Great Wall the sharpteeth came.”
Ozzy gave an evil grin. “It may be time to finish the job today little brother! There are plenty enough steep walls around here. And who knows, perhaps the smaller of them are even edible.” Ozzy laughed and Strut joined in, though his laughter didn’t sound thoroughly convinced. Ozzy however became serious again quickly.
“Now come on Strut! They haven’t seen us so far, and sure enough they needn’t to.
They’re probably looking for a place to spend the night. From the mountain’s top they can certainly see our cave. They’ll come here, and we’ll be ready to give them a warm welcome!” Strut nodded eagerly.
“Now come on!” said Ozzy impatiently and ran off so quickly that Strut could hardly keep up with him.

Chapter XXXIV

The gloomy mood hadn’t passed. Littlefoot didn’t really understand the cause for it, but he noted that it had affected everyone. They were struggling up to the top of a very high mountain to, as Littlefoot had suggested, look out for a suitable sleeping place from up there. It was an exhausting climb through deep snow, although the mountain was not very steep. Ducky had taken seat on Spike’s back again, as the snow here lay higher than she could handle. Cera wasn’t exactly helping in terms of lifting their spirits.
“How do we know at all, that it is warmer in this direction? We are so long on the move since we’ve left the Great Valley, but still it is not any warmer.” Cera pulled a face.
“We’re nearly on the top”, said Littlefoot just to change the topic.
The sun was not far above the western horizon anymore, when they reached the rocky summit a short while later. The view from up there was great. The snowfields glistened and shone in blinding bright where the dwindling light of the sun fell onto them, while the every place in some mountain’s shade and the steep snow free slopes seemed to be very dark, almost black. If the mountains hadn’t blocked the sight in every direction Littlefoot had not been surprised if they had been able to see their parents from up here. Behind the mountains to their rear a column of black smoke rose to the sky and showed roughly the position of the valley they had left behind. Suddenly Ali jumped up and stared at the horizon. “What’s the matter Ali?” Littlefoot asked surprised. “Over there! Do you see it too?”

Nobody knew what Ali meant. “Do you mean the rainbow?” Ducky asked finally.
Far ahead in the direction in which the sun had its highest stand during the day, dark clouds had gathered and when they looked carefully they could recognize a colorful rainbow that vaulted from the clouds down to the earth.
Ali nodded. “Yes, of course I mean it.”
“And what’s so special about it?” Cera asked irritated.
“Did you ever see a rainbow without rain?”
“Yes! Two even, at the waterfall in front of the cave to the land of mists.”
Ali rolled her eyes impatiently. “Yes, but there was water in the air too.”
Chomper seemed to understand suddenly what Ali was aiming at.
“You mean...” Ali nodded again. “Exactly.”
“Would you mind telling us what’s up?” Cera required angrily.
“If you’ve never seen a rainbow without water in the air, and if you now see a rainbow over there, what does that mean to you?”
“That there’s bad weather ahead?” Cera asked bored.
Petrie suddenly jumped up and fell down from Littlefoot’s head where he had sat so far.
It seemed he too had picked up the point.
“That it is raining over there!” said Ali, and now it was her who sounded impatiently.
“And if there’s rain over there, then it means that it has to be warmer over there.”
Nobody spoke for a moment. Then Ducky uttered an exulting cry, jumped on a small boulder that towered out of the snow aside Spike and hugged her “little brother” as far as possible. Petrie made his way out of the snow into which he had dropped and flew in circles and loops on the sky until he was done up and landed on Littlefoot’s head again. Littlefoot embraced Ali and Cera romped wildly around in the snow with Spike, forgetting all about her previous defeatism. The low spirits were gone without leaving a trace. Ducky and Chomper formed snowballs out of the snow. “Didn’t you say you don’t believe that it is warmer over there”, called Ducky to Cera and the next moment her snowball burst asunder at Cera’s horn.
“Hey! Watch it!” called Cera and swept a charge of snow at Ducky and Chomper with a movement of one of her forelegs. Chomper lost his balance and fell. Standing up he hurled a snowball at Cera. But this time Cera was prepared. She stepped aside and Chomper’s snowball hit Spike. Spike wanted to sweep snow at Chomper like Cera had done, but he hit Littlefoot and Ali. The snowball fight was in full progress and it took a while until everybody was fed up with it and looked out for a resting place.
“There! Over there!” called Ducky and pointed at a shady place at the snow-free slope of a mountain nearby. When they looked carefully they recognized a dark hole in the rocky wall, the entrance of a cave. “Perfect!” called Littlefoot. “Could it possibly be any better?”


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Thank you for your responses :)
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Chapter XXXV

A narrow rocky ledge that ran along an extremely steep slope seemed to be the only way to the cave. A short distance before the cave it made a bend around a high and steep ridge that blocked the sight ahead. They set off for the cave in good spirits and as their way ran along the almost free of snow leeward side of a steep mountain they got on quickly. The way made several turns around rocky projections and they hoped to see the cave every time they walked around a bend. Behind the big mountain ridge the rocky ledge, that had been so narrow so far, that only two of them could walk side by side, broadened. This sure was a benefit, as they had cast uneasy looks down the all too close steep slope to their right till now. Now the way broadened to a big open place. Big boulders lay around along on the left side that bordered to  steep rocky walls. As they crossed the place Cera eyed the boulders worried and said:
“Look out. It seems that there falling rocks around here very often. That’s very dangerous.” “Here are some more things dangerous for you!” a voice said suddenly from behind a big boulder in front of them where the place narrowed to a thinner rocky ledge again.
They all startled and from behind the boulder Ozzy stepped forward laughing maliciously. “The eggeater!” shouted Ducky terrified pointing at Ozzy. They all whirled around, but Strut had appeared from behind a rock nearby the point where the way began to broaden.
He cut their only escape route.
“Oh no!” shrieked Petrie, “The eggeaters!”
“Are that...”, Ali asked Littlefoot quietly and he nodded already before she had finished.
“The eggeaters. The very same we met when we came to know Chomper.”
Not only Littlefoot, but also each of the others had become pale. Ozzy had understood Littlefoot’s words and nodded now. “So you recognize us after such a long time. By the way it is not very polite to let old acquaintances wait so long. I already thought that you had seen Strut and wouldn’t come anymore at all.”
He grinned spitefully and went slowly some steps towards Littlefoot and Ali, who fell back from him instinctively. The grinning in Ozzy’s face became even more maliciously, as far as this was possible at all. Suddenly Littlefoot bumped into Spike who had fallen back from Strut, who approached from the other side. Cera looked at Ozzy challenging and pawed over the ground with one of her hooves, but when Strut came nearer and nearer from the other side and when all of the others had already fallen back to the rocky wall she lost her courage too and retreated back to the others. Ozzy laughed sneering and Cera seemed to take this as a personal insult. Ali and Spike had to stop her from trying to attack Ozzy inconsiderately.
She wouldn’t have a chance against the eggeater who was more than thrice as tall as she was. The eggeaters still came nearer, while they couldn’t retreat any further, with the rocky wall in their back. Strut made an imitation of Ozzy’s grin, that seemed pitiable compared to his brother’s grin, but nothing less mean. Ozzy enjoyed the triumph. He let his eyes travel from one to the next and took pleasure in the fear he saw.
“Ozzy?” asked Strut. “What is it?” “What are we doing with them now?”
Ozzy gave him a look that seemed to say: “Is that not clear you fool?”
But still Ozzy deigned to spell it out for his brother.
“Didn’t you listened to me before? We had to flee from the valley because of them, from the valley where there would have been enough eggs to feed us forever. Because of them we nearly burned in a torrent of lava! They spoiled at least a dozen meals for us! They’ve nearly fed us to two grownup sharpteeth and because of this miniature of a sharptooth...”, he pointed at Chomper, “...or rather because of his mere shadow we’ve even jumped down a steep rock. Gee, I still haven’t forgotten about all the bumps and bruises it earned us. We’ll simply throw them down there.” He pointed over his shoulder at the abyss behind him. “Right here it is even higher and steeper than the Great Wall in the valley was.”
Littlefoot and his friends became even paler than they had been already.
“But who knows”, Ozzy continued and eyed Ducky and Petrie who tried to hide from his look behind their bigger friends. “Maybe some of them are even eatable.”
Petrie ducked down behind Cera’s neckshield and Ducky’s face became nearly white as snow. Ozzy looked at the others cursory. “Don’t you think that I let myself be eaten by you that easily you stinky eggrobber!” growled Cera. Littlefoot who had to strain already to breathe admired her courage. “You think we’re asking for your permission?” answered Ozzy and laughed shortly about his own joke. “But don’t you worry. We’ll just throw you down there.” He pointed at Cera, Littlefoot, Spike and Ali and then again over his shoulder at the abyss. “You’re already too big and too tough to be eaten. Me and Strut are no sharpteeth.”
By his last words he turned to Chomper. And he really became radiant with malicious joy when he stepped towards him. “Speaking of sharpteeth, you’ve grown since we met last time.”
“While you haven’t changed at all”, answered Chomper with bitter sarcasm. Ozzy guffawed before he answered: “And you’ve even got the hang of speaking! I never heard of a speaking sharptooth, but you seem to be half a grasseater anyway.”
“I am not!” said Chomper and it should sound threatening, but he spoke quietly and it sounded nearly sorrowfully. “Then you probably would like to be one”, answered Ozzy and cast a short look glimpse at Strut who stood behind him grinning silly and making sure that nobody could flee. “I think that you would get on well with my brother. Sometimes I’ve the impression that he would like to be a leafeater too.” Ozzy pulled a disgusted face and said scornfully: “You’ve simply no pride!”
“But Ozzy! How can you say that?” Strut asked insulted. Ozzy made only a disdainful movement with his hand and turned to Chomper again without deigning to look at his brother. “You...”, said Ozzy threatening, “...have nearly fed us to your parents! Usually I don’t eat anything of your size, but in your case I’ll make an exception!”
And Ozzy stepped directly to Chomper and bent down to him laughing.
What followed happened so quickly that everybody had only vague memories to these instants later. Two claws of one of Chomper’s hands flashed in the evening sun when he raised one arm and slashed at Ozzy’s nose within few split seconds. Ozzy had not expected this. Chomper’s claws left two deep, bleeding scratches on Ozzy’s nose and the eggeater jumped back howling, and pressing both hands firmly on his injured nose.
“Run!” cried Chomper and rushed past Ozzy who was completely busy with his nose for the moment. Cera reacted immediately. Uttering a shrill whoop and lowering her head threateningly, she rushed at Strut who seemed to be even more surprised than his brother.
Ali and Littlefoot followed right behind Cera. With an inelegant hop Strut avoided Cera and she ran past him. Petrie, who had fallen from Cera’s head when she had suddenly rushed forward, jumped up from the ground and soared vertically up into the air. “Stop them!” shrieked Ozzy at the top of his voice and glared over his hands, he still pressed onto his nose, at his brother furiously. Spike with Ducky on his back was trying to get past Strut.
Strut decided, that the fury of his brother was for sure worse than everything this little leafeaters could inflict on him, and he jumped into Spike’s way. Spike cried out frightened when Strut stood right in front of him suddenly, but he reacted with a presence of mind he didn’t show very often. With an adroitly turn he evaded Strut’s foot, slipped through between the eggeater’s legs before this could even react and ran on. But Ducky hadn’t been prepared for Spike’s sudden movement, had fallen down from his back and had tumbled onto the ground heavily. She propped up on her palms and cried after Spike in panic:
“Spiky! Wait for me! Spike!”
But he was already too far away to hear her. She was too slow to flee from the eggeaters, one of which stood directly above her. She ran forward as fast as she could, but she had barely done a few steps when two big hands closed around her and lifted her up from the ground. Ducky closed her eyes firmly. What would these eggeaters do with her now? She trembled but in spite of her fear she blinked carefully. The eggeater who had jumped into Spike’s way held her clenched in one hand, and the other one, the one whom Chomper had scratched the nose, approached. He nearly seemed to burst with fury and yelled at the other eggeater angrily. “Why did you let them escape?” The other eggeater answered audibly intimidated. “But Ozzy, they didn’t all escape.”
And he handed Ducky over to the eggeater with the bloody nose. Ducky thought her heart would stop beating when he snatched at her and held her with two fingers in front of his face eyeing her derogatory.
“And that’s all?” he scolded. “We had all this grasseaters in our hand and they escaped only because of you!” Ducky saw that the other eggeater twitched by his brother’s words as if he would beat him. The eggeater with the scratched nose dealt the other one a lash with his tail and focused his attention to Ducky again.
“That’s at most only a snack”, he growled. “Hardly enough for me alone.”
And he held Ducky only a tiny distance from his face. “I’ll faint”, thought Ducky.
But then she heard the eggeater, who had more or less found back to his malicious grinning, saying: “It seems like your friends forsook you.”
Ducky had mortal fear but the words of the eggeater drove her mad.
“That’s not true!” she cried. “They’ll never forsake me!”
And then she kicked, without thinking about it, against Ozzy’s bloody nose as violently as she could. The eggeater howled again and pressed his hands on his nose whereby he let Ducky simply drop. Ducky fell hard on the ground and she got a blackout for a moment.
“I must get away from here!” she thought. “Maybe I can escape. And if I don’t...”, she didn’t pursue the though to the end. Ducky got up and reeled some steps forward. But the next moment somebody dealt her a push, she fell forward and felt how the hand of one of the eggeaters closed around her again.
“I got her Ozzy!” the eggeater called to the one with the bleeding nose triumphing, “I caught her again!”
Ozzy rubbed over his nose with one hand and growled: “If you had let her escape too now...”
There was a throbbing feeling in Ducky’s head. Again and again a black veil seemed to lay over her eyes when she lost her consciousness for some seconds. She heard the words of the eggeaters only indistinctly and didn’t get the sense of the words. She tried with all her will to withstand the unconsciousness.
Strut knew that his brother would probably punish him for letting the kids escape. Strut didn’t think that it was only his fault, but he didn’t dare to say that, otherwise Ozzy would probably explode with rage. Now it was essential to get on good terms with his brother and suddenly Strut had an idea that would, if it worked, probably conciliate Ozzy.
“Give her to me! She is mine!” growled Ozzy and drove his palm over his aching nose again  sucking air in between his teeth hissing.
“Wait Ozzy I have and idea.”
“What?” hissed Ozzy impatiently.
“Didn’t you hear what she just said?”
“That’s all the same to me!” said Ozzy furiously, “Hand her over!” He prepared to deal his brother another lash with his tail.
“She said her friends would never forsake her”, said Strut hasty.
“So what?” roared Ozzy and tried to snatch Ducky from his brother who could only just pull back his hands. “We just have to keep her and when the others come to free her...”
Strut didn’t have to say anything more. Ozzy’s mien brightened from one second to the next and he even seemed to forget about his aching nose.
“That’s it!” he shouted, “A great idea!” Ozzy ran towards his brother and seemed to want to embrace him. In the last moment he stopped and said with an severe tone again:
“Come! We go back!”
With that he turned round and went back the way to the cave. Strut, who held Ducky clutched in one hand, followed him. Ducky in her semiconscious state hadn’t understood the talk of the two eggsnatchers but when she looked up now to the darkening sky she saw a tiny shape that detached from the rocks and flapped away. Ducky looked after Petrie as long as possible and the serious her situation was, it was still a comforting thought that her friends would do everything to get her out.


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Quite well written and an interesting place to stop.  If it were on tv that would be a good place for a commercial.


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I'm sorry, I forgot about the cliff hanging ;)
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Chapter XXXVI

Spike had run as quick as he could. He didn’t dare to look back to revise check if he was pursued. The one eggeater had missed to catch him by a hair and Spike preferred not to think over what they would have done with him. After a while, he had reached a pretty narrow part of the way in the meantime, he listened back and didn’t hear anything, so he was probably not pursued. He ran some more steps, stopped then and turned round. There was really nobody behind him and Spike uttered a sigh of relief. Unfortunately there was nobody in front of him either; he had lost his friends out of sight already shortly after the beginning of their flight. Where might they be? Suddenly anything grasped him and pulled tore him back. Spike cried frightened and tried to run away but somebody held him firmly he felt how he was pulled over the edge of the rocky path, fell a surprisingly low distance and how a big hand lay over his mouth the next moment. “Quiet Spike! Be completely quiet!” Spike closed his eyes with relief for some seconds and breathed deeply when he heard Littlefoot’s voice. When he opened his eyes again he shuffled Cera’s hand from his mouth and then he looked around. Not only Littlefoot and Cera, but also Chomper and Ali were there. They stood on a small rocky projection that was just big enough for all of them. It was only a short distance below the rocky path and it was an ideal hiding place. “But if they would discover us nevertheless...”, Spike thought with discomfort, “...then we would have no possibility to flee anymore.”
“Are they after you?” Ali whispered worriedly. Spike shrugged and made a movement with his head that could mean nearly everything. “Chomper has discovered this hiding place on the way to the cave”, Littlefoot murmured to Spike. “Mum!” Cera hissed angry, “Or they’ll here us when they come.” Minutes passed without any noise. The sun cast her last beams over the mountain’s tops and the cutting coldness of the night set in when Littlefoot uttered a sigh of relief and said: “They don’t come. Not today.” He grinned to them confidently and to Chomper he said: “That was great Chomper! This repugnant eggeater surely hasn’t expected that. For sure his nose is still hurting.” But Chomper didn’t chime in the following laughter. Instead he starred at Spike and asked frightened: “Where is Ducky? Wasn’t she with you? And where’s Petrie?” Spike dislocated his head and looked at his back. First now he noted Ducky’s missing absence and he howled up loudly. “Hist!” hissed Cera and laid one hand over his mouth hasty again. “Maybe they are still nearby and they mustn’t hear us.” “Perhaps she has escaped too”, Littlefoot tried to console Spike whose eyes were full of tears. “When have you seen her the last time?” Spike shook only his head, shrugged, shoved Cera’s hand aside and sobbed on a bit quieter. “And if she hasn’t escaped?” Ali asked quietly. Uneasy silence that was only interrupted by Spikes sobbing was the answer. “And Petrie?” asked Chomper, “What’s about him?” “Petrie alright”, answered a croaking voice and the little flyer landed on Littlefoot’s head. “You’re there!” said Cera relieved. “A piece of luck!” “Yes, but what’s about Ducky? Have you seen her Petrie?” Littlefoot asked immediately. Petrie nodded slowly and moved to and fro with discomfort. The others could really read the bad news from his face. Spike who had stopped sobbing looked at Petrie imploring. “They’ve caught her?” Ali asked dull and Petrie nodded. “Have they eaten her?” asked Chomper and was minded by the others with disapproving looks when Spike’s sobbing restarted. But Petrie shook his head for everybody’s relief. “No, but they’ve taken her along”, croaked Petrie. Littlefoot groaned. “Have you seen where they’ve brought her?” he asked. “To the cave Petrie thinks.
Eggeaters dwell there probably.” Cera moaned. “And just there we wanted to stay over the night.” “And now these scoundrels have Ducky”, said Ali. Chomper quieted his voice a bit so Spike couldn’t hear him and said: “Why haven’t they eaten Ducky immediately? It is usually not their behaviour to trifle long when they have their prey.” “It’s all the same”, said Ali angrily. “We should be glad that they wait this time.” “It is to be hoped that they not only want into their cave to...”, Cera shivered and didn’t continue. “However”, said Littlefoot loudly, “We must her out there!” And he had spoken so confidently that even Spike stopped crying. “And how shall we get her out there?” asked Chomper who wasn’t inspired so much by Littlefoot’s enthusiasm. “There is some shaky about it. Why haven’t they immediately...” “Then stay here!” Ali called furiously. “If you don’t dare it we’ll free Ducky alone!” Chomper gritted his teeth. He had to gather all his willpower not to pounce at Ali.
Littlefoot stepped between them hasty. “For a while they’ve seemed to gotten on well with each other”, he thought sadly, but now the cleft between them had opened again.
Littlefoot changed the topic. “Petrie”, he made a short break. “We must know how it looks into the cave, where Ducky is and how she is.” “You don’t mean Petrie...”, gasped the tiny flyer. But Littlefoot nodded for Petrie’s big horror. “You are the smallest of us and won’t attract the eggeaters attention so much. Besides you can fly and so escape faster in an emergency.” Petrie opened and closed his beak as if he wanted to say anything but had struck dumb with horror suddenly. “Think of Ducky...”, said Cera, “...who sits in the cave of this stinky eggsnatchers now and doesn’t know what she shall do. If she sees you, then she knows that we’ll get her out there.”
“I hope so”, growled Chomper quietly.
Thinking of Ducky Petrie couldn’t do anything but nodding also his heart beat up to his throat. “Petrie is flys”, he said quietly and he already wanted to flap away when Littlefoot kept him back once more.
“Wait. We’ll stay here nearby, so you know where you can find us. Be back when the bright circle rises. If you get the possibility to speak with Ducky, then tell her that we’ll come.
And Petrie?”
“Yes?”
“Be careful! Please take care for yourself!” Petrie nodded, cast a short look at everybody and disappeared with a few quick flaps in the darkness that set in more and more now. The others looked after him in uncomfortable silence for a while until Cera said finally: “Come; we can’t do anything now. We should rest. Tomorrow might be tougher than today.”
“Even tougher?” Chomper gasped at this dreadful prospect.
“You’re right Cera. Come on!” said Littlefoot. They climbed up onto the rocky path again, lay down nearby at a spot where the path broadened a bit and where the rocky walls sheltered them against the cold winds on three sides. They all fell asleep within a few instants.

Chapter XXXVII

The sun just disappeared behind the mountains when the two eggeaters with Ducky reached the cave. That with the scratched nose was still in a bad mood and the other one didn’t seem to dare to utter a sound. Ducky had understood meanwhile who of them was the leader. She had recovered her senses completely in the meantime, but that had not bettered her mood. She had stomachaches and had to grit her teeth to prevent her bill chattering. She was hot although it was very cold and since before she had not offered resistance anymore. In the cave they entered now it was dim, stuffy and relatively warm. “Ozzy?” asked the eggeater who had carried Ducky all the time after, some moments of silence. The one with the scratched nose muttered anything what seemed to mean that he was listening. “What are we doing to prevent her running away?” He lifted the fist in which he held Ducky. “Hand her over!” “But you don’t want to eat her alone, do you?” “No! Not yet. But she is mine, for the others escaped only because of you. And now hand her over at once!” Strut didn’t dare to contradict and handed Ducky over to Ozzy who snatched her so crudely that she gasped for breath fiercely. Ozzy put her down roughly and seized a big stone that lay nearby. When Ducky felt that nobody held her anymore she jumped up and wanted to run away but Ozzy swept her from her feet with an incidentally movement of his hand whereby he uttered an unwillingly grunt. Ducky didn’t undertake another attempt to escape. Ozzy had put her down at one of the walls of the cave and now he pushed some big stones around her, so close together that she didn’t fit through between them and when he had laid stones all around Ducky he pat at last a big, heavy and flat stone like a roof atop the others so Ducky couldn’t climb over the stones. The stones were far too heavy for Ducky to shove them aside and even if she had been able to do so the big flagstone that lay atop would have fallen onto her. Pleased Ozzy eyed his work.
“She won’t run away Strut”, he said. “We can grab some shut eye for a while.” “But I’m hungry Ozzy!” Strut prattled away, but the conniption he expected the next moment stayed away. “The meal will come early enough Strut. Good night.” And with that he lay down.
Strut did the same and soon after the loud snorting of the both two raptors filled the cave. Ducky however couldn’t sleep in her narrow prison. Not only the loud rising and going down snorting prevent her from sleeping, but also the angst. Along with her friends she was never unsure what to do in dangerous situations, but now she was alone and completely helpless. She sat drew her legs, clasped her knees, lay her head on her knee and felt how tears were running down her face.

Chapter XXXVIII

Petrie’s heart beat so fiercely that he nearly wondered not to be precipitated during the flight to the cave. He circled for a moment above the caves entrance and looked round for the eggeaters, but they were nowhere in sight. As quietly as he could Petrie landed in front of the cave and listened. Loud snorting was audible from the cave, which could actually come only from the eggeaters, but still it didn’t calm Petrie at all. He hesitated long. What if it was a trap? If the eggeaters would suddenly pounce upon him in the cave, then he would probably not be able to fly away in time. Petrie heard his own heart beating so loudly that he wondered that the eggeaters hadn’t aroused by it already for long. Finally it was the thought of Ducky that propelled him to go on. Ducked he sneaked forward, ready to fly away at the slightest movement in the darkness. A warm puff touched him slightly but this was rather unpleasant in the stuffy air here; he didn’t take notice of it. Petrie’s eyes accustomed only slowly to the gloomy twilight in the cave and when he was finally able to recognize something his heart seemed to stop beating with fear. Petrie had nearly screamed with fright, but fortunately he was like being paralyzed for the moment. Directly in front of him lay one of the eggeaters.
If he had advanced only one or two steps further into the darkness then he would have run directly into his nose that had two deep scratches. Only slowly the feeling returned to Petrie’s body and he breathed the stuffy air only as quietly as possible. The warm puff he had felt before had been the breathing out of this eggeater. Petrie felt as if his legs would gave in below him the next moment. He went some steps backwards without letting the eggeater out of sight, turned round then and ran as fast and as quietly as he could back to the cave’s entrance. There he leaned at against the wall and let himself sink down along it until he sat on the ground. Petrie wiped with one of his wings over his face and fetched deep breath of the cutting cold night-air that was very pleasant after the stuffy air in the cave. Then Ducky came to his mind again. He hadn’t discovered her anywhere, but he also hadn’t looked around carefully in the cave. The much it displeased him, he had to go back into the cave and check it more carefully. He got up reluctantly and sneaked back even more carefully than before. Avoiding the eggeater he had nearly run into before Petrie discovered the other one.
But Ducky was nowhere in sight. Petrie superseded the terrible thoughts that came to his mind as good as he could. At least the eggeaters seemed to have a very sound sleep, thought Petrie. Their snorting drowned out his heart beating for sure. Petrie listened for a moment and suddenly he heard something in addition to the snorting. A quiet sobbing was audible from the other cave-wall. For a moment Petrie forgot all prudence. He ran as fast as he could to the other cave-wall, tripped midway over a stone and could hardly suppress a cry of pain. But nevertheless Petrie had made too much noise for his own liking. Fortunately the eggeaters slept on calmly, but the sobbing Petrie had heard had fallen silent. Petrie stood up quietly and looked around, but nowhere he could discover Ducky. Had he erred and only imagined the sobbing? Quietly he fumbled to the cave-wall, but without discovering anything. Gathering all his courage Petrie whispered: “Ducky?” For a moment everything was quiet but then somebody answered: “Petrie. Is that you?” The answer had been so loudly that Petrie looked back to the eggeaters worried. “Yes” he whispered back accented quiet.
“Where are you?” “Here Petrie. Behind the stones.” Petrie had followed Ducky’s voice and now he stood in front of some big stones that lay in front of the cave-wall in a narrow semicircle and above which a big flagstone lay. “Ducky?” asked Petrie quietly, “Are you in there?” And he stepped in front of one of the narrow gaps between the stones. Ducky’s face appeared the next moment from the darkness behind the stones. She was a bit pale, thought Petrie, but apart from that everything seemed to be all right with her and she was visibly glad to see him. “Petrie!” Ducky called so loud that Petrie jerked frightened. “You don’t speak so loudly Ducky!” whispered Petrie. “Or the eggeaters wake up!” Petrie had hardly finished when that eggeater with the scratched nose, whose outline stood out clearly against the moonlight that fell in through the cave’s entrance, began to stir. Petrie couldn’t suppress a quiet cry of fright when he jerked round and fell back while he looked around for a hiding place feverishly. Suddenly he touched the stones behind which Ducky was, with his back. Immediately Ducky grasped Petrie and pulled him, who only just fit through between the stones, inside to herself. Both kept their breath, but the eggeater didn’t stir anymore. Apparently he hadn’t woken up, but had only turned round in his sleep. After a while Ducky uttered a sigh of relief: “He has not woken up”, she said this time very quietly. Then she cast a long look at Petrie and hugged him so fiercely that he nearly couldn’t breathe anymore. “You are there! Oh yes, you are!” said Ducky. “You’re real friends, you and the others. Are they there too?” Petrie freed himself with gentle violence out of Ducky’s hug and shook his head slightly. “Not yet Ducky. We are going to get you out here tomorrow.” Ducky who apparently could hardly await it nodded slightly grieved. “Those bad guys haven’t hurt you Ducky?” Petrie inquired concerned. Ducky shook her head. “No, no, no. Not really”, she said. “And I don’t know why. They simply could have eaten me, oh yes”, she said shuddering. “Strangely”, said Petrie reflecting. “They are usually supposed to be greedy.” “Well, I do not object this, no, no, no”, Ducky said slightly offended and more anxiously again she continued.
“Maybe they were just not hungry. Please hurry tomorrow!” “Of course! Me now fly back to Littlefoot and the others. We’ll come!” Petrie already wanted to press through the gap between the stones when Ducky kept him back. “Wait Petrie! Stay here! Please!” Petrie looked at her asking. “I... I’m afraid alone with them!” Ducky said quietly. Petrie hesitated. He would have preferred to do anything than to stay longer in this creepily cave with the eggeaters, but the thought of Ducky who would have to stay the whole night alone here, if he wouldn’t stay, made him a bad conscience. He nodded and turned away from the gap between the stones. “Me stay here till you sleep”, he said. “And tomorrow me will come back with the others and we’ll get you out there!” Ducky smiled. She was not as confidently as Petrie, but his words encouraged her. She lay down and Petrie sat aside her.
He watched Ducky carefully to see when she had fallen asleep. While he sat there without anything to do the whole tiredness of the strenuous day came over him and before he could prevent it he had sitting, without sinking down fallen into a pleasant sleep.


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Read it a day or so ago, forgot to post a reply.

It does seem well written, though a word here or there does seem an odd choice.  It is nice to read something it is pure LBT.


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I'm sorry I forgot to continue posting the next chapters. Sometimes it feels strange rereading what I wrote back then, and even stuff I wrote much more recently. The language always seems to change and at the time I wrote this story very often I translated German phrases way too literal which I'm afraid may cause some confusion. Please don't be shy to ask if there is anything that is not understandable. You are really helping me by spotting such passages. I always meant to reread the whole story and correct the mistakes, but due to their number this would mean pretty much rewriting the story ;)
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