Poke player:
It makes me glad that you truly did appreciate that story I wrote.
But I wanted this to have a beginning and an ending to it. Not just have it be a "Slam! Bam! Thank you, Ma'am!!" type of story you'd see in a porno film or read about in a nudie magazine. (To the admins, if such language is not allowed on this board, my sincere apologies!). I wanted a level of intimacy that was befitting of two characters who, deep down, care for each other very much.
To put it into perspective, though, I'd say Topsy must've had some sort of talk about "the birds and the bees" with Cera; but just like anything else, you never really learn unless you try it.
Keep in mind, though, that Cera is 10 seasons older than Chomper in my fanfics(it makes sense because, in the cartoons, Cera's the oldest of the gang; and Chomper is the youngest.) Yet, oddly enough, Chomper has been"intimate" with V'leck many times, while Cera's obviously never been mated to a male of any kind before she did what she did with Chomper. She saw Chomper as the young, strong male who was capable of teaching her this "great secret of togetherness" in a "we may die tomorrow" scenario.
I wanted Chomper to refuse, at first, thinking that it wasn't right; and then let Cera talk "sense" into him. At the time, they still haven't found the cure to the Bloody Tummy disease; and Cera wanted to experience this "cardinal sin" before they got sick themselves and moved into The Great Beyond.
You say you know of sites that would love to have me put my story up for all to see? Well, you can email me the links at lbelley34@hotmail.com.
But I want this to be a morality story, not just a "Hey! Come check out my porn flick!!" type of story. I'd like it to teach those old enough to read it something like "this is what procreation/love making is all about." or "don't do this until you're married" or "only do it you love the guy/girl you're with enough to be this intimate with them, and you're mature enough to handle it, and the consequences involved."
THAT's the kind of mark I want this story to leave with people!
BTW, since I have no idea who "Shorty" is, I can't tell you if he and Cera would make the ideal couple or not.
Daddytops:
Yeah! I got your mature story "effort", read it, and replied to it.
I could've sworn I've sent you mine, though. It was .doc file. Do I have to send it to you again?
Peace and long life!
Live long and prosper!
