Forgotten Friends - LBT Comic

[Sky]

Hmm? Don't know what you mean.  :unsure:

-UPDATE-
Page 12

I'm kinda having problems with speechbubbles... =/

[Malte279]

Looks like Sky has yet to get used to the idea of hanging out with a sharptooth

it looks good, but who is that sky?

Sky is not a character from the movies but a character made up by Sky (our fellow member and artist).

I'm kinda having problems with speechbubbles... =/

What kind of problems?
Maybe you can try drawing a comic without speechbubbles? You know the comics of "Prinz Eisenherz" (English "Prince Valiant")? They are doing fine without speechbubbles, but this is of course just a suggestion and I don't know how well the design of Prinz Eisenherz comics could be transferred to your LBT comic.

[Kor]

What sort of problems do you see yourself having with speech balloons?

I enjoyed reading the page.  Normal folks would likely react differently to Chomper then those use to him.  The gang could have forgotten that others may react to Chomper differently then them since they are use to him.

[The Chronicler]

I'm guessing the problem you're having with the speech bubbles is that you can't fit in all the words into one bubble, so you have to make more in order to put in all the words. Am I correct on this? Anyway, good work as always.

[Sky]

@The Chronicler
That's right. Though, I write the dialogs first before I draw. But still...

[Kor]

The only other option I can think of is either continue with the word balloons like usual, or do it in more of the Prince Valiant fashion (and Flash Gordon did it for a while too) where the text is at the bottom under the picture.

[kjeldo]

@sky well, i'm ask who sky is, someone of your imagination?

[Sky]

@kjeldo
Yep, you could say that. =)

[Kor]

And one drawn well.

[Sky]

Updating with Page 13

Enjoy.  :^.^:

[Kor]

Nice page, and an understandable reaction from someone living in that world (I'll not say what since folks will then have to read the page to see).  I liked the expressions on the character's faces.  You could see the emotions on their faces.  

Nice avatar, especially like the added in glasses and pencil behind one ear.


For those new members who may not have read your comic from the start, is there a page that has the pages linked?

[Malte279]

Thank you for the page Sky!
You sure have a more proper way of apologizing for an April fools prank that didn't cause as much distress as ours did
I'm really looking forward to see how the story goes on
I have a few critical comments too, and I'm almost certain you will respond to them by claiming to be lazier than you prove yourself to be all the time by creating this comic
What I mean is the missing of any of the other characters (save Littlefoot and Cera) on this page. Cera of all characters might be particularly understanding for Sky's concerns about Chomper. Maybe there could have been a few more attempts to convince Sky of Chomper's good nature as Sky didn't just cut and run (as some others might have).

[Kor]

We've not seen the next page.  Littlefoot may run up to catch up to him and talk to him.  Cera likely would not run after him to try to talk to him.  She'd figure, his loss if he doesn't want to get to know Chomper.

[Sky]

Ah yes. I am lazy. ^^
But this page was more "rushed" D=
I just started this page 2 days ago as april fools day is coming closer. I wanted to put this page up as a little excuse for the prank. o.O

And the next page will
[size0](hopefully) explain why Sky just went off.  :^.^:

[Nimrod]

The expression of Sky is amazing. You are very good and I enjoyed it to read the page.  

[Chiletrek]

Hello:
 I agree with Nimrod, Sky's face expression is awesome and really shows that he has some background story, I look forward to see more .